ENG 1102
Term 1/2017
Length: About 500 words
Draft Due via Canvas: 8.27
Final Copy Due via Canvas: 10.15
ENG 1102: Essay 1: Literacy Narrative
Assignment: Write a short essay about the impact of reading upon your life—you might
describe a favorite text from childhood or a book you read often—a work of fiction, faith,
poetry, have at it. A literacy narrative essay explores one’s growth as a reader. Don’t
confuse “literacy” with “literature.” The goal is to come up with a thesis that states how
one specific text, or perhaps a series of them, or just the written word in general
contributed to your personal development.
Basic Guidelines:
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Double space your essay; include your name, the course number and section at the
top of the first page.
Avoid the use of the second person as it is conversational and too direct. Use the
first person to describe your own thoughts, but better to use the third person in
most of your analysis.
Do not focus on the writing process—your reader does not need to know why you
chose the topic or what you’re going to write about. Instead of telling your reader
what you are going to do, do it.
Write in the present tense unless specifically describing past events.
How it will be graded:
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A failing paper, either a “D” or an “F,” will either be completely off-topic, so
short as to be negligible, and/or be so marred by mechanical errors that meaning
is lost. Further, the argument may not be grounded in a thesis or else lack
examples or explain why the examples given mean for the interpretation.
A “C” paper is one that manages to competently convey information to the
reader—each part has a logical organization with clear thesis statements, contains
coherent and complete sentences, appropriately answers the essay prompt, and
does not have so many mechanical flaws that legibility suffers.
A “B” paper has all the characteristics of a “C,” and in addition displays effective
insights into the essay prompt (possibly acknowledging multiple perspectives on
the issues, or making particularly good choices about what material to address),
has fewer mechanical flaws, and has an organizational scheme and general tone
appropriate to the material.
An “A” paper has all the characteristics of a “B,” and in addition displays few or
no mechanical flaws, pays attention to appropriateness of word choice and
shifting tonality through the essays, displays a command of pacing and sentence
variety appropriate to the varied content of the essays, and may display
particularly thoughtful insights, of contain stylistic devices which illuminate the
material.
After you turn the paper in through Canvas, I will grade and return it to you via email as a
Word or OpenOffice file. I will make comments throughout the paper to offer guidance
on how to improve the paper and your writing in general. If you choose, you may revise
the paper once for a new grade—I am a big believer in revision, so I urge you to take
advantage of this option. You may have until the end of the term to re-submit any or all
of your formal essays for a re-grade.
What you’ll be graded upon:
15%
Introduction: You set a context for why it’s important to discuss the place of
reading and writing in our lives. How has your experience in these areas shaped
your values? What can other people learn from the story you have to tell? You
may use a specific anecdote or episode from your life to illustrate your point.
15% Thesis: You state in 1-2 sentences your main idea. The thesis is the culmination of
your introduction.
The first chapter book I ever read was Roald Dahl’s Charlie and the Chocolate
Factory, and it changed my life because I was immediately hooked on Dahl (I
quickly read every book of his I could find in our local library) and on reading in
general. It is no overstatement to say that my journey towards being an English
professor began with reading the words: “These two very old people are the father
and mother of Mr. Bucket.”
30% Organization. You have two options for organizing your essay, depending on the
focus you take:
OPTION 1: If you are writing about your experience becoming literate (learning
to read and write), you will probably take a narrative approach, detailing your first
experiences in school or your first memories of books or the first time reading or
writing seemed to make a big impact on your life. You will want strong transition
from paragraph to paragraph, and your paragraphs should be around six sentences
in length to be fully developed. Your organization will probably be chronological,
moving from stage to stage in your life.
OPTION 2: If you focus more on a specific text or a specific reading experience,
you’ll structure your essay in a more subject-by-subject fashion. Your
introduction will establish that you are writing about significant moments at
which literacy or particular texts impacted your life and give a sense of why those
moments or texts are important. Your body paragraphs will be organized around
each of those texts or moments, explaining what they were and narrating why they
mattered. You will still want strong transitions and paragraphs of roughly six
sentences.
10%
Conclusion: Regardless of which option you choose, you want a conclusion that
avoids summarizing what you’ve just said. You also don’t want to say, “In
conclusion.…” Your aim in a conclusion is to place the discussion in a larger
context. For example, how might those experiences be similar to or different from
those of other individuals? How do you envision the role of reading in your life in
the future?
15%
Grammar and mechanics: Your paper avoids basic grammar mistakes, such as
dropped apostrophes in possessives, subject/verb disagreement, arbitrary tense
switches, etc. The paper demonstrates a commitment to proofreading by avoiding
easy-to-catch typos and word mistakes (effect for affect, for example).
15%
Presentation: Your paper meets the minimum length criteria of 500 words, is
typed with a title and your name on it. You follow your individual professor’s
instructions for formatting (margins, placement of the name, etc).
Poetry or Verse
Reading a Poem
Paraphrase
William Butler Yeats The Lake Isle of Innisfree
Lyric Poetry
Robert Hayden Those Winter Sundays
Adrienne Rich Aunt Jennifer’s Tigers
Narrative Poetry
Anonymous Sir Patrick Spence
Robert Frost “Out, Out—”
Dramatic Poetry
Robert Browning My Last Duchess
Didactic Poetry
Theodore Roethke My Papa’s Waltz
Countee Cullen For a Lady I Know
Anne Bradstreet The Author to Her Book
Walt Whitman To a Locomotive in Winter
Emily Dickinson I like to see it lap the Miles
** Gwendolyn Brooks Speech to the Young. Speech to the Progress-Toward
Weldon Kees For My Daughter
The Person in the Poem
Natasha Trethewey White Lies
Edwin Arlington Robinson Luke Havergal
Ted Hughes Hawk Roosting
Anonymous Dog Haiku
Langston Hughes Theme for English B
Anne Sexton Her Kind
William Carlos Williams The Red Wheelbarrow
Irony
Robert Creeley Oh No
W. H. Auden The Unknown Citizen
Sharon Olds Rite of Passage
Edna St. Vincent Millay Second Fig
Thomas Hardy The Workbox
For Review and Further Study
**Julie Sheehan Hate Poem
Richard Lovelace To Lucasta
Wilfred Owen Dulce et Decorum Est
William Carlos Williams This Is Just to Say
Diction
Marianne Moore Silence
John Donne Batter my heart, three-personed God, for You
The Value of a Dictionary
Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
** Kay Ryan Mockingbird
Aftermath
Carl Sandburg Grass
**Samuel Menashe Bread J. V. Cunningham Friend, on this scaffold Thomas More lies dead
J. V. Cunningham Friend, on this scaffold Thomas More lies dead
Word Choice and Word Order
Robert Herrick Upon Julia’s Clothes
Thomas Hardy The Ruined Maid
For Review and Further Study
E. E. Cummings anyone lived in a pretty how town
Wendy Cope Lonely Hearts
Anonymous Carnation Milk
Gina Valdés English con Salsa
Lewis Carroll Jabberwocky
Ezra Pound In a Station of the Metro
Taniguchi Buson The piercing chill I feel
Imagery
T. S. Eliot The winter evening settles down
Theodore Roethke Root Cellar
Elizabeth Bishop The Fish
Emily Dickinson A Route of Evanescence
Gerard Manley Hopkins Pied Beauty
Jean Toomer Reapers
About Haiku
Arakida Moritake The falling flower
Matsuo Basho Heat-lightning streak
Matsuo Basho In the old stone pool
Taniguchi Buson On the one-ton temple bell
Taniguchi Buson Moonrise on mudflats
Kobayashi Issa only one guy
Kobayashi Issa Cricket
Alfred, Lord Tennyson The Eagle
William Shakespeare Sonnet 18: Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Howard Moss Shall I Compare Thee to a Summer’s Day?
Metaphor and Simile
Alfred, Lord Tennyson Flower in the Crannied Wall
William Blake To see a world in a grain of sand
Emily Dickinson My Life had stood – a Loaded Gun
Sylvia Plath Metaphors
** Jill Alexander Essbaum The Heart
N. Scott Momaday Simile
Craig Raine A Martian Sends a Postcard Home
Other Figures of Speech
James Stephens The Wind
Margaret Atwood You fit into me
**Timothy Steele Epitaph
Dana Gioia Money
Carl Sandburg Fog
William Butler Yeats Who Goes with Fergus?
William Wordsworth A Slumber Did My Spirit Seal
Aphra Behn When maidens are young
Alliteration and Assonance
A. E. Housman Eight O’Clock
Alfred, Lord Tennyson The splendor falls on castle walls
Rime
Kevin Young Doo Wop
Hilaire Belloc The Hippopotamus
William Butler Yeats Leda and the Swan
Gerard Manley Hopkins God’s Grandeur
Robert Frost Desert Places
Reading Poems Aloud
Michael Stillman In Memoriam John Coltrane
Stresses and Pauses
Gwendolyn Brooks We Real Cool
Alfred, Lord Tennyson Break, Break, Break
Dorothy Parker Résumé
Meter
Edna St. Vincent Millay Counting-out Rhyme
A. E. Housman When I was one-and-twenty
Walt Whitman Beat! Beat! Drums!
Langston Hughes Dream Boogie
English 1102
Essay 4
Requirements: Minimum 1000 words
Draft Due via Canvas: 10.1
Final Copy Due: 10.15
Assignment: Write an essay that defends a thesis you developed through a close critical
reading/analysis of a poem listed on the syllabus/weekly activities and supported by at
least three secondary sources. This essay still relies on textual support from the primary
text, but includes at least three secondary sources that support/sustain the student’s
argument. Do not confuse “critical analysis” with “summary” nor should you speak of
“relating” to the poem; the goal is to develop, sustain, and advance a thesis based on a
critique of the primary text but also supported by at least three secondary sources. Use
the MLA International Bibliography or JSTOR as in Essay 3 to support your ideas and
thesis.
Choose one of the poems in chapters 9-16 in Backpack Literature (excluding William
Blake’s “London” and the extremely short poems or the doggerel like the satire of
Shakespeare’s ‘Thou art as lovely as a summer’s day’ as that will be covered by a sample
essay) and write a three to four page essay analyzing it through a close reading that takes
the poem completely apart. As we did in discussing Shakespeare’s soliloquies and other
speeches (and as some of you did in Essay 3) each line of the poem should be discussed
in depth to support your thesis. Examine the words and the word origins, the images, the
diction and tone that build up in the poem, the structure of the poem through its rhythm,
rhyme, and meter. This is a difficult assignment, though it may appear simple. Don’t wait
until the last minute to begin.
After you turn the paper in through Canvas, I will grade and return it to you via email as a
Word or OpenOffice file. I will make comments throughout the paper to offer guidance
on how to improve the paper and your writing in general. If you choose, you may revise
the paper once for a new grade—I am a big believer in revision, so I urge you to take
advantage of this option. You may have until the end of the term to re-submit any or all
of your formal essays for a re-grade.
What you’ll be graded upon:
15%
Introduction: You establish a context for the significance of your thesis in regards
to the literary work as a whole. How does your argument contribute to
understanding the author’s major literary/thematic concerns? What can other
readers learn from your analysis? How does your analysis/critique fit in with other
critical responses of the author/poem?
15%
Thesis: You state your main point (or argument) in 1-2 sentences. The thesis is
the culmination of your introduction.
30%
Organization. Your essay should follow that of typical literary critiques:
Since your focus must be on analyzing some literary motif, theme, or a
combination of literary elements (such as symbolism, metaphor, meter, rhyme,
etc.), your essay must contain well-structured supporting paragraphs that contain a
topic sentence, quotes from the primary text, at least one quote from three
different sources, an explanation/discussion of the significance of each quote you
use in relation to your thesis, and a concluding sentence or two that situates the
entire paragraph in relation to the thesis. Your thesis will focus on some kind of
critical analysis of the primary text, so your supporting paragraphs should contain
quotes from the text that illustrate your thesis/argument; in addition, you should
include at least one quote from three different secondary sources to support your
argument. Do not simply sprinkle random quotes into your paper and then ignore
them; your supporting paragraphs should be organized around each of the quotes
you use, explaining the significance of the quotes and why (or how) they illustrate
your main point, but you also need to make sure that your paragraphs contain
strong transitions and at least six (or more) sentences.
10%
Conclusion: Regardless of the argument you make, you want a conclusion that
avoids summarizing what you’ve just said, and please avoid writing, “In
conclusion.…” Your aim in a conclusion is to place the discussion in a larger
context. How does the poem speak to its era? How might your thesis be applied to
other aspects of the text, say for example, setting or symbolism?
15%
Grammar and mechanics: Your paper avoids basic grammar mistakes, such as
dropped apostrophes in possessives, subject/verb disagreement, arbitrary tense
switches, etc. The paper demonstrates a commitment to proofreading by avoiding
easy-to-catch typos and word mistakes (effect for affect, for example). The paper
adheres to MLA formatting style for in-text and bibliographic citations.
15%
Presentation: Your paper meets the minimum length criteria of 1000 words, is
typed with a title and your name on it. You follow your individual professor’s
instructions for formatting (margins, placement of the name, etc).
Please email me with questions/ideas/problems. I am here to help!
Basic Guidelines:
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Double space your essay; include your name, the course number and section at the
top of the first page
Avoid the use of the second person as it is conversational and too direct. Use the
first person to describe your own thoughts, but better to use the third person.
Introduce your poems and authors by full title and his/her full name early in the
paper. Thereafter, only use his/her last name.
Do not focus on the writing process.
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Be sure that you do not simply summarize or paraphrase the poem. Assume the
reader knows the poem you are talking about; your job is to help the reader see
below the surface and understand the poem better.
Write in the present tense, but do use tenses to show chronology in the speech
itself as needed.
Always use direct quotes to support your claim, and thoroughly explain what each
quote means and why it is important to your thesis. A good rule of thumb is one
quote per paragraph, though with a poem it may that be several quotes per
paragraph are needed.
Examine how your poet uses language—including similes, metaphors, and other
comparisons, symbols, rhymes that link concepts, archaic meanings of words and
their etymologies—use the OED through the links at the Troy library website
(you pay for the subscription as part of your tuition—use it), etc.
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