ENGL 2311
Document Three: Instruction Memo
July 6, 2019
MEMORANDUM
To:
From:
Subject:
Date:
Microsoft Software and IT Department staff
Omid karimi, Site Manager
Moving to Microsoft New Office Stone Lake BLVD
July 6, 2019
Instructions for Our Move
Our Software and IT departments’ staff have been increased in the past two years. So we are
expanding our Austin round rock office to new office located at the 10900 stonelake BLVD. The
new office will have free parking garage and building access same as round rock office. On July
11, 2019 at after 5:30 p.m. the Software and IT departments 120 staff will be moving to our
new office in stonelake BLVD. IT manager Mr. Rick will lead the move. On Monday 08, 2019 the
following items will be provided.
• Boxes
• Labels -to mark your boxes
• Tape and move map
The company policy allows you to take your workstation laptops, for more details contact Mr.
Rick the IT manager 512-545-3040 or rick@microsoft.com.
The following instructions need to be performed prior to the moving company, Apache Moving,
arrives.
Step 1. On July 11, 2019 at 9:00 a.m. Manager Meeting.
• Selecting 8 lead assistance to smooth moving process.
• Discuss the moving process in details.
• Discuss the layout of new office in stonelake BLVD.
• Provide moving items to staff.
Step 2. After 01:00 p.m. Begin Packing.
• Put foam pads around valuable, fragile items and put them in box.
• Include, IT plaques, glass, or anniversary glass sculptures.
• Make sure that your pack up the contents of all gray filing cabinets because movers do
move those.
• Any breakable items like glass, you can move it yourself/not the movers.
Step 3. Write on Move Map the Number and Delivery Location of:
• Corkboards
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Whiteboards
Rolling Cabinets
Step 4. Add a Name Label to All Your Belongings:
• Tables
• Monitors
• Desk phone
• Peripherals
• Docking Stations
• Ergonomic Desk
• Ergonomic Chairs
Your full cooperation in this matter is appreciated. Please remember the moving time and date.
You may have questions or concern, please feel free to contact me at oamir@microsoft.com or
512-5452035 and moving lead Mr. Rick at rick@microsoft.com or 512-545-3040
Document Three Assessment: ENGL 2311-016
Hybrid Course
5/28/2019—8/12/2019
Amir O:
This revised draft nets 8.25 of 10 points. Graphic elements and format work fairly
well. However, passive verbs and a other grammar/punctuation errors weaken the
memo. Please see the rubric below:
Letter Grade
Document Characteristics
Points
A-Level
Fully and skillfully fulfills the assignment’s objectives, is properly formatted, and
is relatively free of grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors
Nets 90% of possible
points or more
B-Level
Fulfills all the assignment’s objectives, is (mostly) properly formatted, and has
some grammatical, spelling, and punctuation errors
Nets 80% to 89% of
possible points
C-Level
Fulfills most of the assignment’s objectives and may be well formatted but
contains several errors. By avoiding similar errors in subsequent assignments,
you can more successfully progress in the course.
Nets 70% to 79% of
possible points
D-Level
Fulfills some of the assignment’s objectives but needs improvement in style,
organization, development, and/or grammar/spelling/punctuation
Nets 60% to 69% of
possible points
F-Level
Does not fulfill the assignment’s objectives
Nets less than 60% of
possible points
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This is having a Grammar Revision section and a Write-a-Memo section.
SECTION ONE “Grammar Revision”
QUESTION 1
1.
In considering success in ENGL 2311, it is very important to remember the fact that this
course requires attendance and participation.
a. type-in your correction/revision, in its Answer Text box
QUESTION 2
2. Technical communicators must demonstrate skills in writing memos,
publication management, and designing documents.
a. type-in your correction/revision, in its Answer Text box.
3. QUESTION 3
4.
While driving down Mo-Pac, a noisy dog ran across all four lanes of traffic.
a. type-in your correction/revision, in its Answer Text box.
SECTION TWO “Write-a-Memo”
Instructions
Complete, save, and post your response to the following Writing Prompt: Write a memo that
explains how future students can succeed in ENGL 2311.
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First, think about the communication concepts you applied this semester, while you were writing
documents.
Then, start pre-writing your memo, by creating a list of details and examples about the three or four
communication concepts or strategies that served you best: what are those concepts and
strategies? what are some specific examples for each of those three or four concepts or
strategies? how might the examples be helpful for a future ENGL 2311 student? This pre-writing
should provide some of the content for the memo.
Next, analyze the needs and interests of your memo’s audience (future 2311 students), and decide
what your specific purpose for the memo is.
Then, write a purpose-driven, audience-friendly memo illustrating how future students can succeed
in ENGL 2311.
Your memo must include
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memo-format information [To/From/Subject/Date]
a clearly stated purpose, in an Introduction paragraph that specifies the main idea of the memo and
provides a clear focus for what will follow
a discussion section with two or more paragraphs that provide sufficient, precise, reader-friendly
examples and explanations (You may also include descriptive headings that help readers)
a conclusion/recommendation paragraph that ties-together the whole memo and that includes
specific action-steps
audience-friendly design, format, and illustration(s)
accurate grammar, punctuation, and spelling
5. Reference
6. Communication in the Real World, Open.lib.umn.edu
This is having a Grammar Revision section and a Write-a-Memo section.
SECTION ONE “Grammar Revision”
QUESTION 1
1. In considering success in ENGL 2311, it is very important to remember the fact that this
course requires attendance and participation.
a. type-in your correction/revision, in its Answer Text box
QUESTION 2
2. Technical communicators must demonstrate skills in writing memos,
publication management, and designing documents.
a. type-in your correction/revision, in its Answer Text box.
3. QUESTION 3
4. While driving down Mo-Pac, a noisy dog ran across all four lanes of traffic.
a. type-in your correction/revision, in its Answer Text box.
SECTION TWO “Write-a-Memo”
.
Instructions
Complete, save, and post your response to the following Writing Prompt: Write a memo that
explains how future students can succeed in ENGL 2311.
First, think about the communication concepts you applied this semester, while you were writing
documents.
Then, start pre-writing your memo, by creating a list of details and examples about the three or four
communication concepts or strategies that served you best: what are those concepts and
strategies? what are some specific examples for each of those three or four concepts or
strategies? how might the examples be helpful for a future ENGL 2311 student? This pre-writing
should provide some of the content for the memo.
Next, analyze the needs and interests of your memo's audience (future 2311 students), and decide
what your specific purpose for the memo is.
Then, write a purpose-driven, audience-friendly memo illustrating how future students can succeed
in ENGL 2311.
Your memo must include
memo-format information [To/From/Subject/Date]
a clearly stated purpose, in an Introduction paragraph that specifies the main idea of the memo and
provides a clear focus for what will follow
a discussion section with two or more paragraphs that provide sufficient, precise, reader-friendly
examples and explanations (You may also include descriptive headings that help readers)
a conclusion/recommendation paragraph that ties-together the whole memo and that includes
specific action-steps
audience-friendly design, format and illustration(s)
accurate grammar, punctuation, and spelling
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