Please read through my classmate drafts for the (TD project), then Answer the author’s three questions first, and then offer other areas that the author could improve. You should offer helpful, constructive, specific feedback.
Ineffective feedback: This is good.
Effective feedback: Good introduction. You clearly state your purpose and your users, and I can follow your ideas.
Ineffective feedback: This paragraph doesn’t make sense.
Effective feedback: Users might have a hard time following your ideas here. Could you separate your sentences here? Or maybe add an illustration?