SIOP® Lesson Plan Template
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Date:
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Grade Level:
Topic:
Standards
Content Standard:
Coding
Subject/Content Area:
Wording
English Language Proficiency Standard:
Coding
Wording
Objectives (Specific, Observable, Measurable. Use professional terms here.)
Content Objective:
The student will
Language Objective:
The student will
Preparation: Explain how you will fulfill each of the following features for this specific lesson:
Language & Content objectives clearly defined, displayed, and reviewed with students
Content concepts appropriate for age and educational background level of students
Supplementary materials used to a high degree, making the lesson clear and meaningful
Adaptation of content to all levels of student proficiency
Meaningful activities that integrate lesson concepts with language practice opportunities for reading,
writing, listening, and/or speaking
Building Background: Explain how you will fulfill each of the following features for this specific lesson:
Concepts explicitly linked to students’ background experiences
Example:
Video clip “Title” – explain how students would connect this clip to their prior experience
Links explicitly made between past learning and new concepts
Key vocabulary emphasized (e.g. introduced, written, repeated, and highlighted for students to see)
Comprehensible Input:
Speech appropriate for students’ proficiency levels
Example:
Clear, simple English using familiar content vocabulary
Clear explanation of academic tasks
A variety of techniques used to make content concepts clear
Strategies: (Include multiple, specific teaching strategies & learning strategies by bulleted title only.
Each of these should be presented in the Lesson Delivery section by separate item number.)
Ample opportunities provided for students to use learning strategies
Example:
Think-Pair-Share to discuss objectives at the beginning of the lesson
Graphic organizer during vocabulary instruction
Word Sort during vocabulary review activity
Scaffolding techniques consistently used, assisting and supporting student understanding
A variety of questions or tasks that promote higher-order thinking skills
Interactions:
Frequent opportunities for interaction and discussion between teacher/student and among students,
which encourage elaborated responses about lesson concepts
Example:
Partners – occurs during Think-Pair-Share
Grouping configurations support language and content objectives of the lesson
Sufficient wait time for student responses consistently provided
Ample opportunities for students to clarify key concepts in L1 as needed with aide, peer, or L1 text
Practice/Application: (Name 3 different activities for students to practice the skills necessary to meet
the objectives. State the specific point in the lesson when each takes place, and identify the specific
content (C) objective, or language (L) objective (CL for both) to which it relates. These activities are
different from the assessment piece.) The activities incorporate the following features:
Hands-on materials and/or manipulatives provided for students to practice using new content knowledge
in the classroom
Activities provided for students to apply content and language knowledge
Activities integrate all language skills
Example:
Activity 1 Vocabulary Jeopardy – (C) occurs after vocabulary instruction
Activity 2
Activity 3
Lesson Delivery: (Provide a numbered list describing the step-by-step walk-through of a lesson plan
that fills a SINGLE class period (approximately 30 – 50 minutes, depending on grade level) from beginning
to end. It should describe how the content from all other SIOP components in this lesson plan come
together to form a comprehensible lesson for ELLs. Describe the entire lesson from beginning – Building
Background – to end Review/Assessment - in detail. Review your steps to ensure the following 4 features
have been satisfied:
Content objectives clearly supported by lesson delivery
Language objectives clearly supported by lesson delivery
Students engaged approximately 90% - 100% of the period
Pacing of the lesson appropriate to students’ ability levels
Example:
1) Begin the lesson with the Video clip, “Title” to connect this lesson to…
Review/Assessment Evaluation: (Describe how you will review/wrap-up the lesson, and also how
you will evaluate each student’s level of mastery on each of the stated objectives. This is not a general
statement, but a description or example of the specific evidence you will have to demonstrate whether
students have met the expectations or not.)
Example:
Review C1 by…
Assess C1 by…
References
(If you used any lesson plan website or resources from other sources for any part of this
lesson plan, please acknowledge that in this reference section in APA format. I have
included the references for all AZ standards. Please eliminate the ones you did not use.
If you utilized other sources for your standards, please delete the AZ standards and
reference the ones you used accordingly.
Arizona Department of Education. (2013). Arizona’s College and Career Ready Standards for
English language arts and literacy. Retrieved from http://www.azed.gov/standardspractices/englishlanguageartsstandards/
Arizona Department of Education. (2013). Arizona’s College and Career Ready Standards for
math. Retrieved from http://www.azed.gov/standards-practices/mathematics-standards-2/
Arizona Department of Education. (2005). Arizona Science Standard. Retrieved from
http://www.azed.gov/standards-practices/academic-standards/science-standard/
Arizona Department of Education. (2006). Arizona’s Social Studies Standard. Retrieved from
http://www.azed.gov/standards-practices/academic-standards/social-studies-standard/
Arizona Department of Education. (n.d.). Finalized English Language Proficiency (ELP)
Standards. Retrieved from http://www.azed.gov/english-language-learners/elps/
Verb Wheel Based on
Revised Bloom’s Taxonomy
Analogy Graph
Speech Collage
Poster
Story
Summary Drama
Outline
Photograph Tape Recording
Events
Diagram
Diagram
Cartoon
People
Sculpture
Confirm
Recordings
Photograph
Explain Convert Compare
Forecast
Dictionary
Relate Match Discuss
Predict
Select Estimate
Apply
Television
Describe
Illustration
Outline
Modify
Shows
Paraphrase
Write
Infer Build
List
Identify
Construct
List
Definition
Project
Locate
Recite
Prioritize
Understand
Text
Puzzle
State Label
Report
Reading
Name Draw
Sketch
Cartoon
Magazine
Apply
Record
Produce
Remember
Filmstrip
Articles
Repeat
Game
Compose
Analyze Survey
Play Book Combine
Create
Analyze
Sort
Article
Design
Categorize Syllogism
Generate
Investigate
Cartoon
Model
Hypothesize
Song
Compare
Evaluate
Formulate
Conclusion
Story
Debate
Originate
Graph
Justify
Set of Rules, Invent
Assess
Differentiate
Principles,
Judge
Revise
Examine
Argument
or Standards
Conclude Appraise
broken
down
Prioritize Rate Critique
Invention
Experiments
Criticize
Questionnaire
Report Survey
Court Trial
Report
Recommendation
Poem
Group Discussion
Self Evaluation
Conclusion
Editorial Valuing
Domain
Appropriate verbs
Student products
Printing Graphics II | Panther Creek High School
Depth of Knowledge (DOK) Levels
Define
Identify
Draw
Memorize
List
Label
Illustrate
Who,
What,
When,
Where,
Why
Measure
Arrange
Name
State
Tabulate
Repeat
Report
Infer
Use
Tell
Design
Recall
Quote
Categorize
Recognize
Recite
Match
Collect and Display
Connect
Identify Patterns
Level
Graph
One
Organize
Synthesize
(Recall)
Classify
Construct
Separate
Level
Level
Apply Concepts
Describe
Modify
Cause/Effect
Two
Four
Explain
Predict
(Skill/
(Extended
Interpret
Estimate
Critique
Concept)
Thinking)
Interpret
Compare
Level
Distinguish
Analyze
Relate
Calculate
Three
Use Context Cues
(Strategic Thinking)
Create
Prove
Revise
Apprise
Assess
Develop a Logical Argument
Construct
Make Observations
Use Concepts to Solve Non-Routine Problems
Summarize
Show
Compare
Explain Phenomena in Terms of Concepts
Formulate
Investigate
Draw Conclusions
Hypothesize
Differentiate
Cite Evidence
Critique
Level One Activities
Level Two Activities
Level Three Activities
Level Four Activities
Recall elements and details of story
structure, such as sequence of
events, character, plot and setting.
Identify and summarize the major
events in a narrative.
Support ideas with details and
examples.
Use context cues to identify the
meaning of unfamiliar words.
Use voice appropriate to the
purpose and audience.
Conduct a project that requires
specifying a problem, designing and
conducting an experiment, analyzing
its data, and reporting results/
solutions.
Solve routine multiple-step problems.
Identify research questions and
design investigations for a
scientific problem.
Conduct basic mathematical
calculations.
Label locations on a map.
Represent in words or diagrams a
scientific concept or relationship.
Perform routine procedures like
measuring length or using
punctuation marks correctly.
Describe the features of a place or
people.
Describe the cause/effect of a
particular event.
Identify patterns in events or
behavior.
Formulate a routine problem given
data and conditions.
Organize, represent and interpret
data.
Develop a scientific model for a
complex situation.
Determine the author’s purpose
and describe how it affects the
interpretation of a reading
selection.
Apply a concept in other contexts.
Apply mathematical model to
illuminate a problem or situation.
Analyze and synthesize
information from multiple sources.
Describe and illustrate how common
themes are found across texts from
different cultures.
Design a mathematical model to
inform and solve a practical
or abstract situation.
Webb, Norman L. and others. “Web Alignment Tool” 24 July 2005. Wisconsin Center of Educational Research. University of Wisconsin-Madison. 2 Feb. 2006. .
Creating a SIOP Lesson Plan: SEI Strategies
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Linguistic Scaffolds for Writing Effective Language Objectives
An effectively written language objective:
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Stems form the linguistic demands of a standards-based lesson task
Focuses on high-leverage language that will serve students in other contexts
Uses active verbs to name functions/purposes for using language in a specific student task
Specifies target language necessary to complete the task
Emphasizes development of expressive language skills, speaking and writing, without neglecting
listening and reading
Sample language objectives:
Students will articulate main idea and details using target vocabulary: topic, main idea, detail.
Students will describe a character’s emotions using precise adjectives.
Students will revise a paragraph using correct present tense and conditional verbs.
Students will report a group consensus using past tense citation verbs: determined, concluded.
Students will use present tense persuasive verbs to defend a position: maintain, contend.
Language Objective Frames:
Students will
(function: active verb phrase) using
Students will use
(language target) to
(language target)
.
(function: active verb phrase) .
Active Verb Bank to Name Functions for Expressive Language Tasks
articulate
defend
express
narrate
share
ask
define
identify
predict
state
compose
describe
justify
react to
summarize
compare
discuss
label
read
rephrase
contrast
elaborate
list
recite
revise
debate
explain
name
respond
write
Language objectives are most effectively communicated with verb phrases such as the following:
Students will point out similarities between…
Students will articulate events in sequence…
Students will express agreement…
Students will state opinions about….
Sample Noun Phrases Specifying Language Targets
academic vocabulary
complete sentences
subject verb agreement
precise adjectives
complex sentences
personal pronouns
citation verbs
clarifying questions
past-tense verbs
noun phrases
prepositional phrases
gerunds (verb + ing)
2011 Kate Kinsella, Ed.D. and Tonya Ward Singer
Language Objectives with Expressive Verbs and Specified Language Targets
Related to Reading Standards:
Students will…
• make predictions using future tense, and text feature vocabulary (e.g. headings, captions).
• formulate pre-reading questions using appropriate question structure.
• articulate main idea and details using key vocabulary: main idea, detail.
• prioritize arguments in a text using target adjectives: important, essential, significant.
• specify bias in a text by identifying adjectives and opinions.
• articulate cause and effect relationships within a thinking map using subordinating conjunctions: since,
because, when.
• describe a character’s emotions using precise adjectives.
• retell a narrative story using past tense verbs and adverbs of time (e.g. the next day, later that week)
• read text passages containing target vocabulary with prosody
• ask and answer “how” questions about main events using the past-tense.
Related to Writing Standards:
Students will…
• express an opinion in a topic sentence for a persuasive paragraph using strong verbs.
• write a persuasive paragraph using correct present and conditional verb tenses.
• articulate a position using strong present tense verbs: support, maintain, contend, believe.
• qualify a position using adverbs: agree/disagree…somewhat, entirely, absolutely, completely
• justify a position using relevant details and complete sentences.
• develop a supporting detail using complete and varied sentences.
• replace everyday vocabulary with precise word choices.
• write a personal narrative using regular and irregular past-tense verbs.
• provide anecdotes to support a point using regular and irregular past-tense verbs.
• summarize a non-fiction text using general present tense and citation verbs.
• revise sentence fragments into complex sentences.
• write habitual present tense sentences about a classmate’s routines using correct pronouns and subject verb
agreement.
• provide cohesion between sentences in exposition with appropriate transitional expressions.
• compose complex and simple sentences to support points in expository and persuasive writing.
• utilize precise word choices to convey actions, feelings, descriptors in narrative writing.
• utilize vocabulary, syntax and grammar reflective of academic register within writing.
• edit final drafts of sentences and paragraphs for appropriate tense, subject-verb agreement, pronoun
reference, fragments and run-on sentences.
Related to Classroom Discussion (Listening and Speaking):
Students will…
• restate a partner’s response using paraphrasing expressions (e.g. so what you are saying is)
• listen for and point out similarities in ideas using target language: My idea is similar to/builds upon.
• report a group consensus using past-tense citation verbs: determined, concluded.
• articulate a perspective using strong present tense verbs: believe, agree/disagree, support
• analyze word parts to determine meaning using precise terms: prefix, suffix, root word
• define the unit concept stereotype using complete sentences and target vocabulary.
• listen for and record precise adjectives used by classmates to describe a character’s reactions.
2011 Kate Kinsella, Ed.D. and Tonya Ward Singer
Planning Tool for Writing Language Objectives
Teacher:
Lesson Source:
Page _____
1. What is the standards-based lesson focus?
Grade 7 ELA Standards 2.5 (CA Standards Writing Test – CSWT)
Write a summary of reading material: include the main idea and significant details.
2. What is the actual student task? What are students expected to do?
Write a formal summary of an informational article: Plastic or Paper?
3. What verbal and written responses can I anticipate from my students, unless I
model the process, clarify the text structure, and guide language use?
Without explicit instruction addressing the structure and linguistic features of a formal
summary of an informational article, students will approach the process as if they were
writing an informal summary of the most recent character and plot developments in a
narrative text. They are apt to inject personal opinions and fail to clearly state the main
idea and most essential details. They are likely to present the information in a random
manner, omitting cohesive transitions. Under-prepared writers will also be unfamiliar
with citation verbs and use of the habitual/historical present tense used when
summarizing information text.
4. What would be the ideal and most linguistically adept response(s) for this age
and proficiency group? First write a model response, then write a response
frame. As needed, provide a word bank and/or grammatical scaffold.
In the article entitled ___, the author (author’s full name) ___ (verb: discusses) the
topic of ___. First, (author’s last name) ___ points out that ___ (important detail).
The article also (verb: includes, describes) ___ (important detail). In addition, the author
(verb: reports, states) that ___ (important detail). Finally, (author’s last name) ___
concludes by emphasizing that ___ (author’s final point).
5. Write a statement describing the language objective(s). Students will …
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summarize an informational article using citation verbs: describe, discuss, state,
report, point out, emphasize, conclude
•
cite an author in a formal summary using 3rd person singular, habitual present tense
•
introduce essential details in a formal summary using sequencing transitions: first,
also, in addition, finally
© Kate Kinsella, Ed.D. (2011)
Planning Tool for Writing Language Objectives
Teacher:
Lesson Source:
Page _____
1. What is the standards-based lesson focus?
Grade 6 ELA Reading Standards 2.1
Identify the structural features of informational materials (e.g., magazine articles) and
utilize them to make predictions about text content and obtain information.
2. What is the actual student task? What are students expected to do?
Make verbal predictions about text content using structural features of a news article.
3. What verbal and written responses can I anticipate from my students, unless I
model the process, clarify the text structure, and guide language use?
Without explicit instruction addressing the sentence structure for making a formal
prediction and the specific names of text features, students will do the following:
•
•
respond restating simple words and phrases in the headings
use informal, simple sentences using imprecise terms
4. What would be the ideal and most linguistically adept response(s) for this age
and proficiency group? First write a model response, then write a response
frame. As needed, provide a word bank and/or grammatical scaffold.
Based on the (title, heading, subheading, image, caption), I (predict/imagine) that
the article will (focus on, discuss) __.
5. Write a statement describing the language objective(s). Students will …
•
make predictions about informational text content using precise verbs in the first
person, present tense: I predict that…, I imagine that…
•
make predictions about text content using precise formal verbs in the future tense:
the article will focus on…the article will discuss…
•
justify predictions about text content using the formal expression based on…
•
reference text features to make predictions using precise nouns: title, heading,
image, caption, chart, graph
© Kate Kinsella, Ed.D. (2011)
Academic Discussion Topic: Act iv e Listenin g
THINK:
Briefly record your personal responses to this question:
Ho w d oes a les so n pa rt ner de m onst rat e act ive lis ten in g?
1.
2.
3.
WRITE:
Frame:
Rewrite one idea using the sentence frame. Include a precise verb.
If time permits, write a second sentence.
A lesson partner demonstrates active listening when she/he
(third person singular, habitual present tense: responds politely).
Verb Bank:
Everyday
Precise
helps
lets
answers
writes
repeats
responds
records
restates
Response:
Response:
DISCUSS: Listen attentively to and record notes on your classmates’ ideas.
Begin by restating and recording your partner’s idea.
Classmates’ names
Ideas
1.
2.
3.
4.
REPORT:
Prepare to report your idea during the whole group discussion.
Listen attentively, and utilize frames to point out similarities.
•My idea is similar to
’s.
•My idea builds upon
’s.
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Read 180 R eact and Write
(Ten-Minute Paper: Topi c Sentence + Two Supporting Details)
Active Listenin g with Lesson P artners
I do
Und er line t he t op ic se nte n ce. C he ck tw o su pp or ting “s ho win g” deta ils.
A partner demonstrates active listening when she asks clarifying questions if she is
confused. For example, she might politely ask “What exactly do you mean by that?”
When my partner asks a clarifying question, I know that she cares about my ideas
and wants to get them right.
We do
Wor k wit h you r tea cher to wr ite a Te n- M in ute Pape r .
A partner demonstrates active listening when he makes eye contact with me. For
example, he would look directly at me while I am
. When my
partner makes eye contact with me, I know that he is really
me and not worrying about what other classmates are
You’ll do
Writ e a Te n- M in ute Pap er with yo ur par tner .
A partner demonstrates active listening when he
For example,
When my partner
You do
, I know that
Ch oo se a not he r de tail a nd wr ite a Te n- M in ute Pape r on yo ur ow n .
A partner demonstrates active listening when she
For example,
Kate Kinsella Ed.D. 2010
When my partner
, I know that
Pr oo fread in g Task s:
Underline each verb. Do your 3rd person singular verbs end in –s
(e.g., my partner shares)?
Circle three precise words you included.
Kate Kinsella Ed.D. 2010
Steps in Summarizing Informational Text
Sample Formal Informational Text Summary
In the article entitled “LAUSD Goes Sweatfree’” Lawrence Gable examines Los Angeles Unified
School District’s decision to not purchase products from vendors that were manufactured in sweatshops
within or outside of the United States. Gable reports that LAUSD, the second-largest school district in the
country, spends millions annually on furniture, uniforms, and equipment. Because of the district’s vast
budget, LAUSD is placing pressure upon vendors to report where they acquired their products and to only
obtain merchandise from industries that offer safe and legal working conditions. Gable emphasizes that
suppliers must also guarantee that no children are employed, and that all laborers earn a “non-poverty”
wage and have the right to form a union. He explains LAUSD’s reasons for taking this action. First, the
large urban district serves thousands of immigrant families, with many relatives employed by sweatshops
in Southern California. In addition, the district wants to make sure children are actually attending school,
instead of working to earn money for their families. Finally, Gable concludes that the district plans to
enforce its “sweatfree” policy by charging a $1,000 penalty for any violation, and by working with unions
and community members who will inform the district about any manufacturers who ignore labor laws.
Step 1
Highlight the most important points in the article.
Step 2
Make a brief outline of the most important points.
Step 3
Mention the author, the specific genre, and the title of the
article in your first sentence.
Step 4
State the topic of the article and the thesis/main idea
at the beginning of your summary.
Step 5
Include only the most important points and supporting details.
Step 6
Paraphrase the author’s ideas rather than copy sentences, but be sure to
include some of the key topic vocabulary used in the article.
Step 7
Don’t include your personal opinions or experiences.
Step 8
Present the ideas in the order in which they were discussed
in the reading selection.
Step 9
Introduce the author’s key points with citation verbs using the present tense
(e.g., the author points out, the writer mentions, Gable emphasizes).
Step 10
Use transitional expressions to make connections between ideas (e.g. first,
also, in addition, furthermore, finally)
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Writing Frame – A Formal Summary of an Informational Text
In the (genre: article, essay, editorial, report)
entitled (title)
(author’s complete name)
(verb: explores, investigates, discusses)
(topic and main idea/thesis: the topic of… the reasons why… the issue of….)
First, (author’s last name) points out that
The writer/author/journalist also indicates that
In addition, s/he states that
Moreover, s/he emphasizes that
Finally, (author’s last name)
concludes that
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BY LAWRENCE GABLE
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VOL 5, NO 9 MAY 2004
he Los Angeles Unified School District
(LAUSD) is the second-largest district
in the country. It has more than a thousand schools and education centers.
Every year it spends millions on things like
furniture, uniforms and equipment. From
now on LAUSD wants more for its
money. It wants a guarantee
from vendors that nothing
came from a sweatshop.
Sweatshops started in Britain in the late
19th century. Workers
sewed garments at home
or in small workshops. These
sweatshops crowded workers
into unsafe, unhealthy conditions.
They worked long hours for low
wages. Usually the workers were
women and children.
Now other industries run
sweatshops too. They exist
wherever people are desperate
for work. In poor countries the workers may
be citizens. In rich countries they are often
illegal immigrants who are looking for better
lives. Smugglers promise them good jobs,
but they end up in bad situations. They do
not know about labor laws. Bosses often force
them to work unpaid overtime. They also
abuse workers verbally and physically.
Now vendors must tell LAUSD where
products come from. They must guarantee
that workers earn a “non-poverty” wage.
They also must guarantee that working
conditions are safe. Workers must have the
right to form a union, and the factory may not
use child labor.
The school district has several reasons
for taking this action. It serves many immigrant families. Some of those parents may be
working in sweatshops in Southern California.
Also, if children are working in sweatshops
there or anywhere else, the district wants
them in school instead.
LAUSD got help
from several organizations. One is a labor
union in the garment
industry. Another
is the Campaign for
the Abolition of
Sweatshops and Child
Labor. This group believes
that the school district can
become a model for others.
Already the City of Los Angeles
is considering taking similar
action.
It is not clear exactly
how the district will enforce its
new “sweatfree” policy. District officials may
visit some suppliers. Activists also will
inform the district about manufacturers that
ignore labor laws. The penalty for any violation is $1,000. In addition, LAUSD will never
do business with that vendor again.
Factories will change if they have a
reason to. LAUSD is giving them a $500
million reason. At the same time, it is setting
an example for students and families in the
district. The sooner people refuse to buy
products from sweatshops, the sooner working conditions will change for workers here
and around the world.
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BY LAWRENCE GABLE
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VOL 5, NO 9 MAY 2004
BIOGRAPHY
DAVID TOKOFSKY
SCHOOL BOARD MEMBER, LOS ANGELES UNIFIED SCHOOL DISTRICT
David Tokofsky has been connected to schools
Tokofsky believed in changing the world. They
in Los Angeles since he was small. He attended challenged him to run for office. In 1995 ran
elementary, middle and high schools there. For for School Board. Some of his students campaigned door-to-door for him. He won that
twelve years he taught there too. Now he is a
election, and has won two more since then.
member of the LAUSD Board of Education.
A typical day for David
David’s father was an
Tokofsky starts with meetings.
executive for Columbia Pictures
These may be with community
in Hollywood. David was born
organizations, schools or public
there, but his family moved to
officials. His favorite part of the
west Los Angeles when he was
job is its variety. He works with
six. As he grew up, David never
many people on all kinds of
felt any attraction to the movie
issues. He represents 130 schools
industry. Instead he became a
across 40 miles of Los Angeles.
teacher like his mother.
Several days each week he visits
Social issues have always
one of the schools.
interested him. At twelve years
Mr. Tokofsky was proud
old he volunteered in George
to lead LAUSD on the sweat shop
McGovern’s campaign for
“As
a
former
teacher,
I
issue. When his ancestors came
president. In high school he
understand that teachers to New York 100 years ago, many
expressed his ideas on issues
make dozens of important
of them were laborers. Now he
like oil drilling and school
decisions every day.”
has several friends who fight the
busing. When he graduated, his
abuse of workers. He saw this as a chance for
classmates voted him “Most Outspoken.”
him and the school district to join the fight.
In college at UC Berkeley Mr. Tokofsky
There is little time now for David
earned degrees in History and Spanish. He
Tokofsky to relax. In his free time he is busy
spent five years in college. For one of them he
with his two young daughters. Then there are
studied in Barcelona, Spain. When he wanted
lots of other things to work on in the district.
to start teaching, he returned to Los Angeles.
One of them will be to do more for middle
The district was hiring lots of teachers then.
school teachers and students. Mr. Tokofsky
The fact that he spoke Spanish helped him get
says he always will work in education. As new
a job there. He taught Social Studies at John
issues come up, everyone knows he will take an
Marshall High School.
active part in the debate.
Students in his classes knew that Mr.
SWEATSHOPS
Background Information
LAUSD’s board of education approved the new
policy unanimously. Its policy is broader than those
of some universities and cities. They usually apply
only to clothing with school logos, items in school
bookstores, or police and fire uniforms.
LAUSD did not pledge any money for enforcement.
Activists had wanted the district to spend $125,000
on a third-party certification group.
The garment workers’ union that worked with
LAUSD is UNITE (Union of Needletrades,
Industrial and Textile Employees).
Sweatshops in Great Britain were part of the
“sweating system.” Workers usually received pay
based on how many pieces they sewed. The AntiSweating League was formed in 1906.
accessories for state workers such as Highway Patrol
officers.
Sweatshop operators often fire workers for being
sick. They also fire pregnant women.
Topics for Discussion and Writing
• Price is one factor in the decision to buy something.
Name some others.
• If companies abuse their workers, are you abusing
them too when you buy their products?
• Why are 90% of all sweatshop workers women?
• Why do labor unions exist?
• Identify some professions that do not have unions,
and explain why that is the case.
Vocabulary
The U.S. Department of Labor defines a workplace
as a sweatshop if it violates two or more basic labor
laws. Those include child labor, minimum wage,
overtime and fire safety.
Article-specific: vendor; garment; smuggler;
abolition; supplier
High-use: desperate; to abuse; to enforce; activist;
violation
In 1996 the U.S. Department of Labor estimated
that out of 22,000 U.S. garment shops, at least half
of them violated wage and safety laws.
Sources
The United Nations says that smuggling people is
the fastest-growing business of organized crime.
The U.S. wiped out sweatshops in 1938. The government passed the Fair Labor Standards Act to
protect the rights of workers. Labor unions raised
salaries and fought for safe, fair working conditions.
Sweatshops reappeared in the late 1960s, especially
as new immigrant workers came to the U.S.
In a 1999 survey 77% of consumers said that a “No
Sweat” label, if one existed, would influence which
products they buy.
In 1991 Levi Strauss & Co. was the first U.S. company to demand that their suppliers did not use
sweatshops.
In Pakistan thousands of children used to work full
time making soccer balls. International organizations like UNICEF and the ILO worked with the
industry to remove the children. Today women in
villages do the work and children go to school.
The State of California’s policy covers uniforms and
Los Angeles Times March 25, 2004
Calgary Herald February 29, 2004
History Today December 1, 2002
No More Sweatshops www.abolishsweatshops.org
Los Angeles Unified School District
www.lausd.k12.ca.us
“Between a Rock and a Hard Place”
by P. Liebhold and H. Rubenstein
americanhistory.si.edu/sweatshops
CA Curricular Standards (4 –12)
English - Language Arts
Reading 1.0 Vocabulary Development
2.0 Comprehension (Informational
Materials)
Writing 1.0 Writing Strategies
2.0 Writing Applications
ELD—Intermediate and Advanced
Reading Vocabulary Development /Comprehension
Writing Strategies and Applications
Listening and Speaking
History-Social Science
4.4; 4.5; 8.6; 8.9; 8.12; 11.2; 11.3; 11.6; 11.11
Economics 12.4; 12.6
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