Fiction story writing

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timer Asked: Nov 4th, 2017
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Question Description

I have a almost 4 pages of fiction story and i need some one to read and add two more pages to the story and finish it.

Editing the story as you need but not changing the main topic.

Tutor Answer

george
School: UIUC

here is the story

Surname: 1
Student’s Name
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The Cabin

My Girl Friend and I decided to spend our Christmas Holidays Shredding some Fresh Powder at the
mountains of Colorado. We were two Carvaholics, she grew up shredding the mountains with her Dad,
Teaching the Art of living; And Me …. Who cares about me, she was my Experience of Love in this
physical manifestation of self, and we were Chemistry lab partners with real chemistry. This Trip was
about to make our bond eternal.
Maya was in charge of finding us a cabin to stay, and I was in charge of finding a Ring for the proposal
and Coming up with a way to do it special. So as you can Imagine She was not and should not have been
aware of the situation.
Days were passing and we were starting to feel the excitement more vivid way. She found a humongous
cabin, more like a castle, for the Price of a small Cabin. She was a bit skeptical at first. Who would not
be? The price did not make any sense at all. Looking at the screen got me amazed too.
"Oh, look, babe, there is a phone number'' I wish I went mute that day and never said that. The cabin
seemed too good to be true, but I wanted it to be true. Some part of me could feel everything was
coming together perfectly for a great Proposal; So, I called the number. An Elderly Woman got on the
line. She seemed nice; sounded like a grandma who would offer you cookies and milk.
I asked about the cabin and why It was so cheap, she told me that her son used to live there, but he
went missing last year and never been seen ever since. She mentioned that she needed the money too,
so she decided to rent it to couples like us.
After a long conversation with Maya, we reluctantly paid for the cabin. The ring that took me a lifetime
to find was going to be finally ready. I cautiously lied to Maya for the first time and immediately started
to feel guilty about it; however, I was sure she would understand the circumstances.
I was staring at the ring through the window of the shop like a Child looking at his dream bike. The ring
was perfectly sized and made for Maya. On the way, back I stopped at a Gun store to grab couple of
dragon shells for my shotgun. I was somewhat sure I would need them to scare rodents at some point
on our trip.
I was hiding the ring in my jacket's pocket. Driving and daydreaming the proposal day.

Surname: 2
I magically found myself in the garage. I had to take another look at the ring before I hid it for the grand
reviling. I grabbed my jacket from the back seat and took the Red Velvet Ring Box out. It was exactly
what Maya wanted. I opened it... A strange pessimistic feeling took over my emotions. That sensation
when you hold an object that you disguise.
It reminded me of a devastating Memory that I never experienced. Such a strange feeling .. I could easily
mark it as one of the most overwhelming moments of my life. I swe...

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