A Strong Thesis Statement For The Following Topic

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Topic: Characteristics of a good citizen 

My thesis statement: Things that qualify to be a good citizen are contributing to society, valuing the law, and is truthful and trustworthy. 

Needs to be stronger.

Apr 6th, 2015

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There are many different distinguishing features that allow a person to be considered a good citizen. The attributes that create a good citizen are how much time they are willing to contribute to society, valueing the law, and their trustworthiness. ( this is the same as being truthful so do not include that)

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