Personal essay

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I wrote an introduction and first body paragraph. I want you guys to write second body paragraph and conclusion and edit. please no plagiarism because my professor has a plagiarism check system.

[Last Name] 1 [Your Name] [Instructor Name] [Course Number] [Date] Moving to the United States Many people move to a different place for a different reason because everyone wants to have a successful and happy life. When I was in high school, I always said to myself that one day I would become an engineer and change my family life for a better. Like any child, I want to support and make my family happy. However, without education, it is difficult to change your life from where I come from. I came from Ethiopia. I was the oldest child for my family. My parents want me to stop my education and focus on work. I didn’t like their advice and start to look other ways to finish my education. Luckily, I won DV Lottery. There was a mixed feeling in my mind after winning the lottery. On the one hand, I taught about the opportunity I got moving to America, made me excited. On the other side leaving my family and my friends makes me feel sad and emotional. However, I said to myself I should sacrifice myself to achieve my goals and moved to the States for a better life. First, moving to the United States makes you experience a different lifestyle from Ethiopia. After I arrived in the states, my mom’s relative received me from the airport and took me to their house in Alexandria, Virginia. They were living in three-bedroom apartment with four kids. It was a small place for a big family. After few weeks pass, I start to look a job. Then, I found a job and start working at a gas station. I was excited because it was my first job in the state. Later on, I moved out form my relative house and start living with a roommate in falls church, Virginia. The first couple of month was tough for me to adopt the American lifestyle [Last Name] 2 because it is different from Ethiopia. For example, when I was in Ethiopia, there is a family member who cooks my food, clean my room and wash my cloth. Therefore, it is easy to focus on my education or work. On the other hand, in America, you have to do everything by yourself Because only the rich people afford to hire a maid. It is not like most people think outside America that you get a lot of free stuff in the state. There are privileges in America, but you have to work hard to get them. Therefore, I had a hard time to continue my education the first three years because I had a lot of bills to pays and sent money to my family. Moving to America shows me a new way of life. Second, moving to America expand my Knowledge about the world. I grow up

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