Research Methods for IR
Dr. Michal Kuz (Instructor, Module Leader), Dr.Christopher Lash (Moderator)
Composition of module mark (including weighting of components)
Coursework 100%: Prospectus 40%, Bibliography and Literature Review 40%, Essay
20%.
Prospectus (40% - 4 Credits): outline, plan of a proposed research project, (3500-4500
words); contributes to learning outcomes 1, 2, 3, 4.
The Prospectus is due on the date established in the exam week, announced when the exam
schedule is announced.
The Prospectus is due on a date in the exam term, in lieu of an in-class exam.
The Prospectus is a proposed research plan that explicitly frames the topic of research, it
should present the research question and working hypothesis that frame the research project.
Then the student needs to connect how his/her project fits with the range of scholarship in the
topic area chosen. Then the student should show how he/she will operationalize their research
project, with clear explanations about methods and means to be employed to support the
claims they wish to make. The student finally should give a rough outline of how the main
body of their thesis might look like or what it might address/deal with.
Here is the grading matrix for the Prospectus.
1. Research
Question &
Hypothesis: its
clarity, logic, its
import
2. Methodology
and
operationalization
of selected
method/model
3. Literature
Review and
Sources used (and
their quality)
4. Importance of
subject to the
field of study and
generally
5. The quality of
the writing (its
logic, its clarity,
and its
accessibility)
0-4
5-9
10-14
14-19
20
Poor/none or
very little
Weak, barely
understandable
Generally
understandable
Good
Very good
Poor/none
Weak
Generally
understandable
Solid to
Good
Very good
Poor
Weak
Reasonable
Good
Very good
None
Little
Some
Strong
Very
Poor
Weak
Acceptable
Good
Very good
Bibliography and Literature Review (40% - 4 Credits), 1500-2000 words: contributes to
learning outcomes 3, 4. Students are expected to put together a working draft of the
Bibliography of their research project and explain the import of their sources. The students
should obey the criteria of "the Harvard Style" and put together a correct and working
bibliography. This should form the basis of their bibliography for their prospectus. The
Literature Review should be relevant secondary literature of the student’s research topic (and
it usually should follow the topic selected in the topic essay). The student is expected to
summarize the main body of scholarship relevant to the topic they are working on.
This task is due on December the 19th
Here is the grading matrix for the Bibliography and Literature Review.
0-4
5-9
10-14
15-19
20
1. Does it address the
literature of the topic?
Not at all
Poorly to
barely
Generally
Solidly
Very well
2. Clarity and faithfulness to
what is being summarized
Poor/none
Weak
Generally
understandable
Solid to
Good
Very
good
3. Does it reflect the scope and
range of the scholarship on the
topic?
Not at all
to very
poorly
Barely and
vaguely
Generally
addresses the
range within
topic
Reasonably
solid
Very well
Generally
acceptable
without
significant
mistakes
Well done
Good
Very
good
4. Sourcing and referencing
None
Poorly
done
Generally
acceptable with
mistakes
5. The quality of the writing
(its logic, its clarity, and its
accessibility)
Poor
Weak
Acceptable
Topic essay (20% - 2 Credits): 1500-2000 words; contributes to learning outcomes 1, 2
Topic essay. This is a short essay, where the student elaborates on and justifies the topic they
wish to research. This offers the student the chance to put together a coherent explanation of
their topic and the significance of their topic in lieu of the concerns of the discipline of IR and
political science generally.
This task is due on November the 14th
Here is the grading matrix for the Topic Essay
0-4
5-9
10-14
15-19
20
1. How
understandable and
readable is the paper?
Poor/none or
very little
Weak, barely
understandable
Generally
understandable
Good
Very good
2. Is the topic clearly
defined or wide?
Poor/none
Weak
Generally
understandable
Solid to
Good
Very good
3. Does the topic seek
to describe or to
analyze?
Little or
vague
understandin
g of what
needs to be
done
Generally
descriptive
Has either
explicitly or
implicitly an
analytical
character
Generall
y
analytic
in
regards
the topic
Clearly analyzing
the topic
4. Importance to the
field of study and
generally
None
Little
Some
Strong
Very
5. the quality of the
writing
Poor
Weak
Acceptable
Good
Very good
Resit of
Topic Essay
Bibliography and literature review
Prospectus
If a student fails any of these three components by under 35% they must re-write and resubmit
the given component on a date established after determination of failure of the given
component. The resubmit should follow the rules and guidelines of the initial assignment in
question.
LAZARSKI UNIVERSITY
Master of Arts
in International Relations
Master of Sciences
in International Business Economics
GRADUATE DISSERTATION
MANUAL
A Guide for Students
(Updated in April 2015)
1
TABLE OF CONTENTS
1:
INTRODUCTION..................................................................................................... 3
2:
THE DISSERTATION ............................................................................................. 3
3:
GETTING STARTED............................................................................................... 6
4:
DISSERTATION SUPERVISION ........................................................................... 6
5:
PREPARING THE DISSERTATION .......................................................................7
6:
SUBMISSION OF THE COMPLETED DISSERTATION ..................................... 9
7:
EXAMINATION OF THE COMPLETED DISSERTATION ................................. 9
8:
PLAGIARISM AND UNFAIR PRACTICE............................................................ 10
9:
DISSERTATION FORMAT.................................................................................... 10
10:
EDITING AND REFERENCING ........................................................................ 12
APPENDIX A: THESIS REPORT FORM .............................................................................. 15
APPENDIX B: LITERATURE REVIEW ............................................................................... 19
APPENDIX C: TITLE PAGE ..................................................................................................22
APPENDIX D: STATEMENTS PAGE .................................................................................. 23
APPENDIX E: REFERENCE STYLE GUIDE ...................................................................... 23
APPENDIX F: QUOTING AND PARAPHRASING GUIDELINES .................................... 30
1:
INTRODUCTION
This guide is designed to assist both students and supervisors who participate in the
Master of Arts in International Relations and Master of Sciences in International
Business Economics programmes. It is important to emphasise that it is a guide only,
and that individual style should not be sacrificed. Programme regulations are intended
to help, and to reduce potential wastage of time and effort. However, the instructions
put forth in this guide should not replace direct consultation between students and their
supervisors.
The purpose of this manual is to establish the formal requirements and procedures for
preparing and writing the graduate dissertation, and to provide further relevant
information and advice. All administrative matters relating to the dissertation are the
responsibility of the relevant Programme Director who may be contacted with queries
about the dissertation.
• MAIR
Programme
Director
Christopher
Łazarski,
Ph.D.,
room 14, floor IX, sector F; e-mail: k.lazarski@lazarski.edu.pl
• MScIBE Programme Director Olha Zadorozhna, Ph.D., room 265; phone no. 22
54 35 567; e-mail: olha.zadorozhna@lazarski.pl.
2:
THE DISSERTATION
The Dissertation module constitutes Part II of MA in International Relations and MSc in
International Business Economics degrees and carries a credit rating of 60 CATS (20
ECTS). Students are only allowed to proceed on to the dissertation stage of the scheme
after they have passed Part I. The dissertation is an important component of the taught
programme. It is seen as a means of enabling students to apply the theory learned, both
substantive and methodological, to an in-depth specialised study. The module requires
independent thought and action, and should encourage the integration of the course
material with areas of individual expertise and interest.
The context, data, analysis and conclusions of the students’ research are to be presented
for assessment in a dissertation that should not exceed 20,000 words in length
(excluding the bibliography and appendices). Dissertation assessment will be based on
an agreed mark between the supervisor and two internal examiners (following the blind
marking procedure) and confirmed by an external examiner of Coventry University. The
pass mark for the dissertation is 40%, a distinction is awarded to any student who scores
70% or more in both Part I and Part II of the programme. Students with a Part I average
of 65%–69% will also be awarded a degree with distinction where (Part I average + Part
II average)/2=70% or more.
2.1:
DISSERTATION TOPIC
You need to select a closely defined topic for study, in which you can demonstrate the
application of theories, concepts and techniques that you have learned in your study of
other modules.
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While all thesis proposals will be considered, the department reserves the right to
withhold approval if a proposal is considered unsatisfactory. Reasons for the rejection
of dissertation proposals might include: duplication of topics, insufficiency of published
literature of adequate standing, insufficiency of published data, the unavailability of a
member of staff with expertise appropriate to the proposal, or a proposal which is
unrelated or unsuitable to the degree programme.
One of the hardest aspects of self-directed research activity is to define exactly what you
will do. It is important to keep in mind that what is needed is not just a subject area but
also a specific line of inquiry. This may involve, for example, a specific issue for
review, or a particular hypothesis to be tested. However, in all cases there must be a
purpose beyond the mere collection of information. Furthermore, a good dissertation
must be analytical, not just descriptive, and you will need to evaluate literature and
empirical evidence, use reasoned argument, and work systematically towards a
conclusion.
When choosing a specific area of study, you should make sure that your topic:
1. deals with an issue of current major concern.
2. is sufficient in scope and depth to form the basis of a Master Dissertation.
3. is manageable, given time and resource constraints.
4. is relevant to the realm of your studies.
It is important to stress points 3 and 4, as many students fall into the trap of choosing a
topic that is too ambitious. Students frequently underestimate the time required for each
stage of the research process and choose objectives which are better suited for a Doctoral
Dissertation rather than a Master’s Dissertation. This should be avoided.
Gill and Johnson (1991) include the following in their list of the characteristics of a good
research topic:
1. Access – will you be able to obtain the data required for the research? Will you
have access to key people, documents, etc.?
2. Achievability – can the work be completed in the time allocated for the
dissertation? This may refer more to the timing of required information than to the
total amount of work involved.
3. Symmetry of potential outcomes – will the research be of value regardless of the
outcome?
4. Student capability – students should choose a topic that suits their own analytical
skills. This may seem obvious, but there are examples of students choosing topics
which do not play to their strengths.
5. Value and scope of the research – to quote Gill and Johnson: ‘There are several
reasons why the value of the research should be considered when topics are
selected. Both students and supervisors are likely to be more highly motivated if
the work has obvious value and examiners, too, are likely to be more interested and aware higher marks if the work is clearly making a contribution to the solution
of a significant problem’.
In order to ensure that you do not embark on work which is unnecessary or unlikely to lead
to successful completion, it is VITAL THAT YOU KEEP YOUR SUPERVISOR
INFORMED OF YOUR INTENTIONS.
2.2:
WHAT CONSITUTES A GOOD DISSERTATION?
There is no single model to follow when writing a dissertation. However, it is sometimes
helpful to look at successful dissertation copies which are available in the main library or
from staff in the department. The main point to remember is that you need to demonstrate
a good understanding of the principles of research-based academic inquiry, while
exploring a theme which will contribute to what is known already in their chosen area of
study.
Attributes of a good dissertation include (modified from the advice given at the University
of Bath, School of Management):
Content
1. A careful selection of a problem/issue which is relevant to your sphere of interest.
2. A clear definition of the problems/issues to be investigated.
3. A clear statement of aims.
4. An appropriate literature review.
5. An appropriate research design to investigate the specified problem area including
an awareness of alternative approaches and a defence of the chosen method.
6. A consistent and careful implementation of the adopted methodology.
7. Where applicable, the selection of appropriate data.
8. A systematic, objective and efficient analysis of the collected data.
9. The drawing of relevant conclusions from data analysis. Conclusions should be
supported by the data, and should be compared and contrasted with the findings of
previous studies and put into the context of existing literature.
10. A demonstration that you have a good grasp and understanding of the relevant
theory and have integrated it into the dissertation.
11. A demonstration of originality and initiative in pursuing the objectives of the study.
Presentation
1. A consistent outline of the material and logical flow of arguments.
2. Inclusion or reference to all material and evidence supporting the conclusions. An
appropriate collection of appendices.
Assessment Criteria
In general, the dissertation is assessed by the following criteria:
1. Originality.
2. A clear definition of the issue under investigation and a clear statement of the aims
of the study.
3. An understanding and use of an appropriate research methodology indicating skills
in data collection and analysis.
4. The extent to which all of the above result in a set of conclusions that are consistent
with the research.
5. The setting out of clear recommendations for action, adoption or otherwise.
3:
GETTING STARTED
3.1
MA / MSc Seminar
Before selecting the topic you must first choose your dissertation supervisor (no later
than the end of November), and then, with the supervisor’s advice, choose the subject of
study. Prior to contacting your potential supervisors, you should conduct preliminary
research regarding their topic, so that your consultations with the supervisor are fruitful
and productive.
While deciding on the choice of the supervisor, you may refer to the CVs of LU
academic staff included in your Student Handbook.
Students will begin working regularly with their supervisors in the sixth semester,
during the MA/MSc Seminar. It must be stressed however that the supervisor will not
do the work for their pupils! The onus is on students to make their own decisions about
what goes into their dissertation, and that includes deciding whether to accept or reject
suggestions made by the supervisor.
4:
DISSERTATION SUPERVISION
4.1
The Student / Supervisor Relationship
Supervisors and students are expected to form an agreement based on a 'partnership', with
both parties providing input and having responsibilities. In this case the term 'contract' with
its all connotations of terms and conditions, and its remedies for non-performance or
compliance, is avoided. The ideal relationship should be a co-operative one with benefits
arising for both student and supervisor.
Supervisors are expected to provide guidance as to structure, organisation and presentation
of the work, and students are expected to undertake the appropriate research and discovery,
employing an agreed approach and methodology.
At an early stage, the supervisor and student should meet and agree on an approach to the
management of the dissertation. Working together they should determine answers to
questions such as the following:
• where will meetings take place?
• what are the arrangements for internal and external communications?
4.2
Formal Supervision Procedure
To facilitate an effective supervision process, there is a formalised procedure whereby
students are expected to make appointments with their supervisor, and show evidence of
progress at each meeting. When arranging meeting times, you should suggest suitable
dates via email or in person, and you are expected to keep the appointments that they
have made.
You are supposed to keep your Dissertation Report Form (see Appendix A) that
records each meeting with your supervisors. You must bring this record to every
meeting and after each supervision return it to the English-language Studies
Registrar for the Programme Director’s further verification of progress. Keeping a
clear record of meetings is an essential element of the dissertation process. Supervisors,
subject to mutual agreement, might also see their pupils during other times in addition
to, but not instead of, their formally scheduled meetings.
Supervision time will be limited to 10 meetings per academic year. This figure may change
at the discretion of the Dean of the Faculty of Economics and Management.
4.3
Work Plan
Clearly it will not be possible at the outset to determine a comprehensive plan of work as
this will develop and evolve as the work progresses. Nevertheless, it is desirable that
discussions between students and their supervisors take place at an early stage with the
view of determining an agreed work schedule, which can be used to monitor student
progress. A dissertation timetable is available on zasoby.lazarski.pl. However, you should
treat this timetable as a guide, there are no absolutes in this business. Nevertheless,
deadlines for submission are absolute.
4.4
Roles and Responsibilities of the Supervisor and the Student
Supervisors should ensure that:
• adequate time is available for supervision and encouragement;
• the student fully comprehends the complexity of the proposed task;
• the student is focusing on the work in the intended direction;
• the student has access to primary research materials.
The supervisor acts as a mentor and guide to the student, and should take a professional
interest in the work of the student.
The student will:
• ensure that an appropriate amount of time and effort is applied to the dissertation;
• be receptive to counsel from the supervisor;
• properly acknowledge text, material and ideas created by others;
• meet all regulations relating to the work;
• communicate any problems likely to prejudice the quality or timeliness of the work
to the supervisor as and when such problems arise.
5:
PREPARING THE DISSERTATION
5.1
Word Processing Facilities
Windows-based software is available in the Library, computer laboratories and in the
University halls. Most of the machines have electronic mail facilities and Internet
access.
Windows-based printing facilities are accessible in the room of the Students’ Union and
are free of charge. In the event of difficulties with the above, you should contact the IT
Department at it@lazarski.edu.pl.
5.2
Writing the Dissertation
You should try at an early stage to envisage the final shape of your dissertation, i.e. the
whole as the sum of its parts, including the balance between the chapters and the way
that each chapter links to the next. There is no single ideal dissertation structure, and
much will depend on the topic chosen, but there are some points of advice which have
general application.
A dissertation should be systematic in approach, and clear in exposition. Having
decided what issues or questions are going to be studied, you should choose your
methods of examination. You should ask yourself: ‘How can I best explain my line of
enquiry, and what will be the logical steps by which I can build up to a conclusion?’.
You may use theory to identify what you expect to happen, then check against evidence
of what actually happened to identify conformity with, or divergence from, the theory,
and then offer interpretation. Alternatively, you may review the existing literature
relating to your topic and identify the extent of common ground or differences of
opinion, and then collect and evaluate information to reflect on how the general debate
helps understand the case in question. These are examples of methodical research
design, and they will be explained in further detail, along with other methods, in the
Research Methods course. However, the important thing to remember is that you should
avoid having a disorganised, rambling, series of points of information that fills up pages
but does not lead anywhere.
Having a good research design with a definite layout of chapters, each corresponding to
a logical next step in a progressive investigation, is necessary for the reader to
understand what is written in the dissertation. Your should keep in mind that even if
something is clear in your own head, a lack of logical expression will leave the reader
unsure or confused about your argument.
In that regard, you must also be careful to avoid ambiguity and to be precise. You
should support assertions with evidence or reasoned argument. You should add
appropriate qualifications to general statements. And you should be thorough and well
organised in their thinking, conveying your ideas through the judicious use of language
as well as charts, tables, and graphs if necessary. Although methodology is of central
importance, the dissertation also requires communication and presentation skills.
In preparing a dissertation it is obviously useful to draw from earlier work in the same
topic area (properly acknowledged – see below). Most theses include a literature review,
which is not an end in itself but rather a basis from which to consider how best to move
forward to deal with the task at hand. You should select what is relevant and useful, and
adapt the literature to suit. Appendix B provides some practical suggestions on how to
conduct a literature review.
In writing your dissertation, you learn the skills by which academics advance
knowledge and understanding. A strict requirement here is for you to always
acknowledge what is taken from others, and not to present borrowed ideas as your
own. In this respect, the bibliography of consulted references is an important part of any
dissertation. It is also important to quote data sources. You should start a bibliography
at an early stage of your work, and update it regularly as you progress. While reading
through research materials, it is also useful to keep a record of important page numbers
for later reference – all quotations need specific attribution. The recommended style of
presentation is covered in a later section of this document.
The dissertation should be within the prescribed length limits, i.e. 20,000 words
(excluding bibliography and appendices). Part of this exercise is to experience the
discipline of writing within stated confines, necessitating that you make judgements
about what is relevant and important.
The early stages of dissertation work involve searching for material, reading, planning:
these are all inputs. What matters ultimately is the output. The transition from
preparation to production can be traumatic! It is suggested that you do not write the
introduction first, but rather leave it until you know exactly what you are introducing. A
good approach is to start with substantive chapters of the dissertation that review the
literature first, or introduce relevant theory, or present the evidence. The next step is to
move on to chapters that set up the methodology, undertake the analysis, and provide
interpretation. Finally, the last stage is to write the introduction and conclusion.
Moreover, towards the end the dissertation writing process it is a good idea to discuss
with your supervisors the exact wording of your dissertation title. A dissertation usually
evolves over time and the focus can move slightly away from what was initially
envisaged. This is normal. Ultimately, you should choose a title that is brief and which
accurately describes what your dissertation is all about.
6:
SUBMISSION OF THE COMPLETED DISSERTATION
Two bound copies of the completed dissertation, preapproved by the dissertation
supervisor must be submitted to the English-language Studies Registrar at the end of the
sixth semester (the exact date is specified each year, see Dissertation Timetable
available on zasoby.lazarski.pl). Late submission will result in capping your final
mark at 40% and may result in delaying graduation until the fall, or even the next
academic year with the obligation to repeat the seminar course worth 20 ECTS
points.
7:
EXAMINATION OF THE COMPLETED DISSERTATION
Each dissertation is marked by two internal examiners independently (blind marking).
The agreed grade of the supervisor and the internal markers is also subject to final
approval by the external examiner of Coventry University.
In assessing the dissertation, markers will consider such factors as the difficulty of the
subject matter, the use of sources, the quality of ideas expressed, the quality of analysis,
the relevance of the material to the argument, and the general presentation of the study.
The standard of English expression and spelling will also be taken into account. The
dissertation is evaluated as a completed entity, with markers exercising their
professional judgement about overall quality.
After the dissertation is marked, all Lazarski University students (validated and nonvalidated) must pass a dissertation defence examination before the Dissertation Board
which consists of the supervisor, the internal examiners, the Dean of the Faculty, or the
Programme Director acting on his/her behalf. This does not relate to students applying
for Coventry University degree only (i.e. validated students who do not intend to obtain
Lazarski University degree).
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PLAGIARISM AND UNFAIR PRACTICE
Plagiarism occurs when you present the work of others as if it were your own. This is a
serious academic offence which necessitates disciplinary action. Students found guilty
of presenting a wholly or substantially plagiarised dissertation will be expelled from the
University without a degree.
Unfair practice can take many forms. With the dissertation it is expected that students
will draw from the work of others, but at every instance this must be acknowledged
with a reference to the author. Direct quotations of other people’s words must be placed
in quotation marks (or for longer quotes, indented block quotations), and there must be
an exact reference to the source location. A recommended style of referencing is
presented below. A dissertation which is excessively dependent on referenced material
from other sources, without much individual input from the student, is not guilty of an
offence but will be marked down for poor scholarship. Unacknowledged copying of
work that has been done by another person is unacceptable. The falsification or
fabrication of data or results is also a form of objectionable practice.
The above is of course not an exhaustive list of forms of misconduct in research. Any
indication of malpractice of any kind in a dissertation will lead to an enquiry and results
may be withheld until that is completed. In cases of proven significant malpractice a
zero mark is recorded and the student is then subject to disciplinary proceedings.
Lazarski University requires that each student sign a statement of originality and
include it in their dissertation.
9:
DISSERTATION FORMAT
Although there is no set style for writing a thesis, every dissertation should have the
following components in the subsequent order: a title page, a statement of originality,
acknowledgements (if any), an abstract, a table of contents, a list of tables and figures
(if any), a list of abbreviations (if any), an introductory chapter, substantive chapters, a
concluding chapter, a bibliography, and appendices (if any). The format of these
components are as follows:
9.1
Title Page
The precise title of the thesis (in English and in Polish) is to be typed in capital letters
on the first page inside the binding. Below this comes the title of the degree for which
the thesis is submitted, the students’ name, the name of the supervisor, and the year of
presentation. There should also be no page number on the title page (see Appendix C).
9.2
Statement of Originality
The second page the thesis should have the statements of originality (Appendix D)
along with the student’s written signature (in blue ink), and date (also in blue ink). The
page containing the statement of originality should not include any page numbers.
9.3
Acknowledgements (if any)
If you choose to acknowledge the help or input of anyone who has aided you during the
writing of the thesis, then you may do so on the third page of the dissertation titled
‘Acknowledgements’. This page should not include any page numbers.
9.4
Abstract
An abstract or synopsis of about 300-400 words must be given on the fourth page of the
thesis (or third page if there are no acknowledgements). This is for the benefit of a
potential user of the thesis who, having been attracted by the title, wants a brief outline
of the method of approach, the coverage and the results in order to know whether it is
relevant to their own work. This page should not include any page numbers.
9.5
Table of Contents
The next page of the thesis should be the ‘Table of Contents’, which lists all of the
contents of the thesis and their page numbers, as well as the number and title of each
chapter and the number of the page on which each chapter begins. The Table of
Contents page itself should not have a page number.
9.6
List of Tables and Figures (if any)
Following the Table of Contents page, you should include a list of any tables or figures
that appear in the thesis (along with the page numbers where they can be found in the
thesis). The ‘List of Tables and Figures’ page should be the first page in the thesis
which will be numbered, and this number ought to correspond to the order in which it
appears in the thesis (so if the student dedicated one page for Acknowledgements and
one page for the Table of Contents, then the ‘List of Tables and Figures’ page should be
numbered 6). Every page in the thesis from this point forward ought to have a page
number.
9.7
Key to Abbreviations (if any)
If the thesis features abbreviations, then these should to be listed in a separate ‘Key of
Abbreviations’ section.
9.8
Introductory Chapter
This chapter will spell out the main issues addressed in the thesis and might, for
example, establish the context of the thesis and provide some background to the issues
examined. This may take the form of a statement of a hypothesis, or of a problem, and a
general discussion of the methodology and procedures used in the study, as well as the
sequence in which these are discussed in subsequent chapters.
9.9
Substantive Chapters
Each major theme ought to be presented in a separate chapter, which should be clearly
supported by relevant literature, references, and other evidence as appropriate. Details
of the reference system are given below. Each chapter should begin on a new page and
the chapter heading should be a concise description of the contents of the chapter.
9.10 Summary and Conclusions
The final chapter will summarise the entire study and state the conclusions reached and
their implications, as well as any recommendations which may come out of the thesis.
As this is often the focal point of the thesis, you are advised to give this chapter
particular attention.
9.11 Bibliography
The bibliography should include a list of all the sources referenced in the text of thesis.
Guidelines for the proper referencing of sources are provided below. The content of the
bibliography is not taken into consideration for the final word count of the thesis.
9.12 Appendices
Appendices may include source documents, charts, tables, pictures, or other materials
which might enhance the reader’s understanding of the subject matter tackled in the
thesis. Each new piece of material should have its own appendix. The content of the
appendices is not taken into consideration for the final word count of the thesis.
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EDITING AND REFERENCING
10.1 Font and Line Spacing
The thesis text should be double spaced, and the text ought to be in Times New Roman
Font, size 12. A larger size and different font style may be used for chapter headings at
the student’s discretion.
The text of the thesis should also be ‘justified’, and the first line of each new paragraph
must begin with an indentation. However, the first line at the beginning of each chapter
or sub-chapter should not be indented (see example below).
10.2 Page Numbers
All pages in the thesis must have page numbers except for the title page, statement of
originality, acknowledgements (if any), abstract, and the table of contents. Page
numbers must be written at the bottom of each page and should be centred.
10.3 Referencing System
Referencing is a standardized way of acknowledging the sources of information and
ideas that you have used in your document. It is important to avoid plagiarism, to verify
quotations and to enable readers to follow up what you have written and locate the cited
author’s work. There are many styles which follow the author-date convention,
including the American Psychological Association (APA) and the Chicago Manual of
Style. For the BA Thesis at Lazarski University, the preferred referencing system is the
‘Harvard Style’.
For information on the Harvard Reference Style please refer to Appendix E and/or the
Harvard Reference Style Quick Guide available on zasoby.lazarski.pl.
10.4 Use of Italics in Text
Italics are used to distinguish certain words from others within the text. Below are
some basic rules for when to use italics while writing.
Titles
Generally, italics are used for the titles of things that can stand by themselves. Thus, the
titles of novels and journals must be differentiated from, say, and the titles of poems,
short stories, articles, and episodes (for television shows). The titles of these shorter
pieces would be surrounded with double quotation marks.
In writing the titles of newspapers, ‘the’ is not italicized, even when it is part of the title
(the New York Times), and the same goes for name of the city in which the newspaper is
published unless that name is part of the title: the Hartford Courant, but the London
Times.
10.5 Use of Footnotes and Endnotes
The use of endnotes is discouraged in the BA Thesis. However, footnotes at the bottom
of pages may be used for clarifying or diversionary comments. Neither endnotes nor
footnotes should be used for referencing, as the preferred Harvard Style mentioned
above employs a parenthetical system. Footnotes should be single-spaced.
10.6 Quoting and Paraphrasing
Please refer to Appendix F for advice that students should follow when paraphrasing
and quoting different authors in their thesis.
10.7 Printing and Binding
Two copies of the BA Thesis must be submitted to the English-language Studies
Registrar before the specified due date. The thesis must be bound in a dark blue
hardcover.
The thesis must be printed one-sided, on quality A4 paper. The margins of the pages
should be 2.5cm on all sides.
APPENDIX A: THESIS REPORT FORM
LAZARSKI UNIVERSITY, WARSAW
THESIS REPORT FORM
Student Name: ……………………………………………
Programme: ……………………………………………
Supervisor: ……………………………………………
Working Title of Dissertation: ………………………………………………………………..
…………………………………………………………………………………………………...
…………………………………………………………………………………………………...
Record of Meetings with Student:
Date of Meeting 1:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 2:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 3:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 4:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 5:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 6:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 7:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 8:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 9:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
Date of Meeting 10:
Discussion of:
Progress: (Satisfactory/Unsatisfactory)
_______________________________
(Additional sheets for other meetings to be appended as necessary)
Reasons for Reporting of Unsatisfactory Progress:
Date(s) Programme Director Informed of Unsatisfactory Progress:
Subsequent Action Taken:
End of Dissertation Report:
Date of dissertation submission for examination:
Was a draft of the dissertation submitted for comments prior to submission: Yes/No*
If “No” estimate % of dissertation seen in draft form prior to submission:
Comments:
I confirm that the above is a true record of the supervision of this dissertation.
Signed (Student):........................................................................
Signed (Supervisor):...................................................................
Note: The Dissertation Report Form is to be kept in the Students Record File
*delete as inappropriate
APPENDIX B: LITERATURE REVIEW
In order to find out what research other people have done on your chosen topic, you will
need to undertake a literature search. Your review of the literature will then act as a
background against which you can carry out and report your own research. As Jankowicz
points out (1991, p. 116)
Knowledge doesn't exist in a vacuum, and your work only has value in relation to
other people's. Your work and your findings will be significant only to the extent
that they're the same as, or different from, other people's work and findings.
What is needed is a ‘critical review which demonstrates some awareness of the current
state of knowledge on the subject, its limitations, and how the proposed research aims to
add to what is known’ (Gill and Johnson, 1991, p.21).
What follows are some practical suggestions on how to undertake an effective literature
review:
1.
Start off by referring to some books and articles on the topic of your research. Your
supervisor should be able to advise you. From these, by following up the
references, you will be able to trace more specific publications, which will in turn
guide you to others, and so on. You probably need to use the inter-library loan
system because it is unlikely that the average academic library will have all the
relevant books and articles.
2.
If you are unable to trace any previous research on your topic, try broadening your
search. For example, if you are researching the use of staff appraisal systems in
voluntary organisations and you cannot find any previous research on it, look at
staff appraisal generally. You will soon find that the literature is vast! It then
becomes a case of narrowing down to some aspect of staff appraisal that is relevant
to your research question.
3.
When you are writing up your literature review, you will probably need to divide it
into sections in order to make the review manageable and reader friendly. What
sections you will have will very much depend on what you find in the literature.
4.
As a general rule, when writing up the review, deal with the more general material
first and then gradually narrow down towards your particular research question.
5.
Another rule of thumb is to deal with the literature in chronological order so that
the reader can see how the research activity of others has developed over the
years.
Sometimes you will find that these rules of thumb (paragraphs 4 and 5) conflict
with each other. If so, you will need to make a judgement about what makes most
sense in the context of your particular research.
6.
Remember that you are expected to carry out a critical review of the literature. It is
not enough simply to list and describe what has been done by researchers. You
need to summarise and compare the pieces of research to see how they differ (in
their approaches, research methods, and findings) and to see whether any common
themes emerge. Aim for what Gill and Johnson (1991) call an ‘insightful
evaluation’ of the literature (p.21).
You should then use the results of the review as a backdrop to your own research.
The review can help you to plan parts of your own research, and you should use
the key ideas from the review in your own discussion of your results; e.g. how your
findings fit in with the previous research.
7.
Opinions about how long a literature review should be vary greatly. Literature
reviews of 15% - 25% of the total word count of the thesis are not uncommon.
8.
You need to be fastidious in the way you keep details of the publications consulted.
Some people advocate the use of index cards (one for each publication) with a
summary of the research and enough detail to enable you to cite the work correctly
in ‘References’ at the end of your thesis (e.g. title, and title of journal where
relevant), author, date, of publication, publisher, page numbers, and a brief note on
the content of the article or book in question). Alternatively, you can use a suitable
computer database for keeping your records of the publications consulted.
9.
You should aim to complete a reasonably comprehensive literature review before
carrying out the substantive part of your own research; this is because what you
find out in the literature review can help you to refine your research question and
your research method.
In one sense you will not be able to achieve a complete review before your own
data collection because research will continue to be published during the period of
your own research; but you should aim to complete most of the review as
early
as possible (otherwise you might find, half way through your data collection, that
someone else has already done it).
10.
The sources which you should search include books, articles, theses and thesiss,
government reports research papers, conference papers, abstracts and reviews,
library catalogues and on-line databases. Librarians and your supervisor should
be able to offer useful guidance. Many professional bodies have libraries which
might be relevant to your particular topic.
Further reading on literature reviews
Bell (1987) chapters 3 and 4, including pp 20 - 1; an extract from a literature review as an
illustration. Gill and Johnson (1991) pp. 21 - 22. Jankowicz (1991) chapter 8.
References:
Bell, J., (1987). Doing Your Research Project. Open University Press.
Gill, J. and Johnson, P., (1991). Research Methods for Manager. Paul Chapman.
Jankowicz, A., (1991). Business Research Projects for Students. Chapman and Hall.
APPENDIX C: TITLE PAGE
LAZARSKI UNIVERSITY
Faculty of Economics and Management
FULL ENGLISH TITLE OF THE THESIS
Full Polish title of the thesis
Programme of studies
(Economics/International Relations)
FULL NAME OF THE CANDIDATE
Student Enrollment No
Bachelor/Master Thesis
Supervisor’s name
Warsaw 2015
APPENDIX D: STATEMENTS PAGE
DECLARATION
This work has not previously been accepted in substance for any degree and is not being concurrently
submitted in candidature for any degree.
Signed
(Candidate)
Date
STATEMENT
I, being aware of all the applicable consequences, declare that the submitted dissertation, titled in
English and Polish, is the result of my own work and research.
Additionally, I declare that the dissertation does not infringe on any copyrights in accordance with
the act
on copyright and neighboring rights, nor does it infringe on any personal rights as protected by civil
law.
I also declare that the submitted work does not contain data and information obtained by me in a
forbidden manner.
I also confirm that the submitted dissertation is identical with the attached electronic version of it.
Signed
Date
(Candidate)
APPENDIX E: REFERENCE STYLE GUIDE
Book
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of book – family name and initials Year of publication. Title of book – italicized,
Edition, Place of publication, Publisher.
Reference
type
Single author
2 authors
3 authors
Example of in-text citation
Bibliography example
Sophisticated searching techniques
are important in finding information
(Berkman 1994)
OR
Berkman (1994, p. 25) claimed that
…
OR
Berkman (1994, pp. 30-35) agrees
that …
… from an engineering perspective
(Cengel & Boles 1994)
OR
Cengel and Boles (1994) found …
… as previously demonstrated (Reid,
Parsons & Green 1989)
Berkman, Robert, 1994. Find It fast:
how to uncover expert information on
any subject. New York:
HarperPerennial.
4 or more
authors
… neck pain caused by whiplash
(Jull et al. 2008).
OR
Jull et al. (2008) have argued …
No author
… already mentioned (Be, know, do:
leadership the Army way 2004).
OR
In Be, know, do: leadership the Army
way (2004) there is an interesting
example …
… geology of Queensland’s national
parks (Willmott 2004, 2006).
Multiple
works by the
same author
Cengel, Y. A., and Boles, M. A.,
1994. Thermodynamics: an
engineering approach, 2nd ed.
London: McGraw Hill.
Reid, D. H., Parsons, M. B. & Green,
C. W., 1989. Staff management in
human services: behavioral research
and application. Springfield: Charles
C. Thomas.
Jull, G., Sterling, M., Fallah, D.,
Treleaven, J. & O'Leary, S., 2008.
Whiplash headache and neck pain:
research-based directions for physical
therapies. Edinburgh: Churchill
Livingstone.
Be, know, do: leadership the Army
way, 2004. San Francisco: JosseyBass.
Insert alphabetically into the
Bibliography.
Willmott, W. F., 2004. Rocks and
landscapes of the national parks of
southern Queensland. Brisbane:
Geological Society of Australia,
Queensland Division.
Willmott, W. F., 2006. Rocks and
landscapes of the national parks of
central Queensland, Brisbane:
Geological Society of Australia,
Queensland Division.
Order chronologically from in the
reference list.
Multiple
works by the
same author,
published in
the same
year
Two or more
works by
different
authors
… geographically speaking
(Dawkins 1996a, 1996b)
… rock formations (Dawkins 1996;
Willmott 2004)
Book by an
organisation
or institution
… in the case of an institution
(Australian Government Publishing
Service 1987)
Different
Editions
… the meaning of educational
research (Pring 2004)
Edited book
… some findings (Sjostrand 1993)
OR
… optics defined (Pike & Sarkar
1986)
Book Series
In defining permutation groups
Bhattacharjee (1998) …
Dawkins, R., 1996a. Climbing Mount
Improbable. London: Viking.
Dawkins, R., 1996b. River out of Eden.
London: Phoenix.
Order alphabetically by title in the
reference list.
Dawkins, R., 1996. Climbing Mount
Improbable. London: Viking.
Willmott, W. F., 2004. Rocks and
landscapes of the national parks of
southern Queensland. Brisbane:
Geological Society of Australia,
Queensland Division.
Australian Government Publishing
Service, 1987. Commonwealth printing
and publishing manual, 2nd ed.
Canberra: A.G.P.S.
Pring, Robert, 2004. Philosophy of
educational research, 2nd ed. London:
Continuum, London.
The edition statement is placed after
the title of the work. This is not
necessary for a first edition.
Sjostrand, S. (ed.), 1993. Institutional
change: theory and empirical findings.
N.Y.: Harper.
Pike, E. R. & Sarkar, S. (eds.), 1986,
Frontiers in quantum optics. Bristol:
Adam Hilger.
Bhattacharjee, M., 1998. Notes of
infinite permutation groups, Lecture
notes in mathematics no. 1698. New
York: Springer.
Chapter in a book
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of chapter – family name and initials Year of publication. ‘Title of chapter –
in single quotation marks’, in Editor(s) of book (eds), Title of book – italicized, Edition.
Place of publication, Publisher, Page numbers.
Reference
type
Chapter in an
edited book
Example of in-text citation
Bernstein (1995) explained
intelligent traffic flows.
Bibliography example
Bernstein, D., 1995. ‘Transportation
planning’, in W. F. Chen (ed.), The
civil engineering handbook. Boca
Raton: CRC Press, pp. 231-61.
Or
Bernstein, Darel, 1995.
‘Transportation planning’, in W. F.
Chen (ed.), The civil engineering
handbook. Boca Raton: CRC Press,
pp. 231-61.
Conference paper
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of paper – family name and initials Year of publication. ‘Title of paper – in
single quotation marks’, Title of published proceedings which may include place held
and date(s) – italicized. Publisher, Place of Publication, Page number(s), (viewed date
in-full, URL – if accessed electronically).
Reference
type
Published
conference
paper
Unpublished
conference
paper
Example of in-text citation
Bourassa (1999) emphasized …
… estimating partner change
(Bowden and Fairley 1996)
Bibliography example
Bourassa, S., 1999. ‘Effects of child
care on young children’, Proceedings
of the third annual meeting of the
International Society for Child
Psychology. Atlanta, Georgia:
International Society for Child
Psychology, pp. 44-46.
Bowden, F. J. & Fairley, C. K., 1996.
‘Endemic STDs in the Northern
Territory: estimations of effective
rates of partner change’. Paper
presented to the scientific meeting of
the Royal Australian College of
Physicians, Darwin, 24-25 June.
Journal Article
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of journal article – family name and initials Year of publication. ‘Title of
journal article – in single quotation marks’, Title of journal – italicised, Volume, Issue
or number, Page number(s), (viewed date in-full, URL – if accessed electronically).
Reference
type
Journal
articles
Electronic
journal
article with
page
numbers
Electronic
journal
article
without page
Example of in-text citation
Huffman (1996) expanded on the
theory …
OR
… uses for whey protein (Huffman
1996).
… changes in resource management
(Daniel 2009)
… the discipline of art history
(Donahue-Wallace & Chanda 2005)
Bibliography example
Huffman, L. M., 1996. ‘Processing
whey protein for use as a food
ingredient’. Food Technology, vol. 50,
no. 2, pp. 49-52; [or Food Technology,
50, 2: 49-52].
Daniel, T. T., 2009. 'Learning from
simpler times'. Risk Management, vol.
56, no. 1: 40-44, viewed 30 January
2009, .
For an article retrieved from a
database, it is sufficient to give the
URL of the database site.
Donahue-Wallace, K. & Chanda, J.,
2005. 'A case study in integrating the
best practices of face-to-face art
history and online teaching'.
numbers
Interactive Multimedia Electronic
Journal of Computer-Enhanced
Learning, vol. 7, no. 1, viewed 30
January 2009,
.
Thesis
Elements of the citation
Author of thesis – family name and initials, Year of preparation of thesis. ‘Title of thesis – in
single quotation marks’, Award, Location of institution, Institution issuing degree.
Reference
type
Thesis
Example of in-text citation
Bibliography example
Exelby (1997) described the process
…
OR
… processing gold (Exelby 1997)
Exelby, James, 1997. ‘Aspects of gold
and mineral liberation’. PhD thesis,
Honolulu: Hawaii University.
The title is not italicized and is
placed in quotation marks.
Report
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of report – (person or organization) Year of Publication, Title of report italicized, Report number (if available), Publisher/ Institution, Place of publication:
(viewed date in-full, URL - if accessed electronically).
Reference
type
Print report
Electronic
report
Example of in-text citation
… in Queensland waterways
(Mortimer & Cox 1999)
… young children’s schooling
(Rathbun, West & Hausken 2003)
Bibliography example
Mortimer, M. & Cox, M., 1999.
Contaminants in mud crabs and
sediments from the Maroochy River.
Environment technical report no. 25.
Brisbane: Queensland Department of
the Environment.
Rathbun, A. H., West, J. & Hausken,
E. G., 2003. Young children's access to
computers in the home and at school in
1999 and 2000, NCES-2003-036.
Washington, DC.: National Center for
Education Statistics, viewed 4
November 2003,
.
Newspaper and magazine article
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of article – family name and initials Year of publication, ‘Title of article – in
single quotation marks’, Title of newspaper – italicized, Day month, Page number(s).
Reference
Example of in-text citation
Bibliography example
type
article
(print)
... as seen in the move to privatise the
railway (Simpson 1997)
Newspaper
article (web)
… government has been blamed for
the water shortage (Porteous 2007).
Simpson, L., 1997. ‘Tasmania’s
railway goes private’. Australian
Financial Review, 13 October, p. 10.
Porteous, C., 2007. ‘Rudd blamed for
drought’. Courier Mail, 15 August, p.
17, viewed 27 February 2009,
.
For an article retrieved from a
database, it is sufficient to give the
URL of the database site.
Web page
Elements of the citation
Author(s) of page – (person or organization), Year (page created or revised), Title of
page - italicized, description of document (if applicable), name of the sponsor of the
page (if applicable), viewed date-in-full, URL.
Reference
type
Web page
with author
Example of in-text citation
… this agreement (Albanese 2009)
Web page
with
corporate or
organisation
al author
… in this subject guide (University
of Queensland Library 2009)
Web page
with no date
of
publication
… it has been argued that emotional
intelligence is a combination of
competencies (Bliss n.d.)
Bibliography example
Albanese, A., 2009. Fairer
compensation for air travellers. Media
release, 29 January, Minister for
Infrastructure, Transport, Regional
Development and Local Government,
viewed 30 January 2009,
.
University of Queensland Library,
2009. Mechanical engineering subject
guide.University of Queensland
Library, viewed 6 February 2009,
.
Bliss, S., n.d.. The effect of emotional
intelligence on a modern
organizational leader’s ability to make
effective decisions, viewed 10
February 2008,
.
Map
Elements of the citation
Issuing body Year of publication, Title of map – italicized, Series (if available), Place of
publication, Publisher.
Reference
type
Example of in-text citation
Bibliography example
Map
… reading this map (Department of
Mines and Energy, Queensland
1996)
Department of Mines and Energy,
Queensland, 1996. Dotswood,
Australia 1:100 000 geological series,
sheet 8158, Queensland, Brisbane,
Department of Mines and Energy.
Personal communication
Elements of the citation
Information obtained by interview, telephone call, letter or email should be documented
in the text, but should NOT be included in the list of References.
Reference
type
Personal
communicati
on
Example of in-text citation
When interviewed on 15 June 1995,
Dr Peter Jones explained that …
OR
This was later verbally confirmed (P
Jones 1995, pers. comm., 15 June).
Bibliography example
Do not include in the bibliography
APPENDIX F: QUOTING AND PARAPHRASING GUIDELINES
The guidelines are adopted from a writing guide prepared by the University of
Wisconsin-Madison.
How to Paraphrase
• When reading a passage, try first to understand it as a whole, rather than
pausing to write down specific ideas or phrases.
• Be selective. You usually do not need to paraphrase an entire passage; instead,
choose and summarize the material that helps you make a point in your thesis.
• Think of what ‘your own words’ would be if you were telling someone who’s
unfamiliar with your subject (your mother, your brother, a friend) what the
original source said.
• Remember that you can use direct quotations of phrases from the original
within your paraphrase, and that you do not need to change or put quotation
marks around shared language.
Methods of Paraphrasing
A. Look away from the source, then write.
Read the text you want to paraphrase several times—until you feel that you
understand it and can use your own words to restate it to someone else. Then,
look away from the original and rewrite the text in your own words.
B. Take notes.
Take abbreviated notes, set the notes aside, then paraphrase from the notes a day
or so later, or when you draft.
C. While looking at the source, first change the structure, then the words.
For example, consider the following passage from Love and Toil (a book on
motherhood in London from 1870 to 1918), in which the author, Ellen Ross,
puts forth one of her major arguments:
Love and Toil maintains that family survival was the mother’s main
charge among the large majority of London’s population who were poor
or working class; the emotional and intellectual nurture of her child or
children and even their actual comfort were forced into the background.
To mother was to work for and organize household subsistence. (p. 9)
1. Change the structure
•
Begin by starting at a different place in the passage and/or sentence(s),
basing your choice on the focus of your paper. This will lead naturally to
some changes in wording. Some places you might start in the passage above
are ‘The mother’s main charge,’ ‘Among the ... poor or working class,’
‘Working for and organizing household subsistence,’ or ‘The emotional and
intellectual nurture.’ Or you could begin with one of the people the passage
is about: ‘Mothers,’ ‘A mother,’ ‘Children,’ ‘A child.’ Focusing on specific
people rather than abstractions will make your paraphrase more readable.
•
At this stage, you might also break up long sentences, combine short ones,
expand phrases for clarity, or shorten them for conciseness, or you might do
this in an additional step. In this process, you will naturally eliminate some
words and change others.
Here is one of the many ways you might get started with a paraphrase of the
passage above by changing its structure. In this case, the focus of the paper is the
effect of economic status on children at the turn of the century, so the writer
begins with children:
Children of the poor at the turn of the century received little if any
emotional or intellectual nurturing from their mothers, whose main
charge was family survival. Working for and organizing household
subsistence were what defined mothering. Next to this, even the
children’s basic comfort was forced into the background (Ross, 1995).
Now you have succeeded in changing the structure, but the passage still contains
many direct quotations, so you need to go on to the second step:
2. Change the words
•
•
use synonyms or a phrase that expresses the same meaning.
leave shared language unchanged.
It is important to start by changing the structure, not the words, but you might
find that as you change the words, you see ways to change the structure further.
The final paraphrase might look like this:
According to Ross (1993), poor children at the turn of the century
received little mothering in our sense of the term. Mothering was defined
by economic status, and among the poor, a mother’s foremost
responsibility was not to stimulate her children’s minds or foster their
emotional growth but to provide food and shelter to meet the basic
requirements for physical survival. Given the magnitude of this task,
children were deprived of even the ‘actual comfort’ (p. 9) we expect
mothers to provide today.
You may need to go through this process several times to create a satisfactory
paraphrase.
How to Use Direct Quotation
Direct quotation can be used for a variety of reasons, such as:
• To show that an authority supports a point in the thesis
• To present a position or argument to critique or comment on
• To include especially moving or historically significant language
•
To present a particularly well-stated passage whose meaning would be lost
or changed if paraphrased or summarized
However, students should not rely too heavily on direct quotation. Most of the ideas and
text in their thesis should be in their own words. Below are some guidelines to follow
when using direct quotations.
Introducing Quotations
One of your jobs as a writer is to guide your reader through your text. Do not simply
drop quotations into your thesis and leave it to the reader to make connections.
Integrating a quotation into your text usually involves two elements:
•
•
A signal that a quotation is coming—generally the author’s name and/or a
reference to the work
An assertion that indicates the relationship of the quotation to your text
Often both the signal and the assertion appear in a single introductory statement, as in
the example below. Notice how a transitional phrase also serves to connect the
quotation smoothly to the introductory statement.
Ross (1993), in her study of poor and working-class mothers in London from
1870-1918 [signal], makes it clear that economic status to a large extent
determined the meaning of motherhood [assertion]. Among this population
[connection], ‘To mother was to work for and organize household subsistence’
(p. 9).
The signal can also come after the assertion, again with a connecting word or phrase:
Illness was rarely a routine matter in the nineteenth century [assertion]. As
[connection] Ross observes [signal], ‘Maternal thinking about children’s health
revolved around the possibility of a child’s maiming or death’ (p. 166).
Formatting Quotations
Incorporate short direct prose quotations into the text of your thesis and enclose them in
double quotation marks, as in the examples above. Begin longer quotations (2 lines or
more) on a new line and indent the entire quotation (i.e., put in block form), with no
quotation marks at beginning or end, as in the quoted passage
Punctuation with Quotation Marks
1. Parenthetical citations. With short quotations, place citations outside of closing
quotation marks, followed by sentence punctuation (period, question mark, comma,
semi-colon, colon):
Menand (2002) characterizes language as ‘a social weapon’ (p. 115).
2. Commas and periods. Place inside closing quotation marks when no parenthetical
citation follows:
Hertzberg (2002) notes that ‘treating the Constitution as imperfect is not new,’
but because of Dahl’s credentials, his ‘apostasy merits attention’ (p. 85).
3. Question marks and exclamation points. Place inside closing quotation marks if the
quotation is a question/exclamation:
Menand (2001) acknowledges that H. W. Fowler’s Modern English Usage is ‘a
classic of the language,’ but he asks, ‘Is it a dead classic?’ (p. 114). [Note that a
period still follows the closing parenthesis.]
Place outside of closing quotation marks if the entire sentence containing the quotation
is a question or exclamation:
How many students actually read the guide to find out what is meant by
‘academic misconduct’?
4. Quotations within quotations. Use double quotation marks for the embedded
quotation:
According to Hertzberg (2002), Dahl gives the U. S. Constitution ‘bad marks in
‘democratic fairness’ and ‘encouraging consensus’’’ (p. 90). [The phrases
‘democratic fairness’ and ‘encouraging consensus’ are already in quotation
marks in Dahl’s sentence.]
LAZARSKI UNIVERSITY
ESSAY WRITING STANDARD
A Guide for Students and Lecturers
(Updated October 2014)
TABLE OF CONTENTS
1. Introduction
2. Essay Format
2.1. Title Page
2.2. Font, Spacing, Margins, and Page Numbers
2.3. Essay Length
2.4. Referencing System
3. Essay Submission and Grading
3.1. Submission
3.2. Grading
Appendix A – Sample Title Page
Appendix B – Page Format
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INTRODUCTION
Essay writing assignments are an important element of course assessment. They not only allow
lecturers and professors to check if students have understood the material in a given course, but
they also allow them to assess the students’ critical thinking and analytical skills. More
importantly, essays are a good way for students to learn about a given subject, and a good
means for them to test their own investigative and diagnostic abilities.
There is no one way that an essay should be structured, and no one way that an argument
should be presented. Essays, like novels, can be as long and convoluted as a Dostoyevsky epic,
or as short and straightforward as a Hemingway novella, and still retain the same literary or
academic value. Nevertheless, in order to train strong writers and successful researchers,
Lazarski University has developed this “Essay Writing Standard” to be used by all students in all
courses in its English-language programs.
The Standard is not intended to constrain the creativity of students, but rather to enforce basic
habits such as proper citation, quotation, and paraphrasing, which are essential for good
academic writing. Like in any trade, whether it be painting, carpentry, or architecture, once
students master the basic rules and tools required to be good academics, they will be free to
experiment and demonstrate their full creative abilities. But before they can do this, they must
learn the fundamentals.
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ESSAY FORMAT
As stated earlier, there is no set style for writing an essay. However, in order to ease the grading
process, as well as to help students focus on the content of their essay without worrying about its
format, Lazarski University has adopted uniform rules concerning title pages, font and line
spacing, page numbers, bibliography, and citation, which are to be used by all students for all
essay-writing assignments.
2.1 Title Page
All essays should have a precise title. For long essays, the title is to be typed in capital letters on
the first page. Below this comes the student’s name, their student number, the course for which
the essay is submitted, the name of the course coordinator, and the date of submission. There
should be no page number on the title page. An example of a proper title page is given in
Appendix A.
For shorter essays (below 2500 words), students may forgo the title page and simply write the
title above the text of their essay, along with their name, student number, and date of submission.
However, it is up to the course coordinator to designate whether or not a proper title page is
required.
2.2 Font, Spacing, Margins, and Page Numbers
The essay text should be double spaced, and the font ought to be in Times New Roman, size 12.
A larger size and different font style may be used for headings or section titles at the student’s
discretion.
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The margins of the essay should be 2.5 cm all around and all pages in the essay must have page
numbers, except for the title page. Page numbers must be written at the bottom of each page and
should be centred. The text of the essay should also be ‘justified’, and the first line of each new
paragraph must begin with an indentation. However, the first line at the beginning of a new
section and below a section heading should not be indented, see Appendix B.
2.3 Essay Length
The length of the essay assignment is dependent on the amount of coursework in a given course,
as well as the year in which the course is taught. The length is also determined by the course
coordinator and shall be given in terms of word-count (e.g. 3000 words).
Given that the Essay Standard requires that all papers be double-spaced, with 2.5 cm margins all
around, one page should fit approximately 350 words. Bibliographies are not counted in the
word/page count.
2.4 Referencing System
Referencing is a standardized way of acknowledging the sources of information and ideas that
are used while writing the essay. In that regard, students should do their best to cite all of their
sources properly and avoid plagiarism. Proper referencing also helps readers to verify quotations,
allows readers to follow up on what the authors have written, and lets them locate the cited works
easily.
There are many different citation styles, such as the American Psychological Association (APA)
style, or the Chicago Manual of Style. For essays written at Lazarski University however, the
preferred referencing system is the ‘Harvard Style’. Harvard style is often referred to as an
“author-date”, or “parenthetical” system. It is widely accepted in academic publications, although
there are several variations in the way that it is used.
The Harvard style uses parentheses instead of footnotes as a way to cite sources. In their
essays, students may also use footnotes but only as a way to clarify or expand on a given point
and NOT as a way to reference. For good examples of how to use and apply the Harvard style,
check the following links:
http://www.lib.monash.edu.au/tutorials/citing/harvard.html
http://libweb.anglia.ac.uk/referencing/harvard.htm
http://www.library.uq.edu.au/training/citation/harvard_6.pdf
Students may also refer to the BA Thesis Manual, as well as the MA/MSc Dissertation Manual,
for more details. Moreover, they may refer to the Coventry University Harvard Reference Style
Quick Guide. The Quick Guide and the Manuals are available on the student resource page
(zasoby) under the codes “course1-Econ”, “course1-IR”, “course2-Econ” and “course2-IR”.
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ESSAY SUBMISSION AND GRADING
3.1 Submission
All essays are to be submitted before or on the day specified by the course coordinator. Late
submissions may result in penalties and lower grades. Each student MUST submit a paper copy
of their essay AND an electronic copy either on disc or via email. The electronic copy will be used
by the course coordinator to verify that the work has not been plagiarized by using the antiplagiarism programs Turn-it-in-UK, as well as www.plagiat.pl.
3.2 Grading
Essay grades will be given in percents ranging from 0 to 100, although students should not
expect to be given perfect scores because, after all, it is impossible to define what exactly
constitutes a “perfect” essay. To receive an “A” on their essays, students should aim to achieve
70 percent or above. Scores below 40 percent constitute a failing grade.
The table below details the different grade scales in terms of percents, British-letter grades, and
Polish grades.
Percent
76-100%*
70-75%
63-69%
54-62%
49-53%
40-48%
0-39%
British letter scale
A+
A
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D
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Polish scale
5,5*
5,0
4,5
4,0
3,5
3,0
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* a grade of A+ or in Polish “celujący”, is to be given only for truly exceptional work
The following table specifies the characteristics of excellent, mediocre, and poor essays.
BA level
Class
Mark range
90 – 100%
Class I
80 – 89%
70 – 79%
Guidelines
In addition to that for 70 – 79% below, an outstanding answer that could hardly be
bettered. High degree of understanding, critical/analytic skills and original research,
where specified. Outstanding in all respects.
In addition to that for 70 – 79% below, the answer will demonstrate an excellent level
of understanding, presence of clear description, critical/analytical skills or research, as
appropriate.
Answer entirely relevant to the assignment set. Answer will demonstrate clear
understanding of theories, concepts, issues and methodology, as appropriate. There
will be evidence of wide-ranging reading and/or research, as appropriate, beyond the
minimum recommended. Answers will be written/presented in a clear, well-structured
way with clarity of expression. At level 3, evidence of independent, critical thought
would normally be expected.
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65 – 69%
Class II : I
60 – 64%
55 – 59%
Class II : II
50 – 54%
Marginal fail
35 – 39%
Answer demonstrating a very good understanding of the requirements of the
assignment. Answer will demonstrate very good understanding of theories, concepts,
issues and methodology, as appropriate. Answer will be mostly accurate/appropriate,
with few errors. Little, if any, irrelevant material may be present. Reading beyond
the recommended minimum will be present where appropriate. Well organised and
clearly written/presented.
A good understanding, with few errors. Some irrelevant material may be present.
Well organised and clearly written/presented. Some reading/research beyond
recommended in evidence.
Answer demonstrating a good understanding of relevant theories, concepts, issues
and methodology. Some reading/research beyond that recommended may be
present. Some errors may be present and inclusion of irrelevant material. May not be
particularly well-structured, and/or clearly presented.
Answer demonstrating a reasonable understanding of theories, concepts, issues and
methodology. Answer likely to show some errors of understanding. May be
significant amount of irrelevant material. May not be well-structured and
expression/presentation may be unclear at times.
Some relevant material will be present. Understanding will be poor with little evidence
of reading/research on the topic. Fundamental errors and misunderstanding likely to
be present. Poor structure and poor expression/presentation. Much material may not
be relevant to the assignment.
Inadequate answer with little relevant material and poor understanding of theories,
concepts, issues and methodology, as appropriate. Fundamental errors and
misunderstandings will be present. Material may be largely irrelevant. Poorly
structured and poorly expressed/presented.
30 – 34%
Fail
20 – 29%
0 – 19%
Clear failure to provide answer to the assignment. Little understanding and only a
vague knowledge of the area. Serious and fundamental errors and lack of
understanding. Virtually no evidence of relevant reading/research. Poorly structured
and inadequately expressed/presented.
Complete failure, virtually no understanding of requirements of the assignment.
Material may be entirely irrelevant. Answer may be extremely short, and in note form
only. Answer may be fundamentally wrong, or trivial. Not a serious attempt.
MA/MSc level
INDICATIVE
GRADE
A
UK %
MARKS
70% and
above
CHARACTERISTICS
Very high standard of critical analysis using appropriate conceptual frameworks.
Excellent understanding and exposition of relevant issues.
Clearly structured and logically developed arguments.
Good awareness of nuances and complexities.
Substantial evidence of well-executed independent research.
Excellent evaluation and synthesis of source material.
Relevant data and examples, all properly referenced.
Distinction
70% and above
B
C
D
69-60%
High standard of critical analysis using appropriate conceptual frameworks.
Clear awareness and exposition of relevant issues.
Clearly structured and logically developed arguments.
Awareness of nuances and complexities.
Evidence of independent research.
Good evaluation and synthesis of source material.
Relevant data and examples, all properly referenced.
59-50%
Uses appropriate conceptual frameworks.
Attempts analysis but includes some errors and/or omissions.
Shows awareness of issues but no more than to be expected from attendance at classes.
Arguments reasonably clear but underdeveloped.
Insufficient evidence of independent research.
Insufficient evaluation of source material.
Some good use of relevant data and examples, but incompletely referenced.
49-40%
Adequate understanding of appropriate conceptual frameworks.
Answer too descriptive and/or any attempt at analysis is superficial, containing errors
and/or omissions.
Shows limited awareness of issues but also some confusion.
Arguments not particularly clear.
Limited evidence of independent research and reliance on a superficial repeat of class
notes.
Relatively superficial use of relevant data, sources and examples and poorly referenced.
Pass Mark = 40%
E
39-30%
F
29% and
below
Weak understanding of appropriate conceptual frameworks.
Weak analysis and several errors and omissions.
Establishes a few relevant points but superficial and confused exposition of issues.
No evidence of independent research and reliance on a superficial repeat of class notes.
Relatively superficial use of relevant data, sources and examples and poorly referenced.
Very weak or no understanding of appropriate conceptual frameworks.
Very weak or no grasp of analysis and may errors and omissions.
Very little or no understanding of the issues raised by the question.
No appropriate references to data, sources, examples or even class notes.
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APPENDIX A – SAMPLE TITLE PAGE
The Role of Intellectuals in Contemporary
Politics
By: John F. Awesome
Student Number: 100 500
Course:
Advanced Political Theory
Course Coordinator:
Prof. Knows-A-Lot
Date of Submission:
February 31, 2052
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APPENDIX B – PAGE FORMAT
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