Description
CONTENT
• Does the presentation give you a good sense of the topic, scope, purpose and argument?
• Is the information presented clearly?
• Are the main points of the presentation organized appropriately?
• Has the presenter effectively outlined the argument, the premises and the appropriate evidence?
• Is the background information relevant?
• Was the presentation persuasive?
• Did the presenter introduce?
• Did the presenter provoke or attempt to provoke discussion?
Overall Comments on Content:
DELIVERY
• Did the presenter keep a lively tone and maintain eye contact with the audience?
• Did the presenter maintain an acceptable overall posture and body language?
• Was the presenter well-dressed?
• Did the presenter stay within the time limit?
• Were the visuals of the presentation nicely designed and relevant for the speech?
• Did the presenter make good use/seem comfortable using the recording software?
• Does the presenter demonstrate an awareness of both the physical and virtual audience?
• Did the delivery elements help to strengthen the argument/position of the presenter?
Explanation & Answer
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Communication: Speech Review
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Speech One
The presentation offers an excellent sense of the topic since the presenter starts by mentioning
the topic of the presentation, the scope, and the purpose. The presenter is clear about this dream
role in the job, and supports this with the skills needed that makes him the best person for the
job. The presenter provides a premise for the argument, noting that “I knew I would become a
trader since the first day I entered school”. He supports the premise with the skills he has
acquired in his studies. Although the background has some relevance, some words are not clear
and therefore lack in-depth persuasion. The presenter made minimal effort to evoke a discussion
and sounded rather hasty with a tensed tone. The presenter does an excellent job maintaining eye
contact and body language, and he is well dressed, inspiring confidence. Besides, he stays within
the time limit and includes visuals in the presentation, such as images relevant to the speech. The
presentation is properly done using the software tool, but he is too focused...
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