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Running head: DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
Drug Addiction in the United States
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ENG102 – English Composition II
Colorado State University – Global Campus
Dr. Barbara Ciccarelli
January 28, 2018
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DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
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Drug Addiction in the United States
While the War on Drugs in the United States is noble, it has done very little to curtail the
use and abuse of both illicit and prescription drugs leading to a rise in drug addiction. In the last
ten years, the United States holds a record for the highest number of most common health
problems that can be traced to the rise in drug and substance abuse in the country. The use of
drugs can lead to an increase of social issues like dropping out of school, unemployment,
domestic violence, and accidents to mention but a few, which participates significantly to the
moral decay in society. A multifaceted approach is necessary for prevention through guidance
and counseling, rehabilitation, medication, and approaches in psychological prevention. Some
would also argue that drug addiction can be prevented through policy intervention, while others
contend that cognitive-behavioral therapy can prevent initial addiction or limit cases of relapse.
Problem
There are a few ways the United States government can use to help reduce the number
drug abuse cases in the country. In 2002, alcohol and marijuana became the top two most
common drugs abused according to research presented by the National Survey on Drug Use and
Health (Boles, 2003). The study shows that roughly 6.8% of the population over the age of
sixteen are dependent on both marijuana and alcohol daily. The research also indicates that these
two drugs are easily abused due to being readily available irrespective to age; the overall low
cost compared to other commonly abused drugs, such as heroin or cocaine, also contributes to
being a drug of choice for most abusers.
Cause
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There are a multitude of reasons that individuals become addicted to illicit or legal drugs.
Neisewander et al (2012) contend that early childhood stressors, isolation, inadequate family
structure, or peer-pressure are the most common factors that cause youth to try drugs (p. 34).
Duncan (2012) took it further explaining that certain psychiatric disorders could trigger a
“genetic predisposition” that increases the chances of the individual to abuse drugs (p. 7). More
studies are being conducted to explain why certain individuals are able to use drugs
recreationally without adverse side effects and others are effected greatly to the point of abusing
different substances.
Solution
To successfully reduce the number of drug abuse cases, all or a combination of the
following actions need to take place;
Guidance and Counseling
There seems to be a compelling reason to argue that counseling is an essential part of
drug addiction treatment for most addicts. Counseling of drug addicts is, therefore, a
fundamental part of addiction treatment programs in rehabilitation centers worldwide. The
counselors employ various frameworks and approaches to help build a trustworthy relationship
with their patients. Additionally, they offer resources as well as the support necessary for the
patients on their way to addiction recovery. Moreover, the counselors’ approaches are nonjudgmental and thus, establishing a therapeutic alliance with his or her patients for easy
communication. Therefore, on the basis of evidence currently available, it seems fair to suggest
that drug addicts are able to identify and be ready to work through their interpersonal issues as
well as feel very comfortable discussing his or her experiences with drugs (Duncan, 2012).
Rehabilitation
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There is overwhelming evidence for the notion that rehabilitation is one of the best
approaches to treating drug addiction (Zhou et al., 2016). However, treating drug addiction may
not be easy because it is a chronic illness in which rehabilitation aims at helping addicts identify
what might have triggered them into using drugs so as to develop new, healthy ways of living.
During rehabilitation, patients undergo a number of processes which may include
psychoeducation, family therapy, particular behavioral therapies as well as group therapy.
Arguably, these approaches are used to help minimize chances of relapse by patients.
Creation of Awareness and Advocacy
People become addicted to alcohol due to lack of information on the appropriate
approaches at reducing over-reliance on alcohol within the community. Understanding the
burden of being an alcoholic can force an individual to see the urgency and need for changes in
behavior that will help improve their health. The primary objective of advocacy and creation of
awareness is to inculcate behavior changes in perpetual addicts. Additionally, it is in the interest
of advocacy groups to encourage desirable social behaviors among alcohol drinkers. Behavior
change remains an integral part of psychological intervention for reducing alcohol addiction.
Other psychosocial approaches include cognitive functioning therapy and language competency
(Motlagh et al., 2016).
DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
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References
Boles, S. M., & Miotto, K. (2003). “Substance abuse and violence: A review of the literature.”
Aggression and violent behavior, 8(2), 155-174.
Duncan, J. R. (2012). Current Perspectives on the Neurobiology of Drug Addiction: A Focus on
Genetics and Factors Regulating Gene Expression. ISRN Neurology, 2012.
doi:10.5402/2012/972607
Motlagh, F. E., Ibrahim, F., Rashid, R. A., Seghatoleslam, T., & Habil, H. (2016). Acupuncture
Therapy For Drug Addiction. Chinese Medicine, 11(1), 16.
Neisewander, J., Peartree, L., & Pentkowski, N. (2012). Emotional valence and context of social
influences on drug abuse-related behavior in animal models of social stress and prosocial
interaction. Psychopharmacology, 224(1), 33-56.
Zhou, Y., Zhao, M., Zhou, C., & Li, R. (2016). Sex Differences In Drug Addiction And
Response To Exercise Intervention: From Human To Animal Studies. Frontiers In
Neuroendocrinology, 40, 24-41. doi:10.1016/j.yfrne.2015.07.001
Running head: DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
Drug Addiction in the United States
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ENG102 – English Composition II
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January 28, 2018
1
DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
2
Drug Addiction in the United States
While the War on Drugs in the United States is noble, it has done very little to curtail the
use and abuse of both illicit and prescription drugs leading to a rise in drug addiction. In the last
ten years, the United States holds a record for the highest number of most common health
problems that can be traced to the rise in drug and substance abuse in the country. The use of
drugs can lead to an increase of social issues like dropping out of school, unemployment,
domestic violence, and accidents to mention but a few, which participates significantly to the
moral decay in society. A multifaceted approach is necessary for prevention through guidance
and counseling, rehabilitation, medication, and approaches in psychological prevention. Some
would also argue that drug addiction can be prevented through policy intervention, while others
contend that cognitive-behavioral therapy can prevent initial addiction or limit cases of relapse.
Problem
There are a few ways the United States government can use to help reduce the number
drug abuse cases in the country. In 2002, alcohol and marijuana became the top two most
common drugs abused according to research presented by the National Survey on Drug Use and
Health (Boles, 2003). The study shows that roughly 6.8% of the population over the age of
sixteen are dependent on both marijuana and alcohol daily. The research also indicates that these
two drugs are easily abused due to being readily available irrespective to age; the overall low
cost compared to other commonly abused drugs, such as heroin or cocaine, also contributes to
being a drug of choice for most abusers.
Cause
DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
3
There are a multitude of reasons that individuals become addicted to illicit or legal drugs.
Neisewander et al (2012) contend that early childhood stressors, isolation, inadequate family
structure, or peer-pressure are the most common factors that cause youth to try drugs (p. 34).
Duncan (2012) took it further explaining that certain psychiatric disorders could trigger a
“genetic predisposition” that increases the chances of the individual to abuse drugs (p. 7). More
studies are being conducted to explain why certain individuals are able to use drugs
recreationally without adverse side effects and others are effected greatly to the point of abusing
different substances.
Solution
To successfully reduce the number of drug abuse cases, all or a combination of the
following actions need to take place;
Guidance and Counseling
There seems to be a compelling reason to argue that counseling is an essential part of
drug addiction treatment for most addicts. Counseling of drug addicts is, therefore, a
fundamental part of addiction treatment programs in rehabilitation centers worldwide. The
counselors employ various frameworks and approaches to help build a trustworthy relationship
with their patients. Additionally, they offer resources as well as the support necessary for the
patients on their way to addiction recovery. Moreover, the counselors’ approaches are nonjudgmental and thus, establishing a therapeutic alliance with his or her patients for easy
communication. Therefore, on the basis of evidence currently available, it seems fair to suggest
that drug addicts are able to identify and be ready to work through their interpersonal issues as
well as feel very comfortable discussing his or her experiences with drugs (Duncan, 2012).
Rehabilitation
DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
4
There is overwhelming evidence for the notion that rehabilitation is one of the best
approaches to treating drug addiction (Zhou et al., 2016). However, treating drug addiction may
not be easy because it is a chronic illness in which rehabilitation aims at helping addicts identify
what might have triggered them into using drugs so as to develop new, healthy ways of living.
During rehabilitation, patients undergo a number of processes which may include
psychoeducation, family therapy, particular behavioral therapies as well as group therapy.
Arguably, these approaches are used to help minimize chances of relapse by patients.
Creation of Awareness and Advocacy
People become addicted to alcohol due to lack of information on the appropriate
approaches at reducing over-reliance on alcohol within the community. Understanding the
burden of being an alcoholic can force an individual to see the urgency and need for changes in
behavior that will help improve their health. The primary objective of advocacy and creation of
awareness is to inculcate behavior changes in perpetual addicts. Additionally, it is in the interest
of advocacy groups to encourage desirable social behaviors among alcohol drinkers. Behavior
change remains an integral part of psychological intervention for reducing alcohol addiction.
Other psychosocial approaches include cognitive functioning therapy and language competency
(Motlagh et al., 2016).
DRUG ADDICTION IN THE UNITED STATES
5
References
Boles, S. M., & Miotto, K. (2003). “Substance abuse and violence: A review of the literature.”
Aggression and violent behavior, 8(2), 155-174.
Duncan, J. R. (2012). Current Perspectives on the Neurobiology of Drug Addiction: A Focus on
Genetics and Factors Regulating Gene Expression. ISRN Neurology, 2012.
doi:10.5402/2012/972607
Motlagh, F. E., Ibrahim, F., Rashid, R. A., Seghatoleslam, T., & Habil, H. (2016). Acupuncture
Therapy For Drug Addiction. Chinese Medicine, 11(1), 16.
Neisewander, J., Peartree, L., & Pentkowski, N. (2012). Emotional valence and context of social
influences on drug abuse-related behavior in animal models of social stress and prosocial
interaction. Psychopharmacology, 224(1), 33-56.
Zhou, Y., Zhao, M., Zhou, C., & Li, R. (2016). Sex Differences In Drug Addiction And
Response To Exercise Intervention: From Human To Animal Studies. Frontiers In
Neuroendocrinology, 40, 24-41. doi:10.1016/j.yfrne.2015.07.001
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Drug Addiction in America: Annotated Bibliography
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ENG102: English Composition II
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February 4, 2018
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Drug Addiction in America: Annotated Bibliography
Working thesis statement: While the War on Drugs in the United States is noble, it has
done very little to curtail the use and abuse of both illicit and prescription drugs leading to a rise
in drug addiction. In the last ten years, the United States holds a record for the highest number
of most common health problems that can be traced to the rise in drug and substance abuse in the
country. The use of drugs can lead to an increase of social issues like dropping out of school,
unemployment, domestic violence, and accidents to mention but a few, which participates
significantly to the moral decay in society. A multifaceted approach is necessary for prevention
through guidance and counseling, rehabilitation, medication, and approaches in psychological
prevention. Some would also argue that drug addiction can be prevented through policy
intervention, while others contend that cognitive-behavioral therapy can prevent initial addiction
or limit cases of relapse.
Everitt, B. J., & Robbins, T. W. (2013). From the ventral to the dorsal striatum: developing
views of their roles in drug addiction. Neuroscience & Behavioral Reviews, 37(9), 19461954.
Summary of article: The article focuses on the views which are developed through the
role of drug addiction from the point of voluntary use to the habitual transition into the
compulsive use. Further, the authors describe the changes which are based on the striatal
control exposed through drug-seeking behavior which expresses the functional
heterogeneity in the use of harmful drugs. Moreover, the article also explains the
hypothesis gathered from the data obtained on the level of the emergence of the
compulsive seeking of drugs. This is because the result found establishes the reflection
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in the shift to the dorsal control of striatal over the behavior as well as the impaired
inhibitory control mechanical processes.
Assessment of article: This article was published in the Neuroscience and Behavioral
Review and Science Direct. Sound research is verified / validated by countless other
studies by peers within the same field.
Reflection on article: Based on the research in this article, I can claim the enumeration
of the voluntary to the compulsive use of drugs and the effects of impulsivity. Besides, it
highlights the behavior of addiction involved in the development of seeking drug habits
within the affected individuals.
Dart, R. C., Surratt, H. L., Cicero, T. J., Parrino, M. W., Severtson, S. G., Bucher-Bartelson, B.,
& Green, J. L. (2015). Trends in opioid analgesic abuse and mortality in the United
States. New England Journal of Medicine, 372(3), 241-248.
doi:10.1056/NEJMsa1406143
Summary of article: This article describes the trends that have been practiced in the use
of prescription of the medication of opioid and the results obtained in the United States over the
past two decades. As a result, it has involved various stakeholders in this field which have
included the federal and state governments, the local authorities and the association of the private
partners in the economy of the country. Several methods have been used to explain the trend
which has existed in the past decade. Some of these techniques which have been applied include
the research abuse, surveillance of addiction-related issues as well as the diversions of drug
addiction. The description of the process involved in determining the trend was formulated on
products which consisted of morphine, fentanyl, hydromorphone, oxycodone among others. The
DRUG ADDICTION IN AMERICA: ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY
data were obtained from college students, prison centers, investigators of drug diversion and the
centers for treatment of substance abuse.
Assessment of article: This article was published in The New England Journal of
Medicine by numerous medical doctors and doctoral researchers. Sound research is
verified / validated by countless other studies by peers within the same field.
Reflection on article: This article is vital in explaining the relevant percentage of the
affected individuals within the society and possible measure to take in solving the
problem. This is because the results of the research done establish the right number of
increase of people who have substantially highlighted the plight being faced.
Nonetheless, the existence of post marketing surveillance shows the possible diversion
and drug abuse which exist from the production of the end supply of these drugs.
Dean, A. C., Groman, S. M., Morales, A. M., & London, E. D. (2013). An Evaluation of the
Evidence that Methamphetamine Abuse Causes Cognitive Decline in
Humans. Neuropsychopharmacology, 38(2), 259-274. doi:10.1038/npp.2012.179
Summary of article: This article explains the evaluation and causes of one of the drugs
abused around the world. Methamphetamine is recognized as one of the most common illicit
substances being abused. The abuse of this drug has been related to the reduction of cognitive
functions which exist across various domains. The research outlined in the article is used to
determine and evaluate multiple hypotheses which are about cross-sectional human studies.
Additionally, studies on the cognitive changes from the abstinence of the drug, and the studies
made on the changes in the structure of the brain, as well as the ability to function with the
possibility to abstain. The result found from the research suggest that the drug used as a sample
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for evaluation expressed some cognitive deficit observed since it is a condition known to the
drug users.
Assessment of article: The authors of this article are distinguished members of the
scientific community. The research was published for the American College of
Neuropsychopharmacology. The authors cite countless other studies that have been
completed in order to solidify their research.
Reflection on article: Based on the claim in this article I can distinguish the average
conditions of individuals abusing substances to be likely mild between the period of early
to the middle adulthood. This is because an evaluation of the drug establishes that the
societal and psychiatric problems with the tested drug indicate a cognitive deficit in the
usage.
Zhou, Y., Zhao, M., Zhou, C., & Li, R. (2016). Sex Differences In Drug Addiction And
Response To Exercise Intervention: From Human To Animal Studies. Frontiers In
Neuroendocrinology, 40, 24-41. doi:10.1016/j.yfrne.2015.07.001
Summary of article: This article explains the neurobiology associated with drug
addiction and how drug addiction impacts the human nervous system. The article points out that
a common treatment for drug addiction is through the use of pharmacological treatment that
could potentially cause another addiction to yet another type of drug. The authors look at the
possibility of exercise in both prevention and rehabilitation due to sex and hormonal differences.
While men are more susceptible to drug addiction due to testosterone and stress, females are
more likely to start taking drugs as a form of self-medication and have a greater difficulty
detoxing and a greater chance of relapse. In animal studies, the use of exercise showed reduced
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withdraw symptoms after both voluntary and forced exercise regiments. The challenge is to test
and trial the impact of dopamine on testosterone and estrogen in the human body while blocking
receptors associated with the “reward network processing” that the body associates as a want or
need for the continuation of drug use. Rehabilitation through exercise is one of the best
approaches to treating drug addiction.
Assessment of article: The article comes from Frontiers in Neuroendocrinology and
Science Direct. The authors are all in the field of neurobiology with a focus on sports
science. This article is a good scholarly reference due to the fact that it is peer-reviewed
and it lays out alternative methods to both prevent and rehabilitate individuals afflicted
with drug addiction through the use of exercise. The main focus is to differentiate the
impact of such treatment based on gender.
Reflection on article: Based on this article, I can claim that addiction can be treated
through the use of exercise that is geared toward specific genders. This claim will help
support my argument for solution through treatment of drug addiction without the use of
pharmacological drugs/medication that could introduce another stimulate into the
equation. The use of exercise as prevention or rehabilitation aspect to drug addiction
could have a greater impact due to not introducing yet another pharmacological
ingredient (more specifically prescription drugs obtained from opioids)
Duncan, J. R. (2012). Current Perspectives on the Neurobiology of Drug Addiction: A Focus on
Genetics and Factors Regulating Gene Expression. ISRN Neurology, 2012.
doi:10.5402/2012/972607
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Summary of article: This article provides not only a basis of understanding for the cycle
of addiction that consists of four stages but a look into underlying biological factors that can lead
to drug addiction. This author states there are genetic, biological, and environmental factors that
lead some individuals toward addiction. While there is no specific gene that can be associated
with addiction, it is believed that mutation of certain genes increase an individual’s vulnerability
to addictive behaviors that is seen in families with a large group of addicts; it is estimated that
70% of risk of addictive behaviors is from heritable influences. Additionally, individuals with a
genetic predisposition or underlying psychiatric disorder (depression, stress, or anxiety) could act
as a trigger for increased risk of substance abuse.
Assessment of article: The article comes from the International Scholarly Research
Network. This article is a good scholarly reference due to the fact that it is peer-reviewed
and it explores the fact that some individuals may have a predisposition of being an
addict based on their genetic profile inherited from their parents (extended families).
Reflection on article: Based on this article, I can claim that addiction should be treated
as a disease that can be genetically inherited from biological parents (and their extended
families). This claim will help support my argument for both causation and possibly a
solution of addiction if enough research can be made to isolate and target those genes that
mutate over generations.
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