Kyle Huang
READING RESPONSES
typed
- need to bring iryhomework related to the work (book, essay,
.
Ideas
MASTERY: The majority of the portfolio displays these characteristics.
Clear understanding of readings and essay topics
Strong awareness of what the reader needs to know about the topic
Organization
Clear ability to respond critically to one's own and others' experiences and ideas
Controlling central idea and overall cohesive structure in each essay
Clear sequential relationship between supporting ideas and central argument'controlling idea.
Development
Focused, cohesive paragraphs
Relevant examples with clear explanations of what the examples demonstrate
Explanations in body paragraphs clearly linked to controlling idea of essay
Examples which include detailed support
Evidence of strong synthesis, argumentation, analysis, and/or problem-solving skills
Style
Sentence variety
Strong voice and control of tone
Effective vocabulary
Mechanics
Fluency and control of sentence construction
Almost no syntactic, grammatical, and spelling errors
Ideas
COMPETENCE: The majority of the portfolio will display these characteristics.
Demonstration of basic understanding of readings and essay topics
Most essays show awareness of what the reader needs to know about the topic
Demonstration of ability to respond critically to one's own and others' experiences and ideas.
Organization
Controlling central idea and generally cohesive structure in each essay
Generally clear sequential relationship between supporting ideas and central argument controlling idea.
Generally focused, cohesive paragraphs
Development
Mainly relevant examples with clear explanations of what the examples demonstrate
Explanations in body paragraphs usually linked to controlling idea of essay
Most examples include specific details
Across the portfolio, writing shows evidence of synthesis, argumentation, analysis, and/or problem-solving skills
Style
Sentences include some variety
Sentences usually include effective vocabulary
Mechanics
General fluency and control of sentence construction
Minimal syntactic, grammatical, and spelling errors
NOT PASSING: The majority of the portfolio lacks the characteristics of the passing portfolios.
Ideas
Limited understanding of readings and essay topics
Limited awareness of what the reader needs to know about the topic
The portfolio includes minimal critical response to one's own and others' experiences and ideas.
Organization
Lacks overall of a central focus and logical structure
Light or uneven relationships between supporting ideas and central argument/controlling idea
The majority of the paragraphs do not cohere and are not focused
Development
Body paragraphs include few examples or minimal explanations of what the examples demonstrate
Explanations in body paragraphs occasionally linked to the controlling idea of the essay
Examples occasionally include specific details
Across the portfolio, essays are mainly developed through summary, narrative and/or description
Style
Sentences only occasionally show variety
Vocabulary is very basic
Mechanics
Limited fluency and control of sentence construction
Frequent syntactical, grammar, and/or spelling errors
Kyle Huarg.
OFSPONSES
Freewriting
Ir related to the work (book, essay,
- will be assigned a
ill be
Reflective Essay
Content: Write an essay of at least two pages (500 words) to look back on your progress in
writing this quarter and explain why you are ready to go to EWRT1A. This goes in the front
Review all the work you've done for the class. Consider why you chose the essays in your
portfolio and how they show your readiness
for EWRTIA. Give specific examples from these
essays to show your improvements.
Discuss what you have learned in LART 211 or EWRT 211. This might include practice
in organization, analysis, development, vivid examples, construction of better sentences,
proofreading, writing process, and so on. You also may include learning from EWRT 212
or Readiness classes.
Include how your writing has changed as a result of what you have learned in this class.
Remember to provide specific evidence for your claims.
& What still needs improvement? Write about what you'd still like to work on with your
writing. Remember that all of us are still trying to be better writers, so what are you going
to focus on in 1A and beyond?
Audience: De Anza English teachers
What we're looking for in the reflective essay:
a Clear organization (Thesis, topic,
raingt row, promoting outline, drafting getting
teedback, revising,
Well-developed, focused paragraphs
& Specific examples, details
Well-constructed sentences
* Correct grammar and punctuation
a Form: typed, double-spaced
* Due: This essay is due as part of your portfolio on
When we do a reading, you will often need to bring inhomework related to the work (book, essay,
typed
poem, etc.) we read. Some of the types of assignments are listed below **
natin number of each kind of ei...
w
S
wf
(use
adjective
noun
of teaching or the guide to have more interaction with students. A good passion
frag
teacher would love to spend her/his own personal time on students to explore
students' deeper mind. To discover what students could create or explore their talent.
VE
I know since I go to school in China, I had witness many terrible scene that teacher
went
destroyed one's dream, destroy student's talent by their own selfishness in order to get
advances from the school principle or the compliment from students' parent. Another
important thing is fair equivalence of each student. Each student in the class, there are
independent personality. Teachers should respect them, whether good or bad grades,
Whether disciplined, or often violate discipline. Especially the result more bad of the
الناز
can
give you
specific
several good point but
The awk) confusing
sentences, in
examples?
frag
understanding pode
poor students, self-discipline. Teachers should be much concern, more
ank
encouragement. Because they step into society development point also unlike
auk
meritorious students in the shade.
All the information above of becoming a good teacher I believe Mr.Greene has
was he the
English teacher?
done all the good teacher part. He has given so much for student. I see no wrong with
him as a point of view from a normal students like me. I always put myself in others apostrophe
Omissbord
shoes, to experience how difficult it is to become a teacher. Teacher has to prepare the
lecture for the students every night for next day's class. I can see that Mr. Greene
spent so much time on it more than everyone can imagine. For young people like us; tired and
wf-look
up
reading a bunch of papers and books is tired, yes, I admit that it is tired for me. I
tiring
would prefer spend my time on work rather than spend it on books and papers. But
think about it before you really tell it around. How about the teachers? They got to get
have
the lecture ready for students and correct a bunch of papers and essay. Not only for
I'm not
pl
sure, this,
adds that
much to
mo
The essay or replacing
with you perences,
wyle
wong shows evidence of
Senten
wang idea of eso
strate
often need to bring in homewand
Some of the types of assion
humber of each kind.
typed
one class, it's for 2 or more classes. They got to stay at home to finish all those things
then sleep. I can really see how hard it is to become a teacher, and I can see how hard
it is for Mr.Greene.
auk or ww
The vicissitudes from his face every morning when I come to his class , is the
face of a responsible teacher. Education is extremely important to society as a whole.
The future, the mission of becoming a great society, this one job is handed to the
career that I respect the most. Teachers should stand loneliness, withstand the
temptation of money, even to the right. Otherwise it will cause oneself psychological
confing
ank E
unbalance, teaching them. If the teacher in class, and for some reason preference a
ts
classmate, not equally. Then the teacher will be lost in the student mind the prestige
of the teachers and dignity. Then also student would lost faith in it.
Time flies so fast. Now I am at college, sometimes English classes remind me
of him. The passion that he gave me to learn English. The happiness he gave me
whenever I had a bad mood. He sometimes got mad because of other silly students
heino a jerk He still remain calm and tried to cheer us with some jokes to ignore
Criteria for Essay 1 (Education and You) English/Dayharsh
Is your paper organized, coherent, and carefully planned to address the assignment? (Outlining is an important tool for
this point.)
Did you meet the following requirements from the assignment?
V
An interesting title
+ An introductory paragraph that BEGINS WITH A HOOK. Here you introduce your topic and STATE YOUR
THESIS (the main point you to make about education)
- A strong thesis that shows that you thought deeply about what made this part of your educational journey important
(that is, explains the main thing you learned).- work on tin 3
+ Several body paragraphs, each unified by a clear topic sentence, that develop the main point
+ Detailed, specific descriptions and examples that clearly communicate your ideas to the reader
A narrative of your educational journey
✓ + A clear analysis of your educational experiences and what they mean.
good start
- Significant connection to another author, including relevant, well-integrated quotations or paraphrases missing
+ A strong conclusion that wraps the essay in a satisfying fashion
- Clear, grammatical sentences that allow any reader to understand your points see notes
Did you meet the minimum length requirement? Did you include the peer responses from the workshop and a rough draft?
no
The
Tea TUTO
to guide
tutor to work
Love terrific
on gammar
13500
insights into what makes a good
you
clude some variety
ences usually include
ics
dence of synthesis
amples demonstrats
lg idea of essay
teacher
General El
1. Then also student would lost faith in it.
2)
Time flies so fast . Now I am at college, sometimes English classes remind me
of him. The passion that he gave me to learn English. The happiness he gave me
whenever I had a bad mood. He sometimes got mad because of other silly students
Purchase answer to see full
attachment