my volley team's life and how it compare to Divergent and The Outsiders, English homework help

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Has to be the book Divergent and the movie The Outsiders because they have different endings.

Add some specific comparisons to Divergent or The Outsiders.

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Team concept forms an integral part to an individual life and determines how such
individuals face new world challenges. Participating in teams is probably an essential life
experience. Teams should include various characteristics such as sharing of goals and interests.
There is a leadership hierarchy in a team: a team leader, outstanding members, active members,
and followers. All team members should be willing to follow the rules, have slogans, symbols,
and dress codes. They have a sense of honor, which allows the members of the team to feel
proud of the team and its activities. They also have the feeling of a family standing together and
protecting each other. These characteristics form a group of people to be a team.
I was a member of the volleyball team. There were at least fifty members of the team,
classified into four groups based on gender and ages. The coach selected the team after a series
of tryouts. We practiced at least three days a week and practiced every day during the
competition season. The coach allowed no absence without a doctor’s note. We had to keep our
grades at an average above 65, with no complaints and warnings from teachers, or we would
receive a suspension from participating in the competition or even kicked out by our coach. It
meant we could not break any school regulations and we could not make our teachers angry, or
underperform in our academics. We had to wear the uniforms and shoe every practice so that the

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teammates that acted as a team symbol. I can compare my experience in the volleyball team to
the story of the Divergent. Just like in the Divergent, discipline, respect and dedication was
paramount especially in a team. In the divergent, even though rules restricted Tris, I think it was
important for her to succeed. I never had trouble following the rules since they helped me
integrate into the society. Ideally, the group association with my team instilled discipline in my
life as part of my daily routine.
The relationships in the team were profound. We went through many complexities and
experienced failures and successes together. We encouraged and helped each other through the
challenges and failures while enjoying the happiness and successes. One of the unforgettable
memories was when the coach punished us. In our first year in the team, we lacked coordination
and understanding. Whenever anyone of us made a mistak...


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