Modify article, grammar check

May 5th, 2015
Anonymous
Category:
Art Design
Price: $15 USD

Question description

I submit the first draft, and my teacher give me a feedback, hope you can modify the article in accordance with the requirements of the teacher.

 3 SECOND.pdf  This one is my first draft.

u539fu6587.pdf This is required to read the article, my article is based on this written.

This one is the feedback. Please modify the article in accordance with the requirements of the teacher.

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