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Title Page
(But Please Make Your Title Original and Interesting)
Reader Response Essay 2
Your Name
Mr. Harper’s ENG 125 VA
Spring 2021
Due: Month Day, 2021
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The Full Title of Your Paper
Hit the tab key one time to indent and begin the main body of the paper. Be sure to create
your own title for your paper -- the more original and clever, the better! You do not need to use
any outside articles or sources. Just focus on the questions provided in the assignment. In this
first paragraph of this reader-response essay, be sure to mention the following: the title of the
work to which you are responding; the author; a short summary of the story (no more than 2 to 3
or so sentences); and the main thesis of the text. These all must be highlighted in yellow.
Part One: Address the Who/ What/ When/ Where/ Why/ How in the Text
The Topic Sentence of this must be highlighted in yellow, with point 1, point 2, and
point 3 introduced. The sentence that begins supporting point 1 should be highlighted in green.
Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should be enough to illustrate your point. This
does not need to go too in-depth. The sentence that begins supporting point 2 should be
highlighted in green. Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should be enough to
illustrate your point. This does not need to go too in-depth. The sentence that begins supporting
point 3 should be highlighted in green. Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should
be enough to illustrate your point. This does not need to go too in-depth.
Part Two: What is the Human Experience in this Text?
The Topic Sentence of this must be highlighted in yellow, with point 1, point 2, and point
3 introduced. The sentence that begins supporting point 1 should be highlighted in green. Then
these are the details. Two or three sentences should be enough to illustrate your point. This does
not need to go too in-depth. The sentence that begins supporting point 2 should be highlighted in
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green. Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should be enough to illustrate your
point. This does not need to go too in-depth. The sentence that begins supporting point 3 should
be highlighted in green. Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should be enough to
illustrate your point. This does not need to go too in-depth.
Part Three: Which of the “Big 9” Literary Elements Was Most Impactful in this Work?
This needs explanation from your own thoughts and it should provide clear examples
from the text to support why. Topic Sentence of this must be highlighted in yellow, with point
1, point 2, and point 3 introduced. The sentence that begins supporting point 1 should be
highlighted in green. Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should be enough to
illustrate your point. This does not need to go too in-depth. The sentence that begins supporting
point 2 should be highlighted in green. Then these are the details. Two or three sentences should
be enough to illustrate your point. This does not need to go too in-depth. The sentence that
begins supporting point 3 should be highlighted in green. Then these are the details. Two or three
sentences should be enough to illustrate your point. This does not need to go too in-depth.
Conclusion
For the conclusion, discuss: your overall reaction to the text; whether you would read
something else like this in the future; whether you would read something else by this author; and
if you would recommend reading this text to someone else and why. Please do not recycle your
Discussion Board posts.
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References
Powell, D. (2012). Half-mown lawn. In Royle, N. The Best British Short Stories 2012. New
York: Salt Publishing Limited.
Half-mown Lawn
DAN POWELL
ANNIE IS READY for an empty house by the time everyone
has finally gone home. She spends the first hour or so flitting
from room to room, straightening cushions and rescuing the
odd missed wine glass from the bookshelves upstairs, before
ending up in her rocking chair staring out the bedroom
window as frail white clouds sidle past.
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Below, the long grass of the half-mown lawn shivers in the
wind, the mower still stood at the checkpoint between the cut
and uncut. Where the grass is short, blades poke from the soil
like a crew cut. The shape pressed into the long grass calls for
her attention but she refuses its demands.
At the kitchen table, Annie tears a piece of paper from a
message pad. She writes the name of the local store at the top.
Underneath she writes headings: Frozen, Fresh, Dairy, Fruit/
Veg, Household. Underneath each she creates columns of her
needs, organising oven-chips, apples, sponge scourers and
skimmed milk into manageable groups. Under the heading
Fresh she writes whole chicken. The words hold her for a
moment before she crosses them through with a single line
and writes chicken breast in the space beneath.
She stands in the pantry, waiting for the empty spaces on the
shelves to reveal what is missing from her list. The gaps
between the pickle jars, rows of cereal boxes and tinned
goods are indecipherable, redacted text that she cannot make
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sense of. Back at the table she turns over her paper and makes
another list. On it she writes,
Things I will miss:
Him polishing his shoes every morning
The way he looked in a suit
His mixing five different types of cereal for breakfast
The quiet knock of his briefcase on the hall floor
The sound of his breath, warm on my back at four in the
morning
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She continues like this until long past the local shop’s closing
time, resigns herself to driving to the all-night Tesco.
In the aisles, Annie searches for the items on her list, filling
her trolley with washing-up liquid, onions, bread and those
biscuits he liked. As each item drops into the trolley, she
crosses a list entry out with an Ikea pencil found in her coat
pocket. She flips the list to check the back and finds herself
staring at the things she will miss. Her eyes flick up at the
signs hanging from the false ceiling of the supermarket, as if
simply by looking she will find the section he is hiding in.
At the checkout she places her shopping on the conveyor,
slotting a customer divider directly behind her things. Her
items move slowly toward the till and she rearranges them,
grouping together the fruit and vegetables, the dairy, the
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household goods. The checkout girl swipes the shopping
through in a flurry of bleeps and Annie struggles to keep pace
as she fills up her bags for life.
‘£57.81,’ says the checkout girl.
Annie rummages in her handbag.
‘I seem to have left my purse at home,’ she says.
The checkout girl huffs then hits the button next to the till to
call a supervisor.
‘It’s my first day. I don’t know what to do about this,’ she
says.
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‘I don’t know what to do either,’ Annie says, her eyes
checking the aisle signs once more.
Annie takes two eggs, a slice of ham, the cheese and the last
of the tomatoes from the fridge. The oil warming in her small
omelette pan, she cracks the eggs into a cup and scrambles the
yolks with a fork. The ham and tomato sit in chopped piles
beside a mound of grated cheddar.
The puddle of oil spreads across the frying pan, seeking the
heat, and she waits until it is ready before pouring out the
eggs. She sprinkles ham, then tomato, then cheese, letting
each sink into the surface of the egg before adding the next.
Once finished, she deposits the omelette onto a clean plate,
leaving the pan and chopping board beside the cooling hob.
On the table a single space is laid and she empties the remains
of a bottle of red into her wine glass. She takes her time with
the meal, slicing small mouthfuls from the omelette, her wine
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sitting untouched beside her plate. In this way she avoids the
kitchen window.
Paul, Jenny and the grandkids stayed behind after friends and
family had gone home. Jenny busied herself, stacking the
glasses and plates into the dishwasher.
‘I could mow the lawn for you, Mum,’ Paul said.
‘Don’t you fucking touch it,’ Annie heard herself scream.
A beat of silence followed before the children whispered
‘Granny did a swear’ and Jenny ushered them into the kitchen
for ice cream. Flushed, Annie collapsed into an armchair but
didn’t cry.
‘It’s okay, Mum,’ Paul told her. But it wasn’t.
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Now, Annie picks up the phone and dials his number.
‘Mum?’ he says.‘Is everything okay? Do you need me to
come over?’
‘Can you mow the lawn tomorrow?’ is all she says.
‘Of course. You’re sure?’
She presses the end call button without replying.
Annie removes the dirty dishes from the dish washer and
places them in order upon the work surface, before turning on
both taps. The sink fills quickly and she takes each item from
the pile and scrubs them in the soapy water. The caked-on
stains of the Pyrex dishes take time and elbow grease to
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remove. Twice she empties the sink replacing the brown
greasy water with fresh suds.
The draining board is soon crammed and she pulls a clean tea
towel from the drawer. Each item is dried and tucked away in
the kitchen cupboards, one at a time, even the cutlery, before
she refills the sink a third time and sets about the final pile of
dirty crockery. Only now, with the garden growing indistinct
in the dusk, does Annie look out through the kitchen window
at the dimming outline of the shape in the grass, her hands
continuing to scrub at food stains already removed.
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Annie shuts off the lights in the front room and takes her book
and a cup of jasmine tea upstairs. She sits in the rocking chair,
her book on her lap and lets her tea grow cold. When, finally,
she looks down at the shape in the grass it is barely visible in
the dim light provided by the nearby street lamps.
Only days ago, though it already feels much longer, she sat in
the rocker by the window, reading, as he started the job. She
had smiled, glancing down at him mowing the lawn, before
losing herself in her book. It was the sound of the mower
shutting off, too soon for him to have finished, that pulled her
from her reading. When he turned to look up at the window
she saw it in his face. He crumpled onto the lawn as she rose
from her chair.
Annie flosses, careful to run the white thread deep below the
gum line where plaque forms, just as the hygienist showed
her. She brushes her teeth for the full two minutes. In the
mirror her mouth fills with toothpaste foam until she has to
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spit. A quick cold-water rinse then she switches off the
en-suite light and closes the door behind her.
Their double bed has fresh sheets; probably Jenny being
helpful. Annie climbs in her side of the bed, lies facing where
he should be. There is no indentation or crease in the bottom
sheet or pillow on his side, any trace of him smoothed out
when the sheets were replaced. She scoots over and buries her
face in his pillow but it is the smell of detergent that fills her
nostrils.
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Unable to sleep, Annie pulls her dressing gown about her,
walks downstairs, slips on her garden shoes and steps slowly
out, taking care only to walk on the mown part of the lawn.
The summer night air is warm even for the time of year.
Where he fell, the shape of him remains pressed in the long
grass.
Annie crouches and runs her finger around his outline, the
compacted grass inside like a crop circle in the shape of a
man. She strokes where his cheek pressed to the ground,
almost sees his face bristling with irritation as it did the
morning she complained about the unmown lawn.
Without looking around, she climbs into the outline of him
and lays down, careful to keep herself entirely within its
boundaries. She gently places her head on his broad chest,
spooning her legs onto his, just as she used to when they were
younger. The smell of cut grass is an embrace now, where, in
the hospital, kissing the fingers of his cooling hands, it had
overwhelmed her. Annie lies still and listens for his heartbeat.
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