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A soon school's end for the day I have to run to my house. Often being only 12 years old my mom went to a doctor's appointment and I had to walk to the elementary school to pick up my siblings and 2 more kid my mom baby sat.

Oct 9th, 2014

As soon as school ends for the day, I have to run to my house. As a 12 year old, whenever my mom had doctor appointments, I had to walk to the local elementary school to pick up my siblings and other kids my mom babysat.

Oct 9th, 2014

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