Please check the attached Research Paper. Please review the research paper carefully and edit / make corrections as per the guidelines bellows.
Need to remove less specific sentences / paragraph but still retain the overall coherence – the paper maximum length should not be more than 3500 words.
I need supporting academic citations in the introduction
Some paragraphs are too long, need to break it down – Again I need more and more academic citations
The paper must be 100% free of grammatical and spelling errors.
Revise the heading and section of Literature review.
Most importantly, I need more and more citations
Many of the references used in the paper are very old; I would appreciate if you base the report on more recent papers / sources. Perhaps the same authors might have published the newer edition of the same books.
Page 7 has far too much subjective opinion; this has no relevance unless supported by academic citations – again, I need you to include Academic citations here.
Page 8 also – citations needed, in fact I need throughout the report, a citation in at least almost every paragraph.
Pls. help in explaining specifically how the formula on page 17 will help my specific research – you may either clarify its role very specifically or leave it out.
In the conclusion, I need your help to refer back to the academic literature, state possible future research and quick review of what has been discovered so far.