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I have wrote a research paper. I did the first draft and i get it back so, I wanna edit the research paper such as grammar, spilling, and correct the sentences, plus there are a notes in each mistake.

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Why The Gun Laws in The U.S. Needs to be More Stricter? In the United States of America, the people have the right to have guns because it is written in the state constitution. Every State regulate the possession and using of the firearms and ammunition, and every states have it is difference perspective in regulation. Firearms owners are subject to the states that they are in, not in the state of residence. Some states ask to have permits in order to maintain a gun and some are not, but some states do recognize other states and other do not. As a result, there are no unity (state-by-state basis) between the states in gun regulation in permits. However, according to the United States constitution, the second Amendment of the Bill of Rights is that you have the “right to keep and bear arms in the United States”. The question is, did the gun laws have protected the citizens from the misuse of the firearms typically when they in counter between them? Firearms have a greater impact on the death of the people in the United States. According to Everytown research organization, collected from U.S. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention(CDC). There are 93 people how have been killed by a gun in each day, the average of the homeside in each day it estimated nearly about 12,000 of killing. Also, 2 or more injuries happen when an individual have been killed in each day, and 63 of the death by firearms are suidesuide. On average day, 7 children or teens (below 19 years old) have been killed by a firearm. On average month, nearly 60 women are killed by their life partner. One of the major issue in gun laws, is having a law called “Stand Your Ground” laws. According to John Lott in Chicago Tribune , it is a concept of self-defense of using deadly force when the police are not in present and currently applies in 27 states. He also asserts that black have more beneficial of this law because they majority of black communities lives in poor areas 2 where near to the hot spot. However, having a law that present to individuals to act like more ambiguity because they might end into to a several wrong actions. According to CNN in “Trayvon Martin Shooting Fast Facts”, a seventeen years, Trayvon Martin an African-American how died in a fatal shot in Sanford, Florida. George Zimmerman who is a neighborhood watch at the Retreat at Twin Lakes gated community, he called 911 reporting that there are a "A suspicious person", he did not follow the dispatcher order to stay in his patrol. He left his car and followed Martin and killed him because he claimed that it was a self-defense. The Police Officer “Timothy Smith writes that Zimmerman was bleeding from the nose and back of the head”, and the court ruled in favor of George Zimmerman. Critically, authorizing individuals to use deadly force in public as a self-defense might bring some discrimination against the African-American in the justice system. Some people might use this law as a free ride ticket to get out of jail especially in poor areas. According to John Lott in Los Angeles Times, he provides a date that conducted from 200 cases between 14-81 defenders. “Nearly 70% of defendants who invoked the law were set free. Defendants were significantly more likely to prevail if the victim was black, and the defense worked even in cases in which deadly force was used against unarmed victims by people who developed a "reasonable fear" for their life and safety only after provoking the victim”. So, giving the people a firearms and provide this law, it is really unfair for those who died in wrong actions. In the end, the use of firearms needs to be more strict in this country. Many people died because of these guns are in the streets especially in the poor urban. I believe this law needs to be reviewed again by the law makers because it is a not great idea to let the individuals to use deadly force compared in authorization to law enforcement. This is the police job to protect the people, so if this law removed and replaced by a new solution to reduce gun violence particle who use this law as free way ticket. Works Cited CNN Library. “Trayvon Martin Shooting Fast Facts.” CNN, 28 Feb 2017. “Gun Violence by the Numbers.” Everytown Research, 2015, https://everytownresearch.org/gunviolence-by-the-numbers/#foot_note_1. Lott, John. "In Defense of Stand Your Ground Laws." Chicago Tribune: 19. Oct 29 2013. ProQuest. Web. 14 Mar. 2017. Moreno, Joelle A. "Perils of 'Stand Your Ground'." Los Angeles Times Jul 22 2013. ProQuest. Web. 14 Mar. 2017. ...
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Why the Gun Laws in The U.S. Needs to be More Stricter
In the United States of America, the people have the right to have guns because it is
written in the US Constitution as well. Every state regulates the possession and use of the
firearms and ammunition, and every state has its different perspective in regulation. Firearms
owners are subject to the states that they are in, not in the state of their residence. Some states
ask to have permits in order to maintain a gun and some do not, but some states do recognize this
variation other states and others do not. As a result, there is no unity (state-by-state basis)
between the states in gun regulation and in permits. However, according to the United States
Constitution the second Amendment Is that you have the “right to keep and bear arms in the
United States. The question is, did the gun laws have protected the citizens from the misuse of
the firearms typically when they in counter between them?
Firearms have a huge impact on the death of the people in the United States. A...

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