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please provide feedback to at least two classmates. When providing feedback, please ignore issues of spelling, punctuation, and grammar. Instead, focus on addressing the following, more global, areas:

1) Consider the resume content and organization. In what ways does the resume highlight education, jobs, experiences? Where might the resume need to be re-organized to better call attention to education, jobs, skills, and/or experiences?

2) Consider the overall design of the resume. In what ways are the principles of design (C.R.A.P.) being considered? Where might design improve? How might design help to highlight important aspects of the resume?

classmate 1.I chose to create a chronological resume, and the resume is for international student who want to apply for North American jobs. Also, the chronological approach is the most common in scientific and technical fields. At the top of the page, my name is spelled as it appears on the passport. Because I am an international student, so I list job-related coursework, a high school to signal a country, and my natural language.

classmate 2.I created a chronological resume because I am pursuing a job in business and it includes my work experience first which I believe an employer pays great attention to. Therefore, if it is the first thing they see it can help. I organized it with the main points being bold and centered. Next I elaborated on each main point with bullet points to discuss a little about my strengths.


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Mengxia Zhang 4264 Harbour Towne Dr. apt 6, Saginaw, MI, 48603 Phone Number: 989-971-7929 E-mail: mzhang13@svsu.edu Education: Saginaw Valley State University, Bachelor of BBA, GPA 3.44/4.0 ACCT*213 Financial Accounting FIN*310 International Finance ECON*235 Intro Statistics LAW*308 Soc, Polit&Legal Environ Bus ECON*335 Applied Statistics MGT*321 Organization & Administration FIN*304 Financial Management MGT*325 Management Information Systems FIN*307 Real Estate Finance MGT*324 Production & Operations Mgt FIN*302 Investment Analysis MGT*429 Exec Strategies & Policies FIN*306 Commercial Banking MKT*331 Marketing Principles FIN*305 Princ of Risk and Insurance MUS*117A Musical Exp: Classical Music FIN*313 Money & Financial Institutions PHIL*114 Introduction to Logic Central university of Finance and Economics, Beijing, China, 2012 Xiaoshan Third Senior Middle School, Hangzhou, China, 2009 Work Experience None Languages Natural Language: Mandarin Chinese (first-language), English Awards and Associations Member of Chinese Students and Scholars Association of SVSU (CSSA) James Baer 5626 North Mission Road x Rosebush, MI 48878 x jbaer@svsu.edu Job Objective Business Manager Summary  I am a hard worker with great team skills who likes to complete the task at hand in an orderly fashion.  I worked on a farm where I had to deal with people and order parts for equipment so I worked with all sorts of people every day. Professional Experience Packard Farms, Clare, MI, 48617, 2015 – Present Maintenance    Have worked on tractors and trucks throughout the crop season. Helped the manager clean around the shop and make sure everything was nice, neat and put back where it belonged. Mowed the lawns and made sure the yard looked presentable for when customers pulled up. Six Roofing, Farwell, MI, 48858, 2012 – 2015 Roofer    I hauled the shingles up the ladder and placed them onto the roof so the other employees could start working. I would go to Menard's and order pallets of shingles that needed to be delivered to the house we were working on. I would tear off the old roof and help start replacing the roof when the shingles arrived. Education  Associate of Arts, 2013 - 2015 Delta College, University Center, MI  Business Management, Anticipated Completion May 2018 Saginaw Valley State University, University Center, MI Community Service   Feed My Starving Children, Volunteer, Helped package food for people in need, 2011 – 2013 Clare High School, Mentor/Tutor, Helped kids who needed help in the classroom, 2012 2013 References Tim Packard, Owner Packard Farms 6584 South Brand Avenue Clare, MI Phone: 989-429-6002 Brandon Youngblood, Manager Packard Farms 6584 South Brand Avenue Clare, MI Phone: 989-339-8729
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Classmate 1. The resume gives a poor showcasing of the qualifications of Mengxia.
Important aspects are missing and too much unimportant information has been given. The
resume has given course units for Mengxia’s Bachelors in Saginaw Valley State University,
details which are not required in a resume. Other academic qualifications are missing out on
the majors studied. Mengxia should highlight more about self. Show personal skills,
strengths, and aspirations in a short form. The academic details should show the college,
course, year and grades attained. M...


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