3.do you think the pronoun use about right, or is it overdone?

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They commit physical, mental and verbal offenses and are very aware tht someday they will be punished for them.

Nov 9th, 2014

Needs changing..."they" and "them" is too much. Punishment for committing physics, mental, and verbal offenses will occur someday.....for eg

Nov 9th, 2014

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