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Nov 3rd, 2013
FratBro23
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I found two or three pictures that I can say I was truly happy. One is of me in my wheelchair the only wheelchair that I have ever had that I could really depend on. I had always wanted a chair like this but you know how insurance companies are they just want to see the cheapest one that they can get by with. It really doesn’t matter what the person needs. I really like to go off the beaten path so to speak. I happened to be working at goodwill and the chair was donated. That chair took me places! In the spring and summer I would cruise all over the city. I loved it. I remember feeling as if I could fly . I honestly think that my soul and spirit did fly. After all I was doing what I loved to do and I was in love. Ten years ago I thought I had it all but it came crashing down on me. I had the love of my life and we were very happy and one day he just died. Of course he was differently abled just like i am i'm in a wheelchair and have cerebral palsy . after he died i tried to live in that apartment that we shared while I was waiting for another wheelchair friendly apartment to come along. I couldn't wait so I thought I could come down to kentucky and stay with my mother and grandmother for a while. To say that moving from a big city like saint paul Minnesota to a small town in Kentucky was a shock would be an understatement. Then I  learned that my mother was sick with Parkinsons  Disease from  my grandma and would I be able to take care of my mother so that she would not have to be in a nursing home. I said yes without even thinking about it. Over the years my mother has grown  worse  my grandma died in 2009. My mother had to have brain surgery in  2010.  The brain surgery was supposed to help but the surgery didn’t help much. I started getting the idea that I would be here and there was not even a door to my room so my room was completely open  and it didn’t matter who was here or what I was doing anyone and everybody could see I had no privacy I started going to the university of phoenix I needed more room  in addition to the door. I was never heard  I wrote  Ellen, dr phil,  dr oz  Katie reeve foundation asking for help my plea for help has gone unheard  .  I need  some fun in my life I have not been anywhere in ten years I am so tired of being invisible not heard not seen totally invisible when I graduated from university of phoenix with a 3.76gpa no one even noticed and right now I am fighting a battle for a new  wheelchair I really want to be heard  I even wrote a letter  to ilanya fix my life  to  no  avail.


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