4.do you think the pronoun use about right, or is it overdone?

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They do, however, seems to have figured out a fool-proof plan for keeping their secret lives hidden until they experince their own betryal from their so-called trusted friends. 

Nov 9th, 2014

However, they seem to have figured out a foolproof plan that keeps their secret lives hidden; but one day their so-called trusted friends will betray them.

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