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Wenqing Wei
Writing 4
Essay 1st Draft
April 14th, 2017
Sexual Education
Sexual abuse and immorality among young people have been rampant since the last two
decades, when access to the internet and new technologies became accessible for the clear
majority. Many feel that there is need to educate these young people on the important issues that
are associated with sexual relations. But what if you are a parent to a young girl or boy? Where
do you start on all this? Should some laws force parents to talk to their children about sexual
relations? Are educational institutions doing anything about the issue? It could also be argued
out that the parents can work together with the educational institutions on this. If parents were to
be required by the law to teach sex education at home, children would be less prone to sexual
predation and wrong sexual decisions, since they will be able to understa...