how can i make this into a great topic sentence for an essay?

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An author of a book can control a characters life so much (has an impact) ; he can rewrite the characters story as many times as he wants.  

Dec 5th, 2014

As the author can rewrite the characters' story numerous times, he can make a grand impact on the characters' lives. 

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