6.do you think the pronoun use about right, or is it overdone?

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Winston demonstrates one of his first acts of rebellion when he buys a diary and finds a spot in his house where the Party's telescreen could not see him writing in it,

Nov 9th, 2014

this sentence is okay the way it is and does not need revision

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