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As you read the passage below, consider how Bobby Braun uses
• evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.
• reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.
• stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion,
to add power to the ideas expressed.
Adapted from Bobby Braun, “Space Technology: A Critical Investment for Our
Nation’s Future.” ©2014 by Capitol Hill Publishing Corp. Originally published in
the Hill, October 27, 2011.
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Aerospace remains a strong component of our national fabric and is the largest
positive contributor to our nation’s trade balance. However, this technological
leadership position is not a given. To remain the leader in aerospace technology,
we must continue to perform research and invest in the people who will create
the breakthroughs of tomorrow, preserving a critical component of our nation’s
economic competitiveness for future generations.
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For NASA,1 past cutting-edge technology investments led to design and flight of the
Apollo missions, the space shuttle, the International Space Station and a myriad of
robotic explorers that allowed us to reach destinations across our solar system and
peer across the universe. NASA remains one of the nation’s premiere research and
development agencies, pursuing breakthrough technologies that will expand the
frontiers of aeronautics and space.
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Unfortunately, the pioneering spirit embodied by this storied agency is endangered
as a result of chronic underinvestment in basic and applied research. In a recent
report on the state of NASA’s technology plans, the National Research Council
offered a stark assessment: “Success in executing future NASA space missions will
depend on advanced technology developments that should already be underway.
However, it has been years since NASA has had a vigorous, broad-based program in
advanced space technology. NASA’s technology base is largely depleted. Currently,
available technology is insufficient to accomplish many intended space missions.
Future U.S. leadership in space requires a foundation of sustained technology
advances.”
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America is beginning an exciting new chapter in human space exploration.
This chapter centers on full use of the International Space Station, maturation of
multiple American vehicles for delivering astronauts and cargo to low-Earth orbit,
development of a crew vehicle and an evolvable heavy-lift rocket—two critical
building blocks for our nation’s deep-space exploration future—and advancement
of a suite of new in-space technologies that will allow us to send explorers safely into
deep space for the first time.
1 National Aeronautics and Space Administration
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By investing in the high payoff, transformative technology that the aerospace
industry cannot tackle today, NASA will mature the systems required for its future
missions while proving the capabilities and lowering the cost of other government
agency and commercial space activities. Developing these solutions will create
high-tech jobs.
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NASA’s technology investments continue to make a difference in the world
around us. Knowledge provided by weather and navigational spacecraft, efficiency
improvements in both ground and air transportation, super computers, solar- and
wind-generated energy, the cameras found in many of today’s cellphones, improved
biomedical applications including advanced medical imaging and more nutritious
infant formula, and the protective gear that keeps our military, firefighters and police
safe, have all benefitted from our nation’s investments in aerospace technology.
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For many of the tens of thousands of engineering and science students in our nation’s
universities today, the space program provides the opportunity to invent technologies
today that will form the foundation for humanity’s next great leap across the solar
system. For this new generation of engineers and scientists, and for those working
across NASA at this moment, the future starts today. Modest, sustained federal
investment in space technology, at a funding level approaching 5 percent of NASA’s
budget (well below the R&D2 budget of many corporations), is the key ingredient
to their success. A NASA that is reaching for grand challenges and operating at the
cutting-edge is critical not only for our country’s future in space but also for
America’s technological leadership position in the world.
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Nearly 50 years ago, a young president gave NASA a grand challenge—one chosen
not for its simplicity, but for its audacity, not for its ultimate goal or destination,
but to “organize and measure the best of our energies and skills.” In accomplishing
that goal, NASA not only defined what we now call “rocket science,” but also made
a lasting imprint on the economic, national security and geopolitical landscape of
the time.
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NASA can do the same today. This is the task for which this agency was built. This is
the task this agency can complete. America expects no less.
Write an essay in which you explain how Bobby Braun builds an argument to
persuade his audience that the US government must continue to invest in
NASA. In your essay, analyze how Braun uses one or more of the features listed
in the box above (or features of your own choice) to strengthen the logic and
persuasiveness of his argument. Be sure that your analysis focuses on the most
relevant features of the passage.
Your essay should not explain whether you agree with Braun’s claims, but
rather explain how Braun builds an argument to persuade his audience.
2 Research and development
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INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH (3-5 SENTENCES)
NASA ESSAY
Explanation of Essay Parts
Introduction (2-5 sentences): Begin with a statement that explains
the central claim of the passage's argument; this statement should
provide some context for what you’ll be discussing in the essay. It
can be brief if you’re short on time (1-2 sentences)
Thesis: Next comes the all-important thesis statement that
includes a clear outlining of what aspects of the author's
argument you'll be discussing. You can be very specific (e.g.
"statistics about air-conditioning usage in the US") or more vague
(e.g. "quantitative data") here - the important part is that you'll be
supporting your opinion with proof (1-2 sentences).
BODY PARAGRAPH #1 (7-10 SENTENCES)
Explanation of Essay Parts
NASA ESSAY
Introduce your first example with some kind of transition (1
sentence). In this case, the writer linked this body paragraph to the
introduction by explaining how his example (AC usage statistics)
relates to one of the persuasive techniques he'll be discussing
(statistics): it is an example of the harm created by overuse of
air-conditioning.
.
Next, provide relevant information about when and how in the
passage the author uses this persuasive technique (4-7 sentences).
Be sure to paraphrase or direct quote the passage for the strongest
evidence.
Finally, explain how this example works to strengthen the author's
argument (3-4 sentences).
BODY PARAGRAPH #2 (7-10 SENTENCES)
Explanation of Essay Parts
NASA ESSAY
Transition from the previous paragraph into this example (1
sentence).
Provide at least one specific example of how the author uses
the persuasive technique you're discussing in this paragraph
(2-5 sentences).
Next, explain how and why this example persuades the
reader of the author's opinion. (3-4 sentences).
OPTIONAL-BODY PARAGRAPH #3 (6-10 SENTENCES)
Explanation of Essay Parts
This paragraph is in the same format as Example 2. You
should only include a third example if you think it’s strong
and will help (rather than detract from) your point. In the
case of the essay we've been using as the backbone of this
template, the author had the time to write a third example.
Here it is, broken down in the same way as the previous
example, starting with a transition from the previous
paragraph (1 sentence):
NASA ESSAY
Provide at least one specific example of how the author uses
the persuasive technique you're discussing in this paragraph
(2-5 sentences).
Explain how and why this example persuades the reader of
the author's opinion. (3-4 sentences).
CONCLUSION (2-5 SENTENCES)
Explanation of Essay Parts
Restate your thesis, using different words (1-2 sentences).
You may also choose to mention the examples you used if
you have time and if it adds anything (1-2 sentences). In this
case, the author of the essay chose not to, or possibly ran
out of time.
NASA ESSAY
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