Autobiography

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My name is John doe, im 35 years old and was raised in Texas Texas. I have one older brother, one younger brother, and one younger sister. Both of my parents are in the medical field as my mother is a regerstered Nurse and my father is a physoligest.

I attended High School in Texas Texas where i was a varsity athlete all four years. I played Football, Basketball, Track & Field, and weight lifting over the summertime. During that time i was awarded student of the year two years in a row in Cabinetry 1&2, I was 6A defensive player of the week for three consecutive weeks in football, and awarded 6A all conference Defensive End my senior year.

Directly after high school i enlisted into the United States Marine Corps where i got my Diesel Certification working as an Amphibious Assault Vehicle Technician. During that time i managed to achieve the rank of Sergeant far before a majority of my piers, I was awarded my brown belt in the Marine Corps Martial arts Program, put in over 100 hours of volunteer community service at Toys for Tots, San Diego's Humanitarian Builders Blitz, Runathons, and 6 different Retirement homes where i would spend a weekend visiting with the elderly and just providing any assistance they may needed. during my 4 year enlistment i also Deployed to Japan, South Korea, and the Philippines.

I am seeking a Career and Lifestyle as a Texas State Trooper because i have a passion to continue a life of service to the country that I am so very proud to be a part of. I am a humble, yet competitive and driven individual with a level head, and possess the ability to work well under stressful conditions. I believe i have the intellectual skills needed to be successful as a Trooper for the Texas Highway Patrol.


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My name is John Doe; I am 35 years old born and raised in Texas, Texas, United States. I have
two brothers and a sister. Both of my parents are in the medical field; my mother is a Registered
Nurse while my father is a physiologist.
I attended High School in Texas, Texas where I participated in University Athletic Club
throughout my four-yea...


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