Essay Three Outline Chart Important: ​You are required to structure your essay using the outline below. The final draft of your essay should be developed from this outline using full paragraphs like any traditional essay. Introduction Hook that grabs the reader’s interest and introduces the essay topic. Define “intrinsic” and “extrinsic” motivation ● • • See​ ​“Intrinsic versus Extrinsic Motivation--What’s the Difference?”​. Illustrate “intrinsic” and “extrinsic” motivation with your own personal example of each one. 1 transition sentence that credits Kotler’s book (by his full author name and title) and introduces the topic of flow states and the perspective of extreme sport athletes. In Your Thesis ​answer the following question ​in one sentence: Identify ​two examples from Mandy-Rae Cruickshank, Jeremy Jones, and / or Travis Rice’s flow experiences​ (​Rise of Superman) ​and argue that they illustrate how feeling intrinsically (rather than extrinsically) motivated increases the athletes’ success and happiness levels. Body Paragraph One: Topic Sentence: Restate the first thesis example of a specific athlete’s flow experiences and how it illustrates how feeling intrinsically (rather than extrinsically) motivated increases that athletes’ success and happiness levels. Example from readings Provide a quotation in MLA format. Reduce to 4 lines if longer using ellipses. Less than 4 lines: Kotler​ writes, “XX” (35). Choose from reading list: ● Happiness Lab ​Season 1, Episode 10 podcast “Making the Grade”​ with Dr. Laurie Santos (audio or transcript) ● Alfie Kohn’s​ ​“Rewards are Still Bad News (25 Years Later)” Your quotation: Explain what the quotation is saying in detail in your own words. Aim for 4-5 or more sentences. First example from Mandy-Rae Cruickshank, Jeremy Jones, and / or Travis Rice’s flow experiences: Provide a quotation in MLA format. Reduce to 4 lines if longer using ellipses. Less than 4 lines: Kotler​ writes, “XX” (35). Explain what the quotation is saying in detail in your own words. Aim for 4-5 or more sentences. Argument: How does your chosen athlete’s flow experience show that feeling intrinsically (rather than extrinsically) motivated increases that athletes’ success and happiness levels? Important: ​Go beyond merely restating your thesis idea. Argue for it by providing a deeper analysis of reasoning and significations of your main idea. Add a concluding sentence reminding the reader of how your examples support your topic sentence claim. Should look similar to topic sentence but be more detailed. Body Paragraph Two Topic Sentence: Restate the second thesis example of a specific athlete’s flow experiences and how it illustrates how feeling intrinsically (rather than extrinsically) motivated increases that athletes’ success and happiness levels. Example from readings Provide a quotation in MLA format. Reduce to 4 lines if longer using ellipses. Less than 4 lines: Kotler​ writes, “XX” (35). Choose from reading list: ● • Happiness Lab ​Season 1, Episode 10 podcast​ ​“Making the Grade”​ with Dr. Laurie Santos (audio or transcript) ● • Alfie Kohn’s​ ​“Rewards are Still Bad News (25 Years Later)” Your quotation: Explain what the quotation is saying in detail in your own words. Aim for 4-5 or more sentences. Second example from Mandy-Rae Cruickshank, Jeremy Jones, and / or Travis Rice’s flow experiences: Provide a quotation in MLA format. Reduce to 4 lines if longer using ellipses. Less than 4 lines: Kotler​ writes, “XX” (35). Explain what the quotation is saying in detail in your own words. Aim for 4-5 or more sentences. Argument: How does your chosen athlete’s flow experience show that feeling intrinsically (rather than extrinsically) motivated increases that athletes’ success and happiness levels? Important: ​Go beyond merely restating your thesis idea. Argue for it by providing a deeper analysis of reasoning and significations of your main idea. Add a concluding sentence reminding the reader of how your examples support your topic sentence claim. Conclusion Restate your thesis using new wording (no cutting and pasting from thesis itself) Your last reflections on this topic. ● • ● •
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