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WORKSHEET: Please reply to each question below, writing in complete sentences and
providing justification or explanation for each response.
1. Does the writer catch your attention and clearly convey a clear purpose in the
introduction? If so, what strategies did he or she use to accomplish this? If not, what
suggestions can you provide to strengthen the introduction and clarify the purpose?
Yes. The writer catches my attention and conveys a clear purpose in the introduction. He
uses facts, figures and a citation to support his statement that Wal-Mart is among the largest
companies in America. He also catches my attention in that he makes me curious to know
why he thinks Wal-Mart is so bad yet so successful.
2. What is the writer’s thesis? What unique angle on the topic does the thesis present? What
suggestions can you offer for improving the wording of the thesis?
The writer’s thesis talks of how Wal-Mart has transformed the way Americans shop, the
local economy and the landscape through offering products for relatively low prices which
has...
