-so you currently have 628
points within the course and need at least 700 points to pass the course with a
minimum score of 70%. You need to score at least 72 points out of 100 on the
final research paper to pass the course with a 70%.
please note your paper needs references - there needs to be a lot more added. I
think your professor might have a problem with the way that references have
used...this is something you need to do on your own.
the paper after my
edits should get you a B - . The problem is that there is a lot of
information but nothing that actually helps support your thesis - but after my
edits, the paper is not that bad.
However, like I mentioned, if you do submit it
in, your mark (if I was marking it) would be somewhere between 67-72. It depends on your professor - maybe he or she will give you a