Course Code
NUR-621
Class Code
NUR-621-O500
Criteria
Group 1
Percentage
100.0%
Key Components of Budget Costs
30.0%
Relevant Capital Purchase
30.0%
Presentation of Content
10.0%
Layout
10.0%
Language Use and Audience Awareness (includes
sentence construction, word choice, etc.)
10.0%
Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling,
punctuation, grammar, language use)
5.0%
Documentation of Sources (citations, footnotes,
references, bibliography, etc., as appropriate to
assignment and style)
5.0%
Total Weightage
100%
Assignment Title
Operational Budget Presentation
Unsatisfactory (75.00%)
The presentation does not sufficiently describe the cost of
staff, activities, services, and supplies.
The presentation does not sufficiently identify a relevant
capital purchase that the unit may require, including the
need, the return on investment, and benefits.
The content lacks a clear point of view and logical sequence
of information. Includes little persuasive information.
Sequencing of ideas is unclear.
The layout is cluttered, confusing, and does not use spacing,
headings, and subheadings to enhance the readability. The
text is extremely difficult to read with long blocks of text,
small point size for fonts, and inappropriate contrasting
colors. Poor use of headings, subheadings, indentations, or
bold formatting is evident.
Inappropriate word choice and lack of variety in language use
are evident. Writer appears to be unaware of audience. Use
of primer prose indicates writer either does not apply figures
of speech or uses them inappropriately.
Slide errors are pervasive enough that they impede
communication of meaning.
Sources are not documented.
Total Points
80.0
Less Than Satisfactory (80.00%)
The presentation does not include a complete description of
the cost of staff, activities, services, and supplies.
The presentation does not clearly identify a relevant capital
purchase that the unit may require, including the need, the
return on investment, and benefits.
The content is vague in conveying a point of view and does
not create a strong sense of purpose. Includes some
persuasive information.
The layout shows some structure, but appears cluttered and
busy or distracting with large gaps of white space or a
distracting background. Overall readability is difficult due to
lengthy paragraphs, too many different fonts, dark or busy
background, overuse of bold, or lack of appropriate
indentations of text.
Some distracting inconsistencies in language choice (register)
or word choice are present. The writer exhibits some lack of
control in using figures of speech appropriately.
Frequent and repetitive mechanical errors distract the
reader.
Documentation of sources is inconsistent or incorrect, as
appropriate to assignment and style, with numerous
formatting errors.
Satisfactory (88.00%)
The presentation includes a clear description of the cost of
staff, activities, services, and supplies.
The presentation identifies a relevant capital purchase that
the unit may require, including the need, the return on
investment, and benefits.
The presentation slides are generally competent, but ideas
may show some inconsistency in organization or in their
relationships to each other.
The layout uses horizontal and vertical white space
appropriately. Sometimes the fonts are easy to read, but in a
few places the use of fonts, italics, bold, long paragraphs,
color, or busy background detracts and does not enhance
readability.
Language is appropriate to the targeted audience for the
most part.
Some mechanical errors or typos are present, but they are
not overly distracting to the reader.
Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and
style, although some formatting errors may be present.
Good (92.00%)
The presentation includes a thorough description of the cost
of staff, activities, services, and supplies.
The presentation clearly and accurately identifies a wellresearched, relevant capital purchase that the unit may
require, including the need, the return on investment, and
benefits.
The content is written with a logical progression of ideas and
supporting information exhibiting a unity, coherence, and
cohesiveness. Includes persuasive information from reliable
sources.
The layout background and text complement each other and
enable the content to be easily read. The fonts are easy to
read and point size varies appropriately for headings and text.
The writer is clearly aware of audience, uses a variety of
appropriate vocabulary for the targeted audience, and uses
figures of speech to communicate clearly.
Slides are largely free of mechanical errors, although a few
may be present.
Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and
style, and format is mostly correct.
Excellent (100.00%)
The presentation includes a comprehensive and thorough
description of the cost of staff, activities, services, and
supplies.
The presentation skillfully identifies a well-researched,
relevant capital purchase that the unit may require, including
the need, the return on investment, and benefits.
The content is written clearly and concisely. Ideas universally
progress and relate to each other. The project includes
motivating questions and advanced organizers. The project
gives the audience a clear sense of the main idea.
The layout is visually pleasing and contributes to the overall
message with appropriate use of headings, subheadings, and
white space. Text is appropriate in length for the target
audience and to the point. The background and colors
enhance the readability of the text.
The writer uses a variety of sentence constructions, figures of
speech, and word choice in distinctive and creative ways that
are appropriate to purpose, discipline, and scope.
Writer is clearly in control of standard, written, academic
English.
Comments
Sources are completely and correctly documented, as
appropriate to assignment and style, and format is free of
error.
Points Earned
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