do you think the pronoun use about right, or is it overdone?

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They both have decided that they do not agree with the government's ideals and choose to love each other and hide from the forces in order to live the lives they want.

Nov 9th, 2014

this sentence is okay the way it is, but personally I would insert a comma between "ideals" and "and"

Nov 9th, 2014

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