Kyle Huang READING RESPONSES typed - need to bring iryhomework related to the work (book, essay, . Ideas MASTERY: The majority of the portfolio displays these characteristics. Clear understanding of readings and essay topics Strong awareness of what the reader needs to know about the topic Organization Clear ability to respond critically to one's own and others' experiences and ideas Controlling central idea and overall cohesive structure in each essay Clear sequential relationship between supporting ideas and central argument'controlling idea. Development Focused, cohesive paragraphs Relevant examples with clear explanations of what the examples demonstrate Explanations in body paragraphs clearly linked to controlling idea of essay Examples which include detailed support Evidence of strong synthesis, argumentation, analysis, and/or problem-solving skills Style Sentence variety Strong voice and control of tone Effective vocabulary Mechanics Fluency and control of sentence construction Almost no syntactic, grammatical, and spelling errors Ideas COMPETENCE: The majority of the portfolio will display these characteristics. Demonstration of basic understanding of readings and essay topics Most essays show awareness of what the reader needs to know about the topic Demonstration of ability to respond critically to one's own and others' experiences and ideas. Organization Controlling central idea and generally cohesive structure in each essay Generally clear sequential relationship between supporting ideas and central argument controlling idea. Generally focused, cohesive paragraphs Development Mainly relevant examples with clear explanations of what the examples demonstrate Explanations in body paragraphs usually linked to controlling idea of essay Most examples include specific details Across the portfolio, writing shows evidence of synthesis, argumentation, analysis, and/or problem-solving skills Style Sentences include some variety Sentences usually include effective vocabulary Mechanics General fluency and control of sentence construction Minimal syntactic, grammatical, and spelling errors NOT PASSING: The majority of the portfolio lacks the characteristics of the passing portfolios. Ideas Limited understanding of readings and essay topics Limited awareness of what the reader needs to know about the topic The portfolio includes minimal critical response to one's own and others' experiences and ideas. Organization Lacks overall of a central focus and logical structure Light or uneven relationships between supporting ideas and central argument/controlling idea The majority of the paragraphs do not cohere and are not focused Development Body paragraphs include few examples or minimal explanations of what the examples demonstrate Explanations in body paragraphs occasionally linked to the controlling idea of the essay Examples occasionally include specific details Across the portfolio, essays are mainly developed through summary, narrative and/or description Style Sentences only occasionally show variety Vocabulary is very basic Mechanics Limited fluency and control of sentence construction Frequent syntactical, grammar, and/or spelling errors Kyle Huarg. OFSPONSES Freewriting Ir related to the work (book, essay, - will be assigned a ill be Reflective Essay Content: Write an essay of at least two pages (500 words) to look back on your progress in writing this quarter and explain why you are ready to go to EWRT1A. This goes in the front Review all the work you've done for the class. Consider why you chose the essays in your portfolio and how they show your readiness for EWRTIA. Give specific examples from these essays to show your improvements. Discuss what you have learned in LART 211 or EWRT 211. This might include practice in organization, analysis, development, vivid examples, construction of better sentences, proofreading, writing process, and so on. You also may include learning from EWRT 212 or Readiness classes. Include how your writing has changed as a result of what you have learned in this class. Remember to provide specific evidence for your claims. & What still needs improvement? Write about what you'd still like to work on with your writing. Remember that all of us are still trying to be better writers, so what are you going to focus on in 1A and beyond? Audience: De Anza English teachers What we're looking for in the reflective essay: a Clear organization (Thesis, topic, raingt row, promoting outline, drafting getting teedback, revising, Well-developed, focused paragraphs & Specific examples, details Well-constructed sentences * Correct grammar and punctuation a Form: typed, double-spaced * Due: This essay is due as part of your portfolio on When we do a reading, you will often need to bring inhomework related to the work (book, essay, typed poem, etc.) we read. Some of the types of assignments are listed below ** natin number of each kind of ei... w S wf (use adjective noun of teaching or the guide to have more interaction with students. A good passion frag teacher would love to spend her/his own personal time on students to explore students' deeper mind. To discover what students could create or explore their talent. VE I know since I go to school in China, I had witness many terrible scene that teacher went destroyed one's dream, destroy student's talent by their own selfishness in order to get advances from the school principle or the compliment from students' parent. Another important thing is fair equivalence of each student. Each student in the class, there are independent personality. Teachers should respect them, whether good or bad grades, Whether disciplined, or often violate discipline. Especially the result more bad of the الناز can give you specific several good point but The awk) confusing sentences, in examples? frag understanding pode poor students, self-discipline. Teachers should be much concern, more ank encouragement. Because they step into society development point also unlike auk meritorious students in the shade. All the information above of becoming a good teacher I believe Mr.Greene has was he the English teacher? done all the good teacher part. He has given so much for student. I see no wrong with him as a point of view from a normal students like me. I always put myself in others apostrophe Omissbord shoes, to experience how difficult it is to become a teacher. Teacher has to prepare the lecture for the students every night for next day's class. I can see that Mr. Greene spent so much time on it more than everyone can imagine. For young people like us; tired and wf-look up reading a bunch of papers and books is tired, yes, I admit that it is tired for me. I tiring would prefer spend my time on work rather than spend it on books and papers. But think about it before you really tell it around. How about the teachers? They got to get have the lecture ready for students and correct a bunch of papers and essay. Not only for I'm not pl sure, this, adds that much to mo The essay or replacing with you perences, wyle wong shows evidence of Senten wang idea of eso strate often need to bring in homewand Some of the types of assion humber of each kind. typed one class, it's for 2 or more classes. They got to stay at home to finish all those things then sleep. I can really see how hard it is to become a teacher, and I can see how hard it is for Mr.Greene. auk or ww The vicissitudes from his face every morning when I come to his class , is the face of a responsible teacher. Education is extremely important to society as a whole. The future, the mission of becoming a great society, this one job is handed to the career that I respect the most. Teachers should stand loneliness, withstand the temptation of money, even to the right. Otherwise it will cause oneself psychological confing ank E unbalance, teaching them. If the teacher in class, and for some reason preference a ts classmate, not equally. Then the teacher will be lost in the student mind the prestige of the teachers and dignity. Then also student would lost faith in it. Time flies so fast. Now I am at college, sometimes English classes remind me of him. The passion that he gave me to learn English. The happiness he gave me whenever I had a bad mood. He sometimes got mad because of other silly students heino a jerk He still remain calm and tried to cheer us with some jokes to ignore Criteria for Essay 1 (Education and You) English/Dayharsh Is your paper organized, coherent, and carefully planned to address the assignment? (Outlining is an important tool for this point.) Did you meet the following requirements from the assignment? V An interesting title + An introductory paragraph that BEGINS WITH A HOOK. Here you introduce your topic and STATE YOUR THESIS (the main point you to make about education) - A strong thesis that shows that you thought deeply about what made this part of your educational journey important (that is, explains the main thing you learned).- work on tin 3 + Several body paragraphs, each unified by a clear topic sentence, that develop the main point + Detailed, specific descriptions and examples that clearly communicate your ideas to the reader A narrative of your educational journey ✓ + A clear analysis of your educational experiences and what they mean. good start - Significant connection to another author, including relevant, well-integrated quotations or paraphrases missing + A strong conclusion that wraps the essay in a satisfying fashion - Clear, grammatical sentences that allow any reader to understand your points see notes Did you meet the minimum length requirement? 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