Description
I need help with writing a personal statement for dental school. I have a rough draft and I would like it to be edited and outline some of the topics I mentioned, make it flow, and include a concluding statement as well.
Explanation & Answer
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Outline for Personal statement
A. For eight years, my older sister was sick.
B. In my junior year in high school, I encountered another event that
unexpectedly shaped my interest in dentistry.
C. During my undergraduate education, my enthusiasm for the field made me
connect with several dentists.
D. While working at Dr. Elmosa’s office, I encountered many uninsured patients
who worried about having insufficient funds to receive dental care.
E. A career in dentistry is my undying wish to continue and fulfill my lifelong
dream as a doctor.
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For eight years, my older sister was sick. It was the most difficult time of my life. Some
doctors had diagnosed her with bipolar disorder, others with psychosis, yet no one could alleviate
her misery. She was put on numerous antipsychotic medications and even underwent a series of
ECT therapy sessions, all of which worsen...