2.do you think the pronoun use about right, or is it overdone?

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What changes might you make?

They constantly talk to each other about how much they hate the party and never seem to feel guilt in doing things together that are against the rules. 

Nov 9th, 2014

It's o.k. because

1. different pronouns are being used  except for they which is used twice - not excessive

2. sounds natural

Nov 9th, 2014

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