LP8.2: Peer Review
complete this Peer Review upload a copy
of your essay draft in LP8.2: Peer Review in the Discussion Board.
(Include your name in the subject line.)
you have uploaded your draft to the Discussion Board, your instructor will
assign you another student’s essay to peer review using the Peer Review Form
(below) to complete your review. Your instructor may have further directions/suggestions
for you to consider.
Use the following questions to help you complete the
revision process. Direct your comments to your partner. Explain your answers as
thoroughly as possible to help your partner revise.
Does the thesis statement contain the essay’s
controlling idea and an opinion about that idea?
Does the thesis appear as the last sentence of
Does the essay have all the basic elements? Is
each one effective?
Does each paragraph support the thesis
Does each paragraph contain enough specific
details to develop it topic sentence?
Do all the essay’s topic sentences relate
directly to the thesis statement?
Do the details in each paragraph support its
Is the essay organized logically?
Is each body paragraph organized logically?
transitions used effectively so that paragraphs move smoothly and logically
from one to the next?
the sentences move smoothly and logically from one to the next?