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For example I could go to college, meet different people, have a better job but not I did not. thank to my parent and there point of view of life and the religion, my mother religion did not believe college is important not even a full time job.

Oct 10th, 2014

I could have gone to college, meet different people and have a greater possibility to acquire a better job but this circumstance was not possible due to my parents' point of view in life and the impact of the beliefs of my religion. My religion believes that having college education or even having a full time job is important.

i hope this helps! :)

Oct 10th, 2014

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