Description
ENGL 250 WA 2
- Find a piece of writing – email, memo, blog, brochure, short report, or website – that you believe was not carefully drafted or revised.
- Point out to your instructor what is wrong with the piece of writing – for example, it is not logically organized, it uses an inappropriate tone, it is incomplete, or the information is too technical.
Explanation & Answer
hey there! your work is completed. i suggest you review it before submitting, because i went over the page count, the text is two pages long, but that's only because i quoted the body of the email as it is. you're free to delete that part, its just there for reference, as there is a link to the same email included in the beginning of the document. also, i ran this through plagiarism scan and a 5% match comes up, because the body of the email was quoted directly from the site. if you have any adjustments you'd like me to make, i'd be happy to!
Poor business writing: A break in communication
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The link above is a cold email sent to a company, offering them PR services, but there
are many communication issues that could affect how the receiver views it. Among
these are the register and tone, which makes it seem informal and forgettable. The
email reads:
“Subject:
Hey [recipient]
My name is [name] and I run a company called [company name] as well as [company
name] where I teach others how to attract MASSIVE atten...
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