Can you help me with my Romeo and Juliet essay

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Can you please provide me assistance on my Romeo and Juliet essay that has to be about another theme in the book other than love

May 24th, 2015

other themes can be family and religion. Family because of the two fighting parents. Religion because of Friar Lawrence.

May 24th, 2015

I can write the essay for you if you want. Thanks

May 24th, 2015

What about fate as a theme would you be able to discuss with me ideas on that and how 

I can commence my essay

May 24th, 2015

yeah that theme would work. 

May 24th, 2015

Do you have some ideas of how I can make this theme into an essay or how can I start it?

May 24th, 2015

think of a thesis statement for the essay you wanna write first. Their fate were destined to be in turmoil due to their lack of knowledge in presenting a plan for them to be together. 

May 24th, 2015

If I were to use that these what should be my hook? What I mean what should I start the introductory paragraph

May 24th, 2015

you can start out the first sentence like this:

Everyone feel like their destiny can be controlled by them, however, that would take take absolute precision from everybody that is involved. In the case of Romeo and Juliet, their fate was troubled by the outside factors and place these two lovers at the wrong time. 

You can start of your essay with this

May 24th, 2015

So it would be like this

Everyone feel like their destiny can be controlled by them, however, that would take take absolute precision from everybody that is involved. In the case of Romeo and Juliet, their fate was troubled by the outside factors and place these two lovers at the wrong time. Their fate were destined to be in turmoil due to their lack of knowledge in presenting a plan for them to be together. 

May 24th, 2015

well just finish it up with a thesis statement

May 24th, 2015

Would this be a good one

The moment that  Romeo and Juliet meet is the exact event that leads to their death, however unaware these "star-crossed lovers" are to that fact. So,(the) unavoidable, already-decided future is definitely the most responsible influence for the couple's heartbreaking terrible tradegy.

May 25th, 2015

How can I change that thesis up a bit?

May 25th, 2015

or would this be better?

The minute that Romeo and Juliet meet is the definite occasion that prompts their passing, however ignorant these "star-crossed mates" are to that actuality. Thus, (the) unavoidable, officially chose future is certainly the most dependable impact for the couple's tragic horrible occasion.

May 25th, 2015

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