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Read through the entire paper without leaving any comments.

Then, return to the position paper and create at least 3 describe-evaluate-suggest comments per page that address some of the following questions:

  • What is the writer’s stance? How effective is this communicative stance?
  • Do you feel the introduction is accessible, purposeful, and attention-getting?
  • How well is the writer using a “Pyramid Structure” in which all the pieces support the position statement?
  • How balanced is the pyramidal structure? Does an area of support seem lopsided?
  • How well do paragraphs synthesize secondary research? How evident is it to you that the writer has revised the paper for synthesis?
  • Are there any sections you feel are underdeveloped? How could the writer expand upon these sections?
  • How effective is the paper’s conclusion in moving beyond summary?
  • Are the writer’s in-text citations correct?
  • Is the Works Cited, Reference Page, or Bibliography Page correctly punctuated (formatting, including italics and indentation, will not transfer to Eli Review)?

Minimum: 18 Contextual Comments + 1 Final Comment

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The writer has taken a stand to defend the women against any form of societal
discrimination that they face on the pay as they earn as compensation for their efforts. They have
effectively communicated their stance. The introduction is accessible, purposeful, but not
attention-getting since it does not give a captivating overview of what will be discussed. The
writer has poorly structured the pyramid, beginning the writing almost at the top of the pyramid.
The writer intended to address the discrimination that women still face that they should have
built from mentioning the prejudices instead of going directly to giving us the USA nati...


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