Description
Highlight the errors (if error is a missing comma, period, semi-colon, etc, highlight word prior to where the comma, semi-colon, etc should be placed) in the letter using the highlighting function in Adobe Reader.
Explanation & Answer
Kindly find the answer.Mistakes highlighted in red
Proofreading/Editing. Circle/highlight the twenty mistakes in the letter on the
following page. Corrections are not required.
Bay City Information Systems
151 Bayview Road
(650) 403-7849
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San Francisco, CA
81153
www.baycity.com
May 5, 2014
Ms. Mary E. Sanders
Personnal Director
Cyclops Communication Technologies
1050 South Sierra Avenue
Los Angeles, CA 90019
Dear Ms. Anders:
I am responding to your request for an evaluation of Colleen Karmichael. Colleen was
hired as a clerk-typist by Bay City Informative Systems on April 4, 2012 and was
promoted to Administrative Assistant on August 1, 2013. At her review in June, I
recommended that she be promoted again. She is an intelligent, young woman with
good work habits’ and a good knowledge of computer software.
As an Administrative Assistant, Colleen not only hand...