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Did you know that 46.7 million percent of people living in the United States smoke? Yes that’s right, almost half of the population in the United States smoke and many of them are teens. Teenagers living in the United States that are under the age of 18 should not be smoking at all but they still do. I personally think that smoking cigarettes is really terrible because cigarette smoking causes health problems, it is very difficult to quit once you’ve started and because it could lead to death. If you want to ruin your health then smoking is the way to do it. At the age of teenagers, you shouldn’t have to worry about health problems like lung cancer. Your health is very important, lung cancer accounts for 29 percent of all cancer deaths. Teen smokers are more likely to have panic disorders and depression. You cannot survive if you have bad health. If you don’t have good health, you wont feel motivated to do anything and you’ll become lazy. Teens need all the motivation they can get; if not, they might start falling behind in schoolwork and might not want to continue their education. I don’t think it’s worth it to have illnesses and health problems, just to be able to smoke. Smoking is really addicting, that’s the main reason why teens can’t quit. 90% of smokers began before the age of 19. It might be very easy for you to tell someone to quit smoking but for the smoker, it’s much harder than that. Most smokers become addicted to nicotine, a drug that is found naturally in tobacco. That’s why you shouldn’t start smoking in the first place. Adolescents who smoke regularly can have just as hard time quitting as long time smokers. More people in the United States are addicted to nicotine than to any other drug. Research suggests that nicotine may be as addictive as heroin, cocaine, or alcohol. Not only does smoking cause health problems but it can also lead to death, I don’t think anyone wishes to die from an illness caused by smoking. About 30% of teen smokers will continue smoking and die early from a smoking related disease. Thousands of people die all the time from smoking cigarettes and it’s horrible. An estimated 440,00 Americans die each year from smoking related illnesses and most of them started smoking when they were teenagers. People shouldn’t die from illnesses caused by cigarette smoking because every person has the right to live their life to the fullest. Smoking is the most preventable cause of death in America. Teens that have gotten pregnant have had prematurely born babies that have passed away due to prenatal maternal smoking. Don’t risk the lives of your possible future babies to smoke. Too much death has come from smoking. Cigarettes are controlling the lives of millions. Smoking is terrible because cigarette smoking causes health problem, it is really hard to stop once you’ve started and smoking kills people. It’s very addicting but all the cons overweigh the pros, don’t you want to be able to live to see your kids and maybe your grandkids grow up? We need to put a stop to smoking. If you know someone who smokes, you should encourage him or her to try to quit, especially if they are young and just started smoking. Don’t let yourself become the next victim of this deadly habit.
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Smoking is Bad Especially for Teens
Did you know that 46.7 million percent of people living in the United States smoke?
Yes, that’s right, almost half of the population in the United States smoke and many of
them are teens. Teenagers living in the United States who are under the age of 18 should
not be smoking at all, but they still do. I think that smoking cigarettes is really terrible
because cigarette smoking causes health problems, it is tough to quit once you’ve started
and also it could lead to death.
If you want to ruin your health, then smoking is the way to do it. At the age of teenage,
you shouldn’t have to worry about health problems like lung cancer. Your health is
critical; lung cancer accounts for 29 percent of all cancer deaths. Teen smokers are more
likely to have panic disorders and depression. You cannot survive if you have poor
health. If you do not have good health, you will not feel motivated to do anything, and
you will also become lazy. Teens need all the motivation they can get; if not, they might
start falling behind in schoolwork and might not want to continue their education. I don’t
think it’s worth it to have illnesses and health problems, just to be able to smoke.
Smoking is addicting; that’s the main reason why teens cannot quit. 90% of smokers
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