Course Code
NRS-429VN
Class Code
NRS-429VN-O506
Criteria
Content
Percentage
80.0%
Identification and Description of Selected
Minority Group
10.0%
Health Disparities and Nutritional Challenges for
Minority Group
15.0%
Barriers to Health for Minority Group
15.0%
Health Promotion Activities Practiced by
Minority Group
10.0%
Three Levels of Health Promotion Prevention
15.0%
Cultural Competent Health Promotion for Ethnic
Minority Population
15.0%
Organization and Effectiveness
15.0%
Thesis Development and Purpose
5.0%
Argument Logic and Construction
5.0%
Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling,
punctuation, grammar, language use)
5.0%
Format
5.0%
Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the
major and assignment)
2.0%
Documentation of Sources (citations, footnotes,
references, bibliography, etc., as appropriate to
assignment and style)
3.0%
Total Weightage
100%
Assignment Title
Health Promotion in Minority Populations
Unsatisfactory (0.00%)
Description and health status for ethnic minority group is not
presented.
Health disparities and nutritional challenges for this group are
not presented.
Barriers to health for ethnic minority group are not
presented.
Health promotion activities practiced by minority groups are
not presented.
A care plan, with at least one approach using the three levels
of health promotion prevention, is not presented.
Cultural beliefs, practices, and relevant cultural theory
significant to supporting a culturally competent health
promotion for this population are not presented.
Paper lacks any discernible overall purpose or organizing
claim.
Statement of purpose is not justified by the conclusion. The
conclusion does not support the claim made. Argument is
incoherent and uses noncredible sources.
Surface errors are pervasive enough that they impede
communication of meaning. Inappropriate word choice or
sentence construction is used.
Template is not used appropriately or documentation format
is rarely followed correctly.
Sources are not documented.
Total Points
200.0
Less than Satisfactory (75.00%)
Description of ethnic minority group is partially presented.
Health status for this group is vague. It is unclear how race
and ethnicity influence health for this group.
A summary of the health disparities and nutritional
challenges for this group is presented. Significant details have
been omitted. Summary lacks evidence to support
statements.
Barriers to health for ethnic minority group are partially
presented. The summary is not consistent with the
assignment criteria. There are significant inaccuracies.
Summary lacks evidence to support statements.
Health promotion activities practiced by minority groups are
partially summarized. There are significant inaccuracies.
Summary lacks evidence to support statements.
A care plan, with at least one approach using the three levels
of health promotion prevention, is partially presented. It is
unclear how this plan meets the unique needs of the ethnic
minority group selected. There are inaccuracies.
Cultural beliefs and practices to be considered are presented
but are incomplete or inaccurate. The cultural theory or
model proposed is partially presented; or, the model is not
relevant. Overall, the content does not support a culturally
competent health promotion for this population. There are
significant inaccuracies.
Thesis is insufficiently developed or vague. Purpose is not
clear.
Sufficient justification of claims is lacking. Argument lacks
consistent unity. There are obvious flaws in the logic. Some
sources have questionable credibility.
Frequent and repetitive mechanical errors distract the
reader. Inconsistencies in language choice (register), sentence
structure, or word choice are present.
Template is used, but some elements are missing or
mistaken; lack of control with formatting is apparent.
Documentation of sources is inconsistent or incorrect, as
appropriate to assignment and style, with numerous
formatting errors.
Satisfactory (79.00%)
Summary of ethnic minority group is partially presented.
Health status for this group is generally discussed.
Explanation of how race and ethnicity influence health this
group is generally presented. It is unclear how the health
status of this ethnic minority group compares to the national
average. A general comparison for how the ethnic minority
A discussion of the health disparities and nutritional
challenges for this group is generally presented. Most
significant findings related to the ethnic minority group have
been included. A general comparison for how the ethnic
minority group compares to the national average is
presented. Some support is needed to support statements.
Barriers to health for ethnic minority group are summarized.
The summary includes barriers resulting from culture,
socioeconomics, education, and sociopolitical factors. There
are some inaccuracies. A general comparison for how the
ethnic minority group compares to the national average is
presented. Some evidence is needed to support statements.
Health promotion activities practiced by minority groups are
generally described. There are minor inaccuracies. A general
comparison for how the ethnic minority group compares to
the national average is presented. Some evidence is needed
to support statements.
A care plan, with at least one approach using the three levels
of health promotion prevention, is summarized. A general
explanation of how this plan meets the unique needs of the
ethnic minority group selected, and why it is the most
effective choice, is presented. Some support or rationale is
needed.
Cultural beliefs and practices to be considered are
summarized. A relevant cultural theory or model is proposed.
Overall, the content generally supports a culturally
competent health promotion for this population. There are
some inaccuracies. More evidence or rationale is needed.
Thesis is apparent and appropriate to purpose.
Argument is orderly, but may have a few inconsistencies. The
argument presents minimal justification of claims. Argument
logically, but not thoroughly, supports the purpose. Sources
used are credible. Introduction and conclusion bracket the
thesis.
Some mechanical errors or typos are present, but they are
not overly distracting to the reader. Correct sentence
structure and audience-appropriate language are used.
Template is used, and formatting is correct, although some
minor errors may be present.
Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and
style, although some formatting errors may be present.
Good (89.00%)
Description of ethnic minority group is partially presented.
Health status for this group is discussed. Explanation of how
race and ethnicity influence health for this group is
presented. A comparison for how the ethnic minority group
compares to the national average is presented.
A discussion of the health disparities and nutritional
challenges for this group is presented. The significant findings
related to the ethnic minority group have been included. A
comparison for how the ethnic minority group compares to
the national average is presented. Some detail is needed for
clarity.
Barriers to health for this ethnic minority group resulting
from culture, socioeconomics, education, and sociopolitical
factors are discussed. A comparison for how the ethnic
minority group compares to the national average is
presented. Minor evidence is needed to support statements.
Health promotion activities practiced by minority groups are
described. A comparison for how the ethnic minority group
compares to the national average is presented. Minor
evidence is needed to support statements.
A care plan, with at least one approach using the three levels
of health promotion prevention, is described. An explanation
of how this plan meets the unique needs of the ethnic
minority group selected, and why it is the most effective
choice, is presented. Minor support or rationale is needed.
Cultural beliefs and practices to be considered are discussed.
A relevant cultural theory or model is proposed. Overall, the
content generally supports a culturally competent health
promotion for this population. Some evidence or rationale is
needed.
Thesis is clear and forecasts the development of the paper.
Thesis is descriptive and reflective of the arguments and
appropriate to the purpose.
Argument shows logical progressions. Techniques of
argumentation are evident. There is a smooth progression of
claims from introduction to conclusion. Most sources are
authoritative.
Prose is largely free of mechanical errors, although a few may
be present. A variety of sentence structures and effective
figures of speech are used.
Template is fully used; There are virtually no errors in
formatting style.
Sources are documented, as appropriate to assignment and
style, and format is mostly correct.
Excellent (100.00%)
Comments
A detailed description of ethnic minority group is partially
presented. Health status for this group is thoroughly
discussed. Explanation of how race and ethnicity influence
health for this group is clearly presented. A well-developed
comparison for how the ethnic minority group compares to
the national average is presented.
A thorough discussion of the health disparities and nutritional
challenges for this group is clearly presented. All relevant
findings related to the ethnic minority group have been
included. A well-developed comparison for how the ethnic
minority group compares to the national average is
presented.
Barriers to health for this ethnic minority group resulting
from culture, socioeconomics, education, and sociopolitical
factors are thoroughly discussed. A well-developed
comparison for how the ethnic minority group compares to
the national average is presented. Compelling and accurate
evidence is provided to support statements.
Health promotion activities practiced by minority groups are
accurately identified and described in detail. A welldeveloped comparison for how the ethnic minority group
compares to the national average is presented. Compelling
and accurate evidence is provided to support statements.
A care plan, with at least one approach using the three levels
of health promotion prevention, is thoroughly described. A
well-supported explanation of how this plan meets the
unique needs of the ethnic minority group selected, and why
it is the most effective choice, is presented. The discussion
demonstrates a clear understanding of the three levels of
Cultural beliefs and practices to be considered are thoroughly
discussed. A relevant cultural theory or model is proposed.
Overall, the content strongly supports a culturally competent
health promotion for this population. Strong evidence and
rational are provided for support. The discussion
demonstrates aptitude for understanding cultural
Thesis is comprehensive and contains the essence of the
paper. Thesis statement makes the purpose of the paper
clear.
Clear and convincing argument that presents a persuasive
claim in a distinctive and compelling manner. All sources are
authoritative.
Writer is clearly in command of standard, written, academic
English.
All format elements are correct.
Sources are completely and correctly documented, as
appropriate to assignment and style, and format is free of
error.
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0.00/200.0
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