Reword/revise these two pages of a persuasive research essay in better, more understanding words.

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These are two pages of a persuasive research essay on why Syrian refugees should be allowed to come into the U.S., with the goal of humanizing refugees as persons instead of terrorists (and why the link between the two is very low) as well as counter-arguing any form of opposition mainly coming from Americans that oppose their coming. However, many think that this came off rather confusing, with too much high vocabulary, and in terms of explaining my points.

Please keep the length approximately the same, and add any desired or necessary revisions of your own, for instance adding more supporting information, but primarily re-wording this for a freshmen in college.

The whole essay is available if you would like for your better understanding, but only the two pages highlighted in black frames must be fixed. That is all.

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doctorsei
School: UC Berkeley

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Running head: SYRIA REFUGEE

Syria Refugee
Institution Affiliation
Instructor’s Name
Student’s Name
Date

SYRIA REFUGEE
2

Since the Syrian war in 2011, many have fled the country and settled in neighboring states,
for example, Lebanon, Egypt, and Turkey. Iraq, Jordan, and Egypt. Right now, there are four
million Syria enrolled regions
As per the World Bank report, the cost of Syria war for the center east is around thirty-five
billion dollars (Byman). This sum would be singular amount if it somehow happened to
proceed with this has been a noteworthy motivation behind why ousts need to move to
Europe for quite a while now, and it has come about into one of the significant migration
issues in Europe. By and by there are around 9 millio...

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Anonymous
Tutor went the extra mile to help me with this essay. Citations were a bit shaky but I appreciated how well he handled APA styles and how ok he was to change them even though I didnt specify. Got a B+ which is believable and acceptable.

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