Is a Vaping (e-cigarettes) a safer alternative to smoking

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I need a final ARGUMENTATIVE paper from the rough draft attached. This the feedback I received on the rough draft.

This is a good effort. You've learned a lot about vaping, and you present your findings in a clear fashion. A reader can learn a lot about e-cigs by reading this paper.

However, there is no clear sense of audience or purpose. As a reader, I'm not sure why you are telling me all this or what you want me to do or agree with. An argumentative paper does not merely "present the facts." It attempts to sway the reader to agree with something.

Who is your audience? The paper does not have a sense that that it is targeted to anyone.

So, you have a good idea here. Now you must decide what you want to do with it. More importantly, what do you want the reader to do with it.

Research is slight. Only two sources are listed; four are required. You made a good effort to use in-text citations, but more citations are needed. Every time you borrow information, you must cite the source. Consider adding a few quotes to support your claims.


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Running Head: IS VAPING A SAFER ALTERNATIVE TO SMOKING?

Is a Vaping (e-cigarettes) a safer alternative to smoking?
Ramon Polo
Grantham University

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IS VAPING A SAFER ALTERNATIVE TO SMOKING?
The advent of Vaping has been widely embraced by many people canvassed in the belief
that it is a “safer” alternative to smoking the traditional cigarettes. Many traditional cigarettes
smokers have developed the perception that e-cigarette is a better solution to helping people quit
smoking. However, I believe the e-cigarette debate has two sides but with little evidence, and
hence the need to interrogate the matter further. Personally, I think the perception that people
have developed over time that e-cigarette can help smokers quit smoking has made them into
thinking that it is a safer alternative, which could not be necessary the case. It is time we need to
ask ourselves if for sure e-cigarette is good for our health as many people purport by conducting
further research. E-cigarettes could be a better innovation to tobacco products, but it is not any
safer from the regular cigarettes and in the long run it has negative outcomes just like the regular
cigarettes.
An electronic cigarette (also called ecig) is an electronic system using a small battery to
heat the solution into steam, in which its design usually imitates tobacco, cigars or pipes.
Generally, the device includes a replaceable cartridge or a rechargeable cartridge, but disposable
e-cigarettes also exist. The main substances contained in the liquid are propylene glycol
(generally about 70%) and/or vegetable glycerin (generally about 20%), different doses (0 mg to
54 mg/ml) of nicotine, flavor and aroma (Brown, et. al., 2014). Va...


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