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This essay is for my classmate and it needs to be reviewed . The peer review form is attached

This is the essay : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZGTbuFth12Y6op...

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Author: Savanna Hanna Peer Reviewer: Meshal Almutair YNGVE’S PEER REVIEW RESPONSE FOR ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAYS Please answer all questions thoroughly, using complete sentences rather than simple “yes” or “no” responses. If necessary, you may use the back of this form and a separate sheet of paper for longer responses. 1) What is the title? Does it suit the work? Does it engage the reader? 2) Who is the audience, and are the needs of the audience kept in mind? Is more background information needed or do words need to be defined for the intended audience? 3) Look at the essay as a whole. What main idea or thesis/claim is advanced? What is the writer’s purpose? 4) Does the introductory paragraph catch the reader’s attention? Is it well structured? Does anything need to be fixed? 5) What kind of supporting evidence does the writer use (examples, anecdotes, facts, stats, interviews, surveys, graphs, charts, photos, etc.)? Has the author supplied adequate supporting evidence? Is more needed? If so where? 6) Is any obvious evidence or counterevidence overlooked? 7) Does the conclusion live up to the rest of the essay? What, if anything, needs work? 8) Does the essay fulfill Toulmin’s Model: warrants, rebuttal, modal qualifiers, backing, grounds, etc. 9) On the back of this sheet, point out to the author what is most effective and least effective. Then provide at least one suggestion to assist the author.
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1. The title of this essay is “No Blood Transfusion”. It suits the work well. The reader is
engaged as he/she can apply certain models, processes as well questions.
2. The audience of this paper is the instructor since the instructor reads the essay and grades
it accordingly. More information is required and words explained and clarified so to
remove the assumption tha...


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