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Formatting is correct, although some minor errors may be present. Appropriate All format template is fully elements are used. There are correct. virtually no errors in formatting style. Reference page is Reference page is included and lists present and fully sources used in the inclusive of all paper. Sources are cited sources. appropriately Documentation is documented, although appropriate and some errors may be citation style is present usually correct. In-text citations and a reference page are complete and correct. The documentation of cited sources is free of error. Running Head: HEALTH CARE REFORM PAPER Health Care Reform Paper HEALTH CARE REFORM PAPER 2 Health Care Reform Paper The health care system has experienced many changes throughout the years. In the health care system things change rapidly. The health care industry consists on doctors of many different fields along with health care facilities, health insurance companies, medical equipment and pharmaceutical manufactures. To keep up with this ever changing industry it is important to ensure that certain elements are addressed. The top five elements of the health care system that I believe need the most reforming are; excessive care, access to care, quality of care, end of life issues and sustaining the health care industry. These are only some of the issues that can affect hospital leaders and patients the most. Since these are known issues, the Health Care Reform of 2010 attempted to address these concerns. Excessive Care Access to Care Quality of Care End of Life Issues Sustaining the Health Care Industry References Obama Care Facts. (2017). Affordable care acts summary. Retrieved August 18, 2017 from https://obamacarefacts.com/affordablecareact-summary/ https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/books/NBK53944/ 
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