develop a multi-paragraph response, assignment help

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Question Description

When deciding which students to admit, colleges consider many factors about each student. After all, colleges are interested in building a student body that is academically curious, but also diverse and actively engaged in a range of productive, creative activities.



Write a personal statement to be read by a college admissions officer. In this statement, discuss how your academic interests, extracurricular activities, and life experiences will benefit the college community.



As you write, remember your essay will be scored based on how well you:



  • develop a multi-paragraph response to the assigned topic that clearly communicates your controlling idea to the audience.
  • support your controlling idea with meaningful examples, reasons, and information based upon your research or readings.
  • organize your essay in a clear and logical manner, including an introduction, body, and conclusion.
  • use well-structured sentences and language that are appropriate for your audience.
  • edit your work to conform to the conventions of standard American English.

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hippocampus
School: Cornell University

Here

Running Head: PERSONAL STATEMENT

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Personal Statement
Name
College
Course
Tutor
Date

PERSONAL STATEMENT

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I am applying for a space in the college to study Business Administration since I have
always wished to change the business environment and enhance people’s lives. With a college
degree in the course, I believe I can be able to do this effectively. My interest in the course
developed when I realized that many people in the society suffer due to unemployment and poor
social amenities in place. This fact greatly demo...

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