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I need someone to proofread and improve this already perfectly finished 2 page essay (Improve the grammar, sentence structure and improve writing by reading through a few times). Thats all

The essay will be attached for you after assigning the tutor.

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School: UT Austin

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OUTLINE

1. INTRODUCTION
2. BODY
3. CONCLUSION
4. REFERENCE


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English
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Date:

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A Breathtaking Memory
“I feel better than I look. I do” said my mother as she lay on the bed with her hand
tightly clutched onto mine. Her face was contorted into a grimace of pain as she struggled to turn
her head and look directly at me. For as long as I could recall, I had never noticed this strange
image on my mother’s face. My mind was still reeling from this encounter when they wheeled
me into my father’s room; he appeared to be in a better state compared to my mother. However,
beneath the tough and collected front on his face, I knew he was in pain and knowing that he was
trying to mask it with a broken smile was my undoing. This had sincerely become reckoning day.
About twelve years ago when this particular ordeal had begun, nobody in my family
knew that it would end up the way it did. Back then, I had encountered numerous difficulties
while trying to wake up in the morning. When my alarm rang, I could throw it across the room
into an adjacent wall and continue with my sleep. Most days, however, I used to be an early riser
since I had classes to attend and I never liked getting late during such days. This particular day,
however, was going to be the third day into the annual holiday and it gave me limited reasons of
waking up early. The fact that I had only slept for a few hours did not help my situation. I
remember coming up with a list of reasons why I did not want to “divorce my beddings” on this
particular morning. Just as I started to fall asleep aga...

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