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Hi,

is this sentences grammarly correct?

This paper has been thorough in explaining though the use of various experiments, how diet can be very help the improvement of brain functions through the process of neurogenisis.

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May 6th, 2015

No, it is not.

The correct statement should be...

This paper has been thorough in explaining, through the use of various experiments, how diet can be very helpful in the improvement of brain function through the process of neurogenesis.


May 6th, 2015

thank you.

what about this sentence:

Brain function is as a result of neurons that communicate with each other. This communication is in the form of chemicals reactions and is referred to as neurotransmission and it takes place through pathways in the brain referred to as neural pathways.

May 6th, 2015

That one is grammatically correct

May 6th, 2015

Thank you very much 

May 6th, 2015

welcome

May 6th, 2015

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