5.do you think the pronoun use about right, or is it overdone?

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their secret lives hidden until they experience their own betrayal from the so-called trusted friend who have been setting them up to be arrested by the Party for there criminal acts all along.

Nov 9th, 2014

it is overdone as a lot of detail provided in the sentence and verbs are not put up at apt places 

Nov 9th, 2014

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