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The American Cancer Society (ACS) is a nationwide, community-based, voluntary health organization dedicated to eliminating cancer as a major health problem. Together with its supporters, ACS is committed to helping people stay well and get well by finding cures and by fighting back.
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- Imagine that a family friend or colleague has just been diagnosed with cancer. Explain how the American Cancer Society might provide education and support. What ACS services would you recommend and why?
- According to statistics published by the American Cancer Society, there will be an estimated 1.5 million new cancer cases diagnosed each year over the next decade. What factors contribute to the yearly incidence and mortality rates of various cancers in Americans? What changes in policy and practice are most likely to affect these figures over time
- Select a research program from among those funded by the American Cancer Society. Describe the program and discuss what impact the research will have on the prevention or treatment of cancer.
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Explain the discrepancy in pay among the current employees.
Describe the strategy you would take to correct the internal equity issue.
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Touchstones are projects that illustrate your comprehension of the course material, help you to refine skills, and demonstrate application of knowledge. You can work on a Touchstone anytime, but you can't submit it for grading until you have completed the unit’s Milestone. After you've submitted a Touchstone, it will be graded and counted towards your final course score.Touchstone 4: Informative Essay RevisionASSIGNMENT: Review the in-text comments and summary feedback you received on your Touchstone 3 draft to deepen and extend your analysis of your topic. Submit a revision of your Touchstone 3 draft that reflects the feedback. Include a copy of your Touchstone 3 draft below the “Think About Your Writing” questions for this unit.Sample Revised Image Analysis EssaySample Revised Extended Definition EssayA. InstructionsAll writers revise their work as part of the writing process. For Touchstone 4, submit a revised version of your Touchstone 3 essay. 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ScoringYour essay and reflection will be scored according to the Informative Rubric, which considers your revision and edits, effectiveness in addressing the writing prompt for either the analysis essay OR the definition essay, the working thesis, organization, style and tone, focus, conventions and proofreading, and your responses to the “Think About Your Writing” questions.E. Helpful TutorialsIntroduction to RevisionRevision StrategiesOrganization Revision: Cutting, Adding, MovingRevising for Clarity and FocusF. Rubric Advanced (90-100%)Proficient (80-89%)Acceptable (70-79%)Needs Improvement (50-69%)Non-Performance (0-49%)Revising and EditingDemonstrate comprehensive “re-visioning” and sentence-level edits.There is evidence of comprehensive re-visioning of the draft essay, including adjustments to organization, focus and clarity where needed or appropriate. There is evidence of comprehensive edits to the draft essay, including adjustments to word choice, sentence completeness, sentence variety, and/or style where needed or appropriate.There is evidence of significant re-visioning of the draft essay, including adjustments to organization, focus, and clarity where needed or appropriate. There is evidence of substantial edits to the draft essay, including adjustments to word choice, sentence completeness, sentence variety, and/or style where needed or appropriate.There is evidence of some re-visioning of the draft essay, including adjustments to organization, focus and clarity where needed or appropriate; however, a few areas need additional revision. There is evidence of some edits to the draft essay, including adjustments to word choice, sentence completeness, sentence variety, and/or style where needed/appropriate; however, some issues were overlooked.There is little evidence of re-visioning of the draft essay, such that multiple areas in need of changes are unaltered. There is little evidence of editing in the draft essay, such that many errors remain.Revisions are absent or did not address problems in the essay. Edits are absent or did not address the problems in the essay.Image AnalysisPrompt A: Analyze an advertisement using parts to draw conclusions.Consistently goes beyond description to analyze the design choices made in the advertisement, including layout, color schemes, text, and/or other design components. Effectively draws conclusions about the intended audience, and the likely impact and effectiveness of the advertisement.Primarily goes beyond description to analyze the design choices made in the advertisement, including layout, color schemes, text, and/or other design components. Draws conclusions about the intended audience, and the likely impact and effectiveness of the advertisement.Includes some analysis of the design choices made in the advertisement (i.e., layout, color schemes, text, and/or other design components), but focuses primarily on description. Somewhat effectively draws conclusions about the intended audience, and the likely impact and effectiveness of the advertisement.Focuses heavily on description. Analysis of the design choices made in the advertisement is limited or absent. Conclusions about the intended audience, and the likely impact and effectiveness of the advertisement are very limited.Does not describe or analyze the advertisement. Does not draw conclusions about the advertisement.Extended Definition EssayPrompt B - Define a meaningful word or concept in a unique or compelling way.Defines a meaningful and nuanced word or concept in a coherent and compelling way, consistently using critical thinking and thoughtful discussion to explore the definition. Consistently goes beyond traditional definitions to define the word in a new and unique way.Defines a meaningful and nuanced word or concept in a coherent way, primarily using critical thinking and thoughtful discussion to explore the definition. Primarily goes beyond traditional definitions to define the word in a new and unique way.Defines a meaningful and nuanced word or concept adequately, but only sometimes uses critical thinking and thoughtful discussion to explore the definition. Only sometimes goes beyond traditional definitions to define the word in a new and unique way.Defines a word or concept, although critical thinking and thoughtful discussion are largely absent. Often relies too much on the traditional or dictionary definition, and does not sufficiently explore a new or unique definition.Does not define a word or concept from the list provided and/or does not explore the definition in a thoughtful or critical manner. Relies almost entirely on the traditional or dictionary definition.Thesis StatementState the focused central claim of the essay.Has a clear, focused, and detailed working thesis that is expressed in a single sentence that states the central claim of the essay.Has a clear and focused working thesis that is expressed in a single sentence that states the central claim of the essay.Has an acceptable working thesis that states a claim, but it may be somewhat unclear or unfocused, or composed of more than one sentence.Has a working thesis, but it is not clear and/or focused, and/or it does not state a claim.Does not have an identifiable working thesis, and/or the thesis is extremely unclear or unfocused.OrganizationExhibit competent organization, flow, and writing techniques.Includes all required components of an essay, including an introduction with a thesis; an adequate number of body paragraphs (3-6,) each with a topic sentence; and a conclusion with a concluding statement. The sequence of sentences and paragraphs is logical and flows well.Essay includes an introductory paragraph, a concluding paragraph, and an appropriate number of body paragraphs. The sequence of sentences and paragraphs is logical.The sequence of sentences and paragraphs is predominantly logical.The sequence of sentences and/or paragraphs is frequently illogical.The sequence of sentences and/or paragraphs is consistently illogical.Style and ToneEstablish a consistent, informative tone and make thoughtful choices.Demonstrates thoughtful and effective word choices, avoids redundancy, and uses a wide variety of sentence structures. Establishes a consistently unbiased and impersonal tone that is appropriate to an informative essay.Demonstrates effective word choices, primarily avoids redundancy, and uses a variety of sentence structures. Establishes an unbiased and impersonal tone that is appropriate to an informative essay, with occasional minor exceptions.Demonstrates generally effective style choices, but may include occasional redundancies, poor word choices, and/or repetitive sentence structures. Primarily establishes an unbiased and impersonal tone that is appropriate to an informative essay; however some sections express bias or include personal observations.Frequently includes poor word choices, redundancies, and/or repetitive sentence structures. Primarily establishes a tone that is biased, and personal observations and opinions are expressed frequently.Consistently demonstrates poor word choices, redundancies, and/or repetitive sentence structures. Tone is consistently biased and the essay is dominated by personal observations and opinions.FocusInclude relevant details, effective connections.Details are relevant and support the purpose of the essay. The writer consistently makes effective connections between the supporting details and the working thesis.Details are relevant and support the purpose of the essay. The writer makes some effective connections between the supporting details and the working thesis.Details are predominantly relevant and generally support the purpose of the essay, though some details may be irrelevant and/or distracting.Details are often irrelevant and frequently distract from the purpose of the essay.Details are irrelevant and distract from the purpose of the essay.Conventions and ProofreadingDemonstrate command of standard English grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, and usage.There may be a few negligible errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are occasional minor errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are some significant errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are frequent significant errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are consistent significant errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.Think About Your WritingAnswer reflection questions thoroughly and thoughtfully.Demonstrates thoughtful reflection; consistently includes insights, observations, and/or examples in all responses. Answers all reflection questions effectively, following or exceeding response length guidelines.Demonstrates thoughtful reflection; includes multiple insights, observations, and/or examples. Answers all reflection questions effectively, following response length guidelines.Primarily demonstrates thoughtful reflection, but some responses lack detail or insight. Answers all reflection questions, primarily following response length guidelines.Shows limited reflection; most responses lack detail or insight. Answers reflection questions inadequately: may not answer all of the questions and/or may not follow response length guidelines.Does not answer the majority of reflection questions or the majority of answers do not follow response length guidelines.G. RequirementsYour essay should be three to five pages (approximately 800-1300 words) in length.Informative Guidelines and Topic Selection Guidelines must be followed or your submission will not be graded.Double-space the draft, and use one-inch margins.Use an easy-to-read 12-point font.All writing must be appropriate for an academic context.Your draft and revision must be original and written for this assignment.Plagiarism of any kind is strictly prohibited.Your submission must include your name, the name of the course, the date, and the title of your draft.Your submission must include, in the following order: your revised essay, your answers to the “Think About Your Writing” questions, and a copy of your original essay (from Touchstone 3).Submit only a single file only that contains all assignment components.Acceptable file formats are .doc and .docx.
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The writer consistently makes effective connections between the supporting details and the working thesis.Details are relevant and support the purpose of the essay. The writer makes some effective connections between the supporting details and the working thesis.Details are predominantly relevant and generally support the purpose of the essay, though some details may be irrelevant and/or distracting.Details are often irrelevant and frequently distract from the purpose of the essay.Details are irrelevant and distract from the purpose of the essay.Conventions and ProofreadingDemonstrate command of standard English grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, and usage.There may be a few negligible errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are occasional minor errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are some significant errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are frequent significant errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.There are consistent significant errors in grammar, punctuation, spelling, capitalization, formatting, and usage.Think About Your WritingAnswer reflection questions thoroughly and thoughtfully.Demonstrates thoughtful reflection; consistently includes insights, observations, and/or examples in all responses. Answers all reflection questions effectively, following or exceeding response length guidelines.Demonstrates thoughtful reflection; includes multiple insights, observations, and/or examples. Answers all reflection questions effectively, following response length guidelines.Primarily demonstrates thoughtful reflection, but some responses lack detail or insight. Answers all reflection questions, primarily following response length guidelines.Shows limited reflection; most responses lack detail or insight. Answers reflection questions inadequately: may not answer all of the questions and/or may not follow response length guidelines.Does not answer the majority of reflection questions or the majority of answers do not follow response length guidelines.G. RequirementsYour essay should be three to five pages (approximately 800-1300 words) in length.Informative Guidelines and Topic Selection Guidelines must be followed or your submission will not be graded.Double-space the draft, and use one-inch margins.Use an easy-to-read 12-point font.All writing must be appropriate for an academic context.Your draft and revision must be original and written for this assignment.Plagiarism of any kind is strictly prohibited.Your submission must include your name, the name of the course, the date, and the title of your draft.Your submission must include, in the following order: your revised essay, your answers to the “Think About Your Writing” questions, and a copy of your original essay (from Touchstone 3).Submit only a single file only that contains all assignment components.Acceptable file formats are .doc and .docx.
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